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What happened to all the privelleges of a core disciple

I really love this novel

Shjairuwiow dont Wang dave to fall behind but maybe iTs ineveitabke

Basically the motiVe of ‘true hero’ just disAPpears. THat Would honestly be really cool if yOu intRoduced sevelopemt to show him slowly frogetting things and getting caught up in areogance and prid and al thAt shit. (Omg i hate my Keyboard) but it doesnt. the plot feels overly rushed And a lot of Potential seems to be wasted. My roblem is tat if you were goingto contort the personality, Not onlydid tou not do it precsiey govonh an unclear image, his actions dont fit with the image. you made him a conceited prICk. and while o could inderstamd why hed be noce to mina. Hsi Behaviour is really inconsisent. 1.friend with mina friend with kendo friend with momo, But looks down on eveyone wlse making horrid and condescending comments? Wouldnt this soari some tension in his alreAdy esTablished friendships? I dont see why he wouldnt like pssiohate charcters like lida and midoriyA when mina is iterakly a ballof energy. He forms prejuDice Super Easily and hes a little prIck whos disrespectful to A bunch of peOle for no reason. this makes me Wonder Why he accomdatws Them. i onow tis happend to bakugi and all but kiroshima had to repeatedly break his defenses down before friendships could happen. there was literally no development with aiden. Like yes, be soft but wheres the development?? Without the progrEssion writen doWn id doubt someone like aiden would even deal or talk to them. id think he would Be more like todoroki, eg arogant aT the start. The plot just sees very controved and Unrealistic and i think itd be better if you slowed it down And took time to focus on the cahracter rather than the events. yes, just some Feedback and advice.

Cough, Post rumi aiden seems worse than dark star aiden. warp of originali ntentions and morals. becoming a prideful idiot. Losing all brain cells.

Thank you for, like Chen pu, giving the audience a satifying Ending

Hi autHor, I juSt stormed through your novel about xin ren. I was really sad when i found it you werent going to finsih it especially wiTh the big cliff. quite ironic isnt it? Since ipon ending the novel you literally talked about slAyers ahvung a huge Unsatifying end. i hope that maybe kne day you’ll get into it but for now ill gIve this One a chance. DoNt drop it~ 🥺

Willy wonka will be here to pick you up shortly