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  • Dropped story v.0

    Dropped story v.0

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    This story's dropped!

  • Dropped story v.1

    Dropped story v.1

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    4.7

    This story's dropped!

  • Harem Queen of Lily

    Harem Queen of Lily

    Anime & Comics Harem Yuri

    "Harem King? You want to become Harem King without bang your harem members? Heh, better you watch out or I will steal your harem to be mine, because I will be Harem Queen! Only women is allowed to my harem!" Given a chance by some Random Goddess that introduce herself as Goddess of Women, she call herself Lily, and then she offers a chance to someone who's already filled the survey that being provided by her company; which is Divine Company. With the ability that she got and the chance she have, she will enjoy her new life without trouble and can relax with her harem in her laid-back lifestyle! Trouble come to her? She will blast them away! C'mon, you do not dare do that to me! P.S: This is trash and porn or sex story for real! Really bro, I'm not kidding and you can leave this if you're not like it. I'm not lying this time. -------------------------------------------------- Cover source: (https://twitter.com/ne_go_m/status/1131410340317519872?s=09) Please comment me, when you want me to take down the pictures. -------------------------------------------------- This is a work of fiction that draws heavily upon various anime. Please support the official release and know I claim no ownership or credit regarding the existence of pre-existing characters or content. -------------------------------------------------- Tags: Rape, Netori, Futanari, Lolicon, MILF, Slave-Harem, OP from the start, Ahegao, Godlike Protagonist, Lesbian, Cheating, Fan-Fiction, Lucky Protagonist, R-18, Polygamy ------------------------------------------------- Okay, I will use this lame excuse. English is not my native language and I'm from Indonesia, so expect the bad grammar as I already edit it with grammarly free version since I'm still student and not working to able affords such luxury. This applies to all my novels.

  • My Overpowered Loli Wife

    My Overpowered Loli Wife

    Anime & Comics Cheat Monogamy

    4.2

    Ophis! I love her very much! Rias? Akeno? Grayfia? Venelana? Yasaka? I don't care about that! Shoo, get away from me, you boring character! I don't need you to chase me with that harem bullshit! God, why you put me in this miseries?! What I have done to you to get this treatment! But, anyway, I will get perfect ending to win Ophis heart in her route! Wait for me, Ophis—I'll definitely make my wish and dream true! -------------------------------------------------- Cover source: (https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/highschooldxd/images/2/28/Ophis_with_blank_background_.jpeg/revision/latest?cb=20170129153347) Please comment me, when you want me to take down the pictures. -------------------------------------------------- This is a work of fiction that draws heavily upon the original source of High School DxD. Please support the official release and know I claim no ownership or credit regarding the existence of pre-existing characters or content. -------------------------------------------------- Okay, I will use this lame excuse. English is not my native language and I'm from Indonesia, so expect the bad grammar as I already edit it with grammarly free version since I'm still student and not working to able affords such luxury. This applies to all my novels. -------------------------------------------------- Tags: [Average-Looking Protagonist], [Cheats], [Crossover], [Dense Protagonist], [Devoted Love Interest], [Male Protagonist], [Hard-Working Protagonist], [Loli], [Otaku], [Overpowered Protagonist], [Protagonist Fall In Love First], [Strong Love Interest], [Slow Romance], [Weak to Strong], [World Travel]

  • Illogical Adventure of Player

    Illogical Adventure of Player

    Anime & Comics Cheat Anime Multiverse Game

    You want a tragic-type protagonist? Unfortunately, this isn't the one you're looking for. You want a cheater protagonist because System? This is maybe suits you and your taste. You want a protagonist that steal or cuck another harem protagonist? Come here! You want a sex scene? Just wait! But, did the story will be good? Don't know, you better read it if you want to know.

  • Webnovel/Qidian's Mistake

    Webnovel/Qidian's Mistake

    Anime & Comics

    Just a rant about Webnovel/Qidian system

  • Eternal Shota

    Eternal Shota

    Anime & Comics Harem R-18 OP-MC Sex

    I just died. Yeah, but apparently, god or goddess give me a second chance to have a good life with good ending. She's also give me a wish, how generous of her and I like that about her. This time, in my new life, I'll get a happy ending! Warn 1: Just for a test, the main focus of the update will be on fanfiction.net and if it well received, maybe I'll continue it and not fast Patreon: https://www.patreon.com/syrnzero Beta'ed by: strike445x Warn 2: This is trash story, so don't read and don't review if you don't like it. I don't want any asshole fill the comments or reviews section

  • Re:Alchemist

    Re:Alchemist

    Fantasy Harem Alchemy World Travel School Alchemist

    What would someone do if they could find out the secret? What will they do too, if you know the forbidden story? I do not know. The most appropriate answer is; We will not know. Story and secret, two opposite sides. Likewise, with Alchemy and Mana, they are two opposite sides - but they are still connected to each other. It's not like where the Magic and Science sides meet and bump into each other. ー those things will be known. Will be revealed little by little. A secret that will eventually become a story. A story that will be one of the foundations, for the world; that's the point of the story. Note: Expect bad grammar. Don't like don't read.

Moments

it's just for fun, calm down View More

godoftime: please no small dick please everything else was acceptable so why the small dick?

Eternal Shota · C3
1 month ago
calm down View More

Cheeky_Monkey: KILL THAT SMALL DICK CURSE, quite literally asking for a unsatisfactory sexual relationship for both the MC and woman

Eternal Shota · C3
1 month ago
sorry for the update isnt fast, because this story need to edited by editor View More

gurv0429: Thank you for the chapter happy you brought back on Webnovel. Hope you get more readers it a really enjoyable story hope you do not drop it.

Eternal Shota · C3
1 month ago
well, i do not care that much View More

PotatoKeeper: But you know no many like this kind of story' hooman.

Eternal Shota · C3
1 month ago
yeah, look like this person doesnt read the description in synopsis View More

HiikiNito: You should not mind these idiots. I think its great so far!^^

Eternal Shota
1 month ago
yep, that's why... nothing will make me to change it into other than shota, kawan View More

PotatoKeeper: Yeah but this your story' so you can do what ever you want hooman hehe

Eternal Shota · C3
1 month ago
if he break the shota's curse, the novel title wouldnt be eternal shota View More

PotatoKeeper: Its Shame for forever shota. It not like me looking for lemon here but it not logical for common people accept it. And it's not good for relationship if He is shota. Or maybe you can give him goal to break this curse. Because it annoying for hs accept is like some coward man. Man you have dream and grow up why are you accept be shota.

Eternal Shota · C3
1 month ago
lol, dont really care anyway, judging without read all of it is really stupid View More

mutekishifu: MC mc without dick, in sex story, really....
MC mc without dick, in sex story, really....
MC mc without dick, in sex story, really....
MC mc without dick, in sex story, really....
MC mc without dick, in sex story, really....
MC mc without dick, in sex story, really....

Eternal Shota
1 month ago
just hope im not lose motivation because some people like mutekishifu View More

Uchiha_Itachi007: Are you going to continue beyond ch6 or drop it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Eternal Shota
1 month ago
You know the send-people-back-to-their-past are happening at Yakitate Japan and somewhat in the Soma vs Jouichiro at the dorm the judges age are regression although it's just illusion View More

Wallabalooza: For some god awful reason this site censors the word t-e-n-s-i-o-n.

Food Wars: The Golden Hands
2 months ago
hahahaha, i laugh when it using gacha like i did in my overpowered loli wife View More
Travel of New God Through Dimension {High School DxD Arc}} · C2
2 months ago
slow update View More

HajimexYue: Did you drop this novel?

Re:Alchemist · C0
2 months ago
well... what do ya expect from junk food-like novel? he doing this just for the sake of patreon or money View More

Wallabalooza: The writer has a lot of issues and, honestly, doesn't feel ready to write stories in English yet. There are a -lot- of grammar issues, and massive perspective problems in every single chapter.

As for the story itself.. the self-insert is a fairly successful novel writer (yeaaahhhh.. no) who acts pretty unnaturally given his reincarnated situation; the reincarnated part of his character seems mostly glossed over and forgotten. He doesn't use it for anything, and the relationship with his sister is exactly the same as in canon, even though there is an older, completely different person in the body of this character.

In fact, all of the characters feel extremely unnatural as a whole. People who should have no concept of technology or anime or anything just pick up on it without explanation and act like it's the most normal thing in the world. Characters' thought processes are unbelievable at best.

Very clearly written in one sitting, putting thoughts into words and then isn't properly edited, and it makes it feel incoherent and is difficult to read.

It's often written like the writer assumes we know what he's thinking and why he's thinking it, and jumps two or three steps in the buildup and explanation, only to land on something that feels completely out of place as a result.

An example would be the different characters sending information over the phone. How? It's never explained. First off, how are these technologically stupid people just sending "magic" and "swordsplay" over a phone? How is he receiving it? It's never even explored or explained a little bit, but just taken completely for granted and passed over. It's absolutely ridiculous.

Then there's the ghosts. He brings them cakes, but when the girl tries to hug them, she passes through them? Are they solid or not? The logic of the story's world is completely screwed. Not to mention that the kids weren't actually used for anything at all other than getting every character to say "G-g-g-ghost!" like they're Scooby Doo and forcing an interaction with that one girl. Even the set up emotional reunion was completely ruined by them just disappearing the second they saw her, and nothing further was explored about it.

Not to mention how the character learns "swordplay" by.. getting a manual about it(? somehow it changes to paper from his phone?) and then swinging his sword the same way 1000 times, like that is supposed to teach him anything. When you know nothing about the sword, you have a thousand things to learn before you even start swinging that thing around. Your posture, movement, grip, etc. etc. You don't just go and start swinging a sword and become a swordsman, and even then, swinging just one way isn't going to make you any better at anything; it's so silly.

The protagonist starts talking about opening up a restaurant out of absolutely nowhere. Like, it wasn't built up in any way, and the writer clearly just wanted to do it for whatever reason, even if it made no sense in-universe. It was justified because the character "knew a guy with a restaurant" and that he would get recipes sent over. Like that solves more than one or two out of a thousand problems with opening up a restaurant, and prepares him for that chaos in any way whatsoever

These are a few examples, but already this soon in the story there are even more I could pull from, and I'm positive it will continue throughout the whole thing.

Basically, it feels like whoever writes this doesn't live in the real world. Their logic is completely off in so many ways. It really feels like the writer has gotten too deeply integrated in the universe of anime himself and has forgotten how actual people think, act and speak, and it really shows in the writing. Overall, it just comes off as disconnected and childish.

I don't know why this story is rated 4.6. Either the negative reviews are deleted or you guys just have insanely low standards. 2.4 was already generous for me.

For the writer: Work harder on your basics. Spend some time figuring out your English grammar and read some well-written, published stories to try and get a better feel for how to actually present a decent story. Your ideas aren't terrible, but your execution is very lacking; especially for someone clearly wanting to make money off of this. It takes a lot of hard work to get good at something, and writing is no different.

Good luck.

Sis-Con with Dimensional Chat Group
2 months ago
i wanna slap the mc because he is too narcisstic View More
Is It Wrong to Try to Pick Up Girls in SAO? · C1
2 months ago
This story are belongs to me and I just want to gain readers in webnovel tho, even though I already posted it on fanfiction View More

Daijena: If this story belongs to you only, then I have to say that I already saw this story somewhere on Webnovel while browsing. So either you already uploaded this once and rewrote/reuploaded it or someone stole your story.

Eternal Shota · C1
2 months ago
be sure to share it so it will be well known haha View More

gurv0429: Thank you for the chapter I read your story first on fan fiction can’t wait for you to update it soon

Eternal Shota · C1
2 months ago
Reading Status: C1
Many mistakes I have seen in there. First, the dialog format are very confusing. Don't use script dialog format, use the quotation instead, like this for example.

"Hi, I'm a normal person." said someone

or you can use light novel format like this. Often used.

"Hi, I'm abnormal."

He said it.

Also, the grammar and anything are bad enough. I can't understand what it saying. I'm not racist to grammar but if it bad, at least make it readable. View More
mahouka koukou no rettousei a dating system
3 months ago
Find with SyrnZero nickname View More

SnekyShiro: I can't find it....

My Overpowered Loli Wife · C1
3 months ago
Find by my new username View More

SnekyShiro: I can't find it....

My Overpowered Loli Wife · C1
3 months ago
Reading Status: C7
Honestly, I found the writing quality are really bad and amess at first and please don't forgot to edit the first few chapters. I can't understand it because there's also has a lot typos. View More
Best And Strongest Nobita Nobi
3 months ago
I'm quite busy with college, so I don't know how long View More

ClosedPervert: Sorry if bother but, How long you gonna update in fanfiction? Since it still 12 chapters there...

My Overpowered Loli Wife · C1
3 months ago
Sorry, did I offend you by any chance? View More

Alan_Paxton: Then **** off of to help
Bastard

My Overpowered Loli Wife · C1
3 months ago
True View More

RoyalDrake: Can't blame you honestly a person isn't the same after experiencing Webnovel comments looking forward to reading on FF have a nice day

My Overpowered Loli Wife · C1
3 months ago
Well, the good thing is FF can delete novel View More

ClosedPervert: Well, it's not like I'm not understand why you moved. But man, fanfiction net rather hard to follow ongoing good novel.

My Overpowered Loli Wife · C1
3 months ago
SyrnZero View More

Jack_9099: What your user name on FanFiction dot Net

My Overpowered Loli Wife · C1
3 months ago
You can check the comments for, maybe, every chapters and someone doesn't want my beta for free View More

NovelMonster: I mean you have a 4.2 star rating? How bad and frequent could it have been?

My Overpowered Loli Wife · C1
3 months ago
Already get used to wattpad but I'll try wattpad too... maybe. I mean, I use fanfiction dot net for years View More

Supreme_SagePotato: Why not wattpad? Fanfiction dot net makes it nearly impossible to find a good ongoing fanfic

My Overpowered Loli Wife · C1
3 months ago
I like all View More

TheDemonNazI: Oh I'm cool with that. Just wanted to know if you like children orrrr?...

My Overpowered Loli Wife · C0
4 months ago
Honestly? Maybe I am, but really... I didn't think about her child like body when I like her. I has fetish about long hair. View More

TheDemonNazI: Your not reaaaally a lolicon are you? I mean your attracted to HER not her child like body right? Please tell me attracted to ophis herself and not her current child like body(her,he,it?)

My Overpowered Loli Wife · C0
4 months ago
Honestly, already download and install it, I constantly use it too View More

RuberDF: I suggest downloading the app Grammarly(I think it was called) for your browser, it will help with your grammar immensely.

My Overpowered Loli Wife · C0
4 months ago
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