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each chapter makes me less enthusiastic, I know that many like it, but it is so bad to see an author make an elite killer fund for the main character, and end up with a girl with superficial monologues and emotional impulsive as a child.

in other chapters I saw people saying that they don't like systems that force mc, but look at that, I don't know if the author does it on purpose or his vision of a CEO is like that! practically a slave of the company, which has its intelligence behind electronic screens, and has low or missing emotions .... having the system changing it is practically a salvation, the guy is more a slave than an intern serving coffee / does everything.

So is he so influential? is this a mc or a naive robot? the father and grandmother's family business would be over with a guy like that.

giving up reading this, for the approach, this fear complex of women will be used constantly in interactions, honestly, in a world of cultivation, you waste time developing complexes so stupid in a mc, this is not 'personality building' or 'relief comical 'it is simply absurd that readers are tired.

well, you have your village wiped out, you are forced to cultivate to have a body that would allow your kidnapper to possess, after escaping it you are almost possessed again by an old soul. I ask what the limit of ignorance would take a person with these traumas who was smart enough to plot against his kidnapper, make the mistake of trusting random people without cause or action.

Honestly, despite the presentation of the MC that the author made, it doesn't look like it, it doesn't impose itself, a little cowardly, it doesn't have a leadership attitude or an attitude of moving forward and conquering. His phrase: 'I lie, manipulate and cheat. I don't like to lose, without going over the top. ' that was said by the MC, does not fit with that idiot there.

honestly, even for a slow progression story, this is very still, and furthermore, the author does not decide how to refer to the mc, or uses the proper name or the noun, alternating all the time sucks.

How boring ... we already know that the 'hero' class in the universe of web novels is a pain in the ass, the introduction is basic to any cheap fanfic, it's so boring that authors go on crtl + c, crtl + v, at least varied in the personality and quality of mc's.

how limited, so his potential is perhaps the second strongest ?, I won't even say how ridiculous those unattractive desires he asked for were. In the end you totally limited your mc.

Did all this naivety go with him until he was betrayed in the future, I kind of expected these girls to plot and steal everything from him, to learn to be more observant and cautious, this MC has so far shown himself as a scared sheep without an ounce of intelligence .

so far nothing makes sense in this story, the author is trying to make a suspense and launch a book about kyle's past ..... but hey .... how to keep reading this nonsense thing here, you are selling a glass of lemonade but only delivers the empty glass .... how uninteresting.

funny .... it took 3 chapters 'R18' to finish like this, first that it wasn't even r18, and another, it was a bad and poorly executed idea of ​​trying to make the mc look cool.

how to lose all audiences before starting a book ...... good example yours, erase the memory of the mc is to forget yourself, he is no longer him, forget everything bad, please, cultivation books force mc's to worse situations to strengthen mind and soul, that was just bad, because not starting soon with him being reborn, doing a bad prologue to those full of flaws is just stupid.