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Learn to demand the best, and fearlessly judge when something is bad or beyond the limits of a normal being, after all, every criticism, whether good or bad, will always serve as a guide or reference.

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you didn't read what I wrote, or are you pretending to be silly?, I clearly explained that he writes separate scenes as if there was a line between them, that is, to flow and have a continuous reading that you understand all the parts as one, you would need to integrate them. If you don't understand that, go to the big stool.
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it's a wish fulfillment, don't expect a script or plot.... it could even be good to spend time reading, but the writing work is terrible, very robotic, without fluid, like quick letters in medicine commercials, and the 'author', if you can call it that, assembles his chapters like a patchwork quilt, the chapter doesn't flow, it's all shredded, so much so that he separates everything by a line, because he can't make a work of 1 integrated chapter . So maybe you shouldn't waste your time, try about 10 chapters to see for yourself.
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