Webnovel Author: YourRaven - Fanfic&Novel Collection

YourRaven

1mth

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it will be a Holy War. billions will die

This was going to be a day to be remembered in Martian history when the Unification Wars began. Justinian opened his right hand and his Guardian Spear appeared in it. He slammed the butt of his spear down as the signal.

The Adeptus Custodes(DC)

Anime & Comics · A_Real_Werewolf234

YourRaven

3mth

Commented

not gonna lie. thats's one of the coldest lines I've ever read

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Raiden's Storm (ASOIAF)

Video Games · SovereignOfHeaven

YourRaven

4mth

Commented

1 for a reasonable harem

Harem Sect

Interdimensional Mercenary (SAS 4 Zombie Assault Fanfic)

Others · Daoist_KittyKat

YourRaven

4mth

Commented

[- Fire Spell, FIREBALL!]

Danmachi - Infinite Mana System!

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YourRaven

5mth

Commented

[Odin's Current Armor Set]

Destiny of Stars: End of Imaginary

Video Games · YourRaven

YourRaven

5mth

Replied to AcheronMain

I don't know if this is a sarcastic comment or an actual sincere recommendation. so I'll say this either way. I apologize if my comment to your review was taken as aggressive or confrontational, I sincerely Hope you a wonderful day. I appreciate your advice Thank you ☺️

Destiny of Stars: End of Imaginary

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YourRaven

5mth

Replied to AcheronMain

I see, thank you for pointing those out i will endeavor to try and improve upon those things. sad to say this but unfortunately most if not all the things you've read in Volume 2 is mostly my writing with barely any AI aside from sentence structure and having it expound on the world currently around Odin. I'll try and improve with the interactions my characters have. 👍🏼

Destiny of Stars: End of Imaginary

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YourRaven

5mth

Replied to AcheronMain

I would very much appreciate it, if instead of writing a review to call me out on using AI. you could instead write a comprehensive review on how I could make a better Fanfic.Thanks for the Review though 😃

Destiny of Stars: End of Imaginary

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YourRaven

5mth

Replied to AcheronMain

for the first 5 chapters i used AI to reconstruct the chapters I've already written to get a better sentence structure I stop using it after the first volume (HSR). As a fledgling Author the first few Chapters I've written are short and quite honestly weak in structure. that's why I've used such while i study and research on how to be a better writer. thank you for bringing it up👍

ch 0 2 Chapter 1

Destiny of Stars: End of Imaginary

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YourRaven

5mth

Replied to AcheronMain

Yes, That is how Welt got to HSR. but that's not the only way to get there hence why various things like the ones in Hertas Collection are from other Hoyoverse's games ie. Himekos broken weapon, windglider, and the crown from GGZ(i think).The Honkai in this AU was able to pierce through the Void between Universes to reach HSR however briefly that was.

He was, undoubtedly, in the Honkai Star Rail Universe, a realm of mystic technology and elemental forces he had only known through the screen of his gaming computer. A place where battles against Honkai beasts and threats to humanity were commonplace.

Destiny of Stars: End of Imaginary

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YourRaven

5mth

Replied to AcheronMain

The Mei and Kiana mentioned here are the Me and Kiana counterparts in HSR not from Honkai Impact that's why Bronya isn't present since she is still in Belobog. Earth isn't in the Honkai Star Rail universe there isn't any big faction that was made by Odin and His Gang it's just a rag tag group of people that want to fight for a good cause

He was, undoubtedly, in the Honkai Star Rail Universe, a realm of mystic technology and elemental forces he had only known through the screen of his gaming computer. A place where battles against Honkai beasts and threats to humanity were commonplace.

Destiny of Stars: End of Imaginary

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YourRaven

5mth

Replied to AcheronMain

yes, canonically Honkai ain't inherently Evil .and is not yet mentioned or present in the Honkai Star Rail. but this is an AU a fanfic with my own twist in it.

He was, undoubtedly, in the Honkai Star Rail Universe, a realm of mystic technology and elemental forces he had only known through the screen of his gaming computer. A place where battles against Honkai beasts and threats to humanity were commonplace.

Destiny of Stars: End of Imaginary

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YourRaven

5mth

Commented

[Shadowsong Gauntlets] Void 28 Resilience 28 Agility 20 Intelligence

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YourRaven

5mth

Replied to YourRaven

[Hand Cannon Images]

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YourRaven

5mth

Commented

[iL' Virtuosa] The engravings are silver instead Solar 140 Rpm 13 Shots in Magazine Precision Frame

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Destiny of Stars: End of Imaginary

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YourRaven

5mth

Commented

[iL' Carnifex] Silvery White in color instead of black like in the imageKinetic140Rpm13 Shots per magazineHigh Impact Frame

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Destiny of Stars: End of Imaginary

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YourRaven

5mth

Replied to Shuzai

Terror would imply he was Terrified. he wasn't entirely just confused on where he was. and was panicking from the sudden blinding light not knowing what to do.

As the darkness enveloped him, Odin felt a sensation unlike anything he'd ever experienced. It was as if reality itself was tearing apart, and he was caught in the maelstrom. Panic surged through him as he was engulfed by a blinding light.