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😂😂

So using scissors that were on the counter, I started cutting my own hair.

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everybody watches anime now. It’s the “cool” thing to do 😂

Noah, on the other hand, was a typical teenager who was bullied at school, a chubby boy with many social difficulties, few friends, and whose only hobby was watching Japanese cartoons, which made it difficult for him to connect with people who didn't have the same hobby as him, including his own family, making him more isolated every day.

Gamer Superstar

Fantasy · NunuXD

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Immediately as he called her name, his arms wrapped around the maid, and he kissed her deeply, shocking Mu Xue as she was pressed against the bed, his tongue dominating hers!

Devouring Monarch: Rebirth of the Profane Phoenix

Fantasy · TheDragonSlayer

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this is one of the trending novels…?

ch 0 1 A Mob Characters Green Hat And Broken Heart!

Devouring Monarch: Rebirth of the Profane Phoenix

Fantasy · TheDragonSlayer

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such a hard read. the pacing of the paragraphs, the confusing changes in pov, the confusing story itself. Above all, the over dramatic ‘realism’ you’re trying to incorporate into your story. “how would some really act if they’d been put into someone else body?” Personally i hope i don’t act like a complete drooling, mindless idiot. I honestly don’t enjoy reading this type of jumbled “mystery” and i consider myself to be a fan of the mystery tag. This is an example of getting caught up into your own ideas and just spitting them out hoping it comes off as mysterious.

ch 0 5 Julien D. Evenus [4]

Advent of the Three Calamities

Fantasy · Entrail_JI

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disappointed. The mc is the worst aspect of this story. The world background is great and so is the power system so far but the mc has ruined it for me.

ch 20 Outer Convergence

The Martial Unity

Action · Lord_Streak

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It is a decent read but there a some problems. The mc is bland, when something happens that would excite anybody he shows no emotion. The only interesting characters are side ones who we only read about for one or two chapters and that’s it. Then we get to the part where webnovel has just become lazy and greedy. they post stories like this that are outdated in china(MTL) post it on here and make money off this without even going the extra mile to proof read and fix the mistakes. Then they shorten the time they want us to pay for chapters. They want all the money but don’t want to work for it. I’m seriously considering finding a better app for reading novels and if anybody knows some good ones and you happen to read this then give me some advice please.

All-rounder Artist

Urban · I am the fairest

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looks like 4 words to me

The colleague thought about it for quite some time, eventually shook his head, then decisively spat out four words, "Unprecedented!"

All-rounder Artist

Urban · I am the fairest

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why can’t there be a decent story without some young master or face slapping involved

"Oh, if it isn't the peasant warrior!"

Greatest Legacy of the Magus Universe

Fantasy · Esenel

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It could be a good read and it does start out okay but you can start see the numerous grammar mistakes as the chapters go by. To me it seems the author had no idea where the novel was going to go, how his mc’s personality would be and how the world back ground would pan out. The only thing he knew was to make his mc be an open pervert. We get no world back ground, no information on the mc before or after transmigration. The only world background we get is the power level, and that the world evolved and that’s it. The chapters themselves are about 6-7 pages which is extremely short and a page per chapter is just for all about the system info and his “stats.” My only advice for the author would be to Prepare more. Instead of going straight into making a novel with only an idea of a story it might be better to actually write notes, brainstorm some more and actually put time into your story. It’s obvious how little thought process was involved once your mc showed up. Good luck

I Regenerate 10,000 Times Faster

Fantasy · RagingArtPunk

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dropping. The story writing and grammar is not good enough to keep me interested. Good luck

ch 0 6 Ultimate Berserk Howl Vs The Horned Panther

I Regenerate 10,000 Times Faster

Fantasy · RagingArtPunk

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wonderful weird thing to say and grammar

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Chaos Devourer System

Action · Supreme_IQ

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wonderful grammar

His body was brutally disfigured with his entire arm torn off while all his armor had been ripped off him, with some part of his skull and ribs showing.

Chaos Devourer System

Action · Supreme_IQ

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wonderful grammar

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Chaos Devourer System

Action · Supreme_IQ

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wonderful grammar

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Chaos Devourer System

Action · Supreme_IQ

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this is why i hate systems smh

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Chaos Devourer System

Action · Supreme_IQ

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if it’s multiple transmigrated people then i’m out

ch 11 Rubick

Chef in the Apocalypse

Fantasy · leeroycgna

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humming a song doesn’t let know how good it is. In fact i don’t even know what song someone is humming most of the time even i know the song by heart.

Once Liu Shiqing had finished humming the tune, Li Ziran was the first to come back to her senses, her lively eyes sizing up Liu Shiqing non-stop. Zhang Songsheng came back to reality a moment later, his eyes dazed. He cursed, "Damn! That was even more enjoyable than watching video of Michael Jordan winning championships. Shiqing, quickly organize this song and send it to Fog City. If the Fog City Olympic Committee doesn't select this song as the theme of the 30th Olympic Games, I promise to carry a banner to protest in front of the committee building."