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Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos
4 months ago
He literally watches people torture women multiple times and watch them almost die multiple times but still completely lacks the resolve to be a fucking man. He's such a bad character. View More

LingDongxuan: Author ... I have to say. Although it was good every chapter ... it's just that it turned out to be a harem road!

I came to read because of the dungeon, equipment forge, recovery of torture caused in the past life and finally find the woman he loves! But as I said this became a path to large-scale harem!

Overall the writing, launch stability is great, the story was good up to 100 chapters, but over time the trip to the dungeon got rare! We hardly see combat with the monsters and after that that had to stay 3 months without entering there I stayed down! When Vahn entered that orb, I even thought I was going to learn Magic Erebea ... it just never happened ...

And he reincarnated there not only to recover from the trauma caused in the past, but want to protect himself, have to stay stronger than anyone, there is no logic to continue being weak not to protect everyone, although at some point he goes to others universes, at least make him cold and calculating, if they do not provoke me I do not kill them, but if they do I will kill them!

If you read Immortal Renegade, you will see how good this personality would be in Vahn, Wang Lin was once innocent but could still be strong base of innocence? Not

Okay, I already wrote something that did not have it here!

Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos
4 months ago

Intra_Cetum: 4 little kids, 1 mom, 2 elf, 1 cat girl, 2 parum, 4 godesses, teacher, familiar, 2 loki characters, asian chick, like 5 released slaves... and that's where I was when I quit. That was like 200-ish chapters in. Yeah, having over 20 characters that early in the story is way overdoing it. Most of these characters completely lack any sort of individuality or charm. So this review saying there are too many characters? Yeah, there's WAY too many fucking characters!

Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos
4 months ago
4 little kids, 1 mom, 2 elf, 1 cat girl, 2 parum, 4 godesses, teacher, familiar, 2 loki characters, asian chick, like 5 released slaves... and that's where I was when I quit. That was like 200-ish chapters in. Yeah, having over 20 characters that early in the story is way overdoing it. Most of these characters completely lack any sort of individuality or charm. So this review saying there are too many characters? Yeah, there's WAY too many fucking characters! View More

DarthVetar: At first I was good for the fights!
Character development: Ok

The reason for giving 2 star: Harém, are too many members in the harem!

Ok Vahn, it's a white paper! Even so, at every meeting with the girls, at least some of them were already members of the harem! It is all good to have presented visions of each one of them. But I do not think this justifies this harem!

System: I did not like it! It gives you the feeling that you're restricting MC! Well, not that he is, for he is not! That's all I feel!

Action and adventure: At first I was enjoying this, I know the purpose of this is the battle of Vahn's social life! But even so, if you can incorporate more of Action and Adventure into the future, it would be great!

Romance: None! At first, it is by the harem that it exists!

I wonder ... if it merged [Enkidu], the Emperor's Domain, and Vahn's blood, would it extinguish the Divinity of a God permanently?

Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos
4 months ago

Intra_Cetum: Seriously hate this author. If you hate your work being taken for granted, how do you think your reviewers feel when you DELETE THEIR REVIEWS AND POSTS!?!

Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos
4 months ago
Seriously hate this author. If you hate your work being taken for granted, how do you think your reviewers feel when you DELETE THEIR REVIEWS AND POSTS!?! View More

Moepop1: Writing Quality is top notch, really nice read.

Stability Of Updates are probably the best on this site, not going to lie. Fantastic job.

Not going to give credit where's it is not due, author only designed a couple characters fully.

World Background is danmachi.

As far as Story Development... every chapter after chapter 100 is him flirting with some girl with sprinkles of danmachi drama here and there.

I mean overall i still read 550 chapters of this book and it was a great binge but you can only read so many chapters of Mr.Hands

Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos
4 months ago
I'm still SHOCKED the author hasn't deleted some of these reviews since he literally deletes every new review that pops up. I guess old ones can't be justified to be deleted. Now he's just a trigger happy deleter who's a trash can. View More

despacitoh: This novel started as gem for me, really good fanfic and actually the first good danmachi fanfic tbh, the story is really good, the fight scene and progress is smooth, and author really have a great mind to make viewer heart goes roller coaster UNTIL 140++ chap where the romance start, dont get me wrong i love harem, but too much is gonna ruin the story for sure, atleast for me, suddenly the mc became s*x craze, and mostly he do is f**k, find new chick, lil bit progress, f**k again and repeat, tried to endure it till now, i give up this gem , its kinda sad to part ways, but cant stand it anymore, i wish your next work is great at this but more to development and story than harem hunting

Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos
4 months ago
Not sure why the author let this review stay, since he's an ignorant piece of **** who I've seen delete dozens of reviews and comments. Maybe he wants to keep one so he can look like he's not a dictator piece of **** who censors all the reviews ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ View More

lukereps: Started great, but when the Harem and overly detailed sexual stuff came...it was just 'meh' for me. It went downhill from there. Also, the story shifted from a more combat/skill honing story to a more slice of life kind.. Make up your mind author. You're over reaching, and you're failing miserably.

Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos
4 months ago
Author has deleted dozens of reviews that are negative about his book. Do not believe the positivity. Not sure why the author is allowed to remove reviews and comments. He's a farce. View More

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Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos
4 months ago
Author censors reviews, do not believe the high positive ratings you see. Not sure why the website allows for authors to do this ****. Disgusting. View More

Nier_Xue: Details.. I like all these details.. Thank you.. It helps me a lot... Keep up the good work.. I want inori!!!!! INORI!!!! Best!!!! MAKE MC VIST GUILTY CROWN, KICK SHU'S A$$!! HE DOESN'T DESERVE INORI!!! INORI..

Well i hope all these nonsene i sprouted above explaoins what kinda novel you are about to read..

Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos
4 months ago
Author deletes reviews and comments that criticize the novel. Only wants fluffy love letters in the comment section. Multiple people have said their posts were deleted, and I have commented on those posts so I know there are literally dozens of people the author is censoring. Disgusting. View More

ThomasDarkrose: Writing Quality: 5/5 - While there are occasional typos, ****y tiny grammatical errors or punctuation errors, they do not detract from the story in any way. The writing is excellent and just draws you in.
Stability of Updates: 5/5 - The author pumps out chapters like a madman all in order to feed the addicted souls he has created. 'Nuff said.
Story Development: 5/5 - The story starts with a nieve and broken main character, Vahn, and through interactions with the world and the characters in it, he grows. Vahn still has a lot of growing to do and I, personally, look forward to seeing the man that Vahn will grow into.
Character Design: 4/5 - I would love to give the author 5/5 stars just for the design of Vahn, but I prefer to be honest and forthright. Because this is a fan-fiction many of the main characters were already designed by the original author of DanMachi. That said, Einlion takes those pre-existing characters and completely makes them his own without violating the source material. While reading this story you will be hard pressed to find any reason to complain about the use of the pre-existing characters, their reactions, or their believability.
World Background: 4/5 - Again, I would love to make this 5/5 stars, but the story takes place in a pre-existing world. Just like the characters though, the world is not violated or discarded it is embraced and honored.

Fan-fictions are a tough genre to write in, you have to take a world and characters that already exist, and are loved, then make them your own while writing your own story. Einlion does this exceptionally well and is crafting an amazing story that follows a unique and amazing character. The only thing I could possibly complain about is that I found this novel now instead of a year from now, I can't binge read it nearly enough.
On a final note, if you are a fan of DanMachi, or anime in general, and looking for a story with a unique and entertaining main character than I strongly recommend reading this story.

Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos
4 months ago

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Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos
4 months ago
"intolerant towards those holding different opinions" is talking about yourself? Do you even understand what a bigot is? I can accept people having opinions that your novel is enjoyable to read. You're the bigot. View More

Einlion: It's interesting how all bigots think themselves reasonable.

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Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos
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Did the same to mine too. He's an ego-tripping bastard with no ability to take criticism, and partly I believe is censoring bad reviews not just because of his fragile sense of self worth. View More

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Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos
4 months ago

Cestarian: Getting top 5 on webnovel doesn't mean much, I haven't read this yet (I'm about to :D ) but you're competing about the low of the low here, garbage among garbage, you'll find better stuff on average even at places like royalroad lol (better yet, without all the bull**** qidian is pulling) and it's still practically never reaching the kind of quality expected from professional writers.

Instead of getting butthurt about a negative review, take away from it what you can. Guy didn't like SOMETHING related to a pace change in the story where it went from combat focus to slice of life focus that to him, was sudden. The guy pointed out something specific and actionable for you to consider, this is constructive feedback, and if you ever want to be a pro, you will consider such feedback everytime you get it, even if it isn't coated in honeyed words to make it easier for your digestion.

Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos
4 months ago

Player0709: This novel is really nice for the first 100 chapters but things start to slow down. Like a lot. Taking it in comparison, the first 50 chapters the MC spent a few months surviving but after chapter 100+, each 25 chapter only 1 day seem to pass. The timeline makes absolutely no sense. I appreciate the storyline but not only does it progress slowly, the MC is a regular annoying hero that helps not just 1, not just 2, but 10 too many people for the reason that they suffered some kind of trauma. This may sound cold-hearted but the MC does not realise that he is in a different world where it’s the “survival of the fittest”. Hence, his harem just gets larger and larger and the author has to write more just to include all the characters. Even then, some characters get pushed out of the frame such and welf and bete, appearing once or twice in 200 chapters.

Do keep in mind that we are in the first world so far....danmachi. What will happen when the MC moves on? The MC himself will probably get his “freedom” be another prison as he would probably be not willing to leave danmachi and his harem, making “the path” kind of meaningless since he would only be in one universe and not be travelling to other manga/anime/novels.

Overall, good read but the typical blind stupid naive idiotic hero surrounded by his harem. I actually hope that his entire harem dies just so he can move on to the next world and not worry about as much people as he did...

Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos
4 months ago

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Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos
4 months ago

Hvnly_EXP_Sect: I really liked the story for the first 120 chapters, to the point that I was hungry for more chapters and I didn't skip anything while reading through the chapters and I really enjoyed the character development as well as story development but after that story started shifting it gears completely to character development, I still enjoyed it quite alot and was waiting for the story to get back to dungeon exploration or some other major incident while enjoying the alternate titles at the end of every chapter, but that never came and I started to get a bit annoyed by the time I reached 240 chapter though I still pressed on due to my love for the novel. By the time I reached chapter 270 I started to skip quite a bit and after I reached 280 i even started to skip majority of the story and it became glaringly obvious that the fruit that I thought as something that was so sweet and juicy has become something that is bland and rubbery and I won't be able to savor it anymore.

Author, I really did love the story but I just can't seem to continue reading it anymore, I am sorry.

Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos
4 months ago

Saadido: "Endless Filler: Infinite Roadblocks"
It was perfect. A story about a child learning about the world, healing while bettering himself in all aspects. Now it's filler. Pure and utter sh*ty filler.

I realize that the author want's to drag this story out as it's a source of income, but he didn't have to do it in the most horrid of ways. Filler chapters infinite filler chapters for no reason.

The MC has access to a multiverse yet the author continues to prevent the MC from doing anything nor achieving anything at all. None of his goals have been fulfilled, he hasn't gotten more interesting. The author just added more needy people and now a pet woman-child for more filler. He even c*ckblock*d the MC 'cause the readers aren't allowed to have any fun at all.

The MC should be practicing forging yet we barely get any of that no "I got better here," no "I'm bad at this, I need to improve." No the author just says he's practicing without even showing results.

This is turning into a sh*tshow and I wanted to tell the author so he could fix it. Metaphor for the author: Stop purposefully riding your cr*p scooter on a pothole ridden busy road and start riding the sports car in your garage on the wide open spotless highway.

Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos
4 months ago

Patha: Just rename it Endless Impregnation Path: Infinite Harem Relationship Cosmos.
Seem very spot on. For any story-wise chapter there is 5 to 10 relationship drama with harem that author think helps bild his hero character. Vahn is no hero, every ounce of his strenght is there becouse it was basically gifted him from birth. Vahn was detained for his super blood is a heroic deed that got him over9000 carma and a super cheat, seems cool right? But he basicaly done nothing, its not like its his choice to save people with his blood or not, for what reason its his good carma, if so, doesnt that mean that every cattle out there will have amazing carma, they sacrifise lifes to feed us, dont you think?
There you go, we got emotionaly handicapped person with cheat pover as a hero and next 200+ chpt 80% time various girls(basically EVERY one in danmachi universe it seems) will shape him to be of some use.

Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos
4 months ago

AnActualLivingPoet: The story started out quite well, it was interesting, it had action, but it turned to sh*t at the 200 or so chapter mark.

I mean don't get me wrong, your writing quality and updates are still awesome, but the way you introduced the heroine's from Danmachi was in a word slutty.

They became generic Dating Sim gals on easy mode. They easily- no brainlessly fell for a pathetic guy who can "Emphatize" with them. In 3 mere months nonetheless. (F*ck! I can do that, hold my beer)

I won't go into anymore details about this as I've already read a few reviews that were more specific about this topic.

As for Vahn, I just plainly don't like him. You have great skills author, but Vahn is ****. He's just a cheap knock off of Bell. Without his plot armor "The path" he can't even compare. He's just a sad child that didn't know how to belong in the world, but somehow became a great socialite that could get every heroine(although braindead) to bed with only a few interactions.

Give an autistic person a chance to reincarnate as a normal one, then give him "The Path", a handsome face and a large dick. I guarantee he'll do a better job than this faggot.

Anyways,
Writing quality - 5

Stability in updates - 5

Story Development - 1 (because 7/10 chapters are more on Vahn's daily life flirting with who knows how many girls especially in the early chapters)

Character Design - 1 (You designed Vahn enough said)

World Background - 1 (Danmachi is a great world don't get me wrong, but it's nothing new. I already read about it in the original don't want to read the same thing here)

Overall : 2.6

Little advice bro, criticism isn't bad, you can learn and grow from them. But if you insist that everyone is wrong and you are right then you'll never be number 1.

Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos
4 months ago

LingDongxuan: Author ... I have to say. Although it was good every chapter ... it's just that it turned out to be a harem road!

I came to read because of the dungeon, equipment forge, recovery of torture caused in the past life and finally find the woman he loves! But as I said this became a path to large-scale harem!

Overall the writing, launch stability is great, the story was good up to 100 chapters, but over time the trip to the dungeon got rare! We hardly see combat with the monsters and after that that had to stay 3 months without entering there I stayed down! When Vahn entered that orb, I even thought I was going to learn Magic Erebea ... it just never happened ...

And he reincarnated there not only to recover from the trauma caused in the past, but want to protect himself, have to stay stronger than anyone, there is no logic to continue being weak not to protect everyone, although at some point he goes to others universes, at least make him cold and calculating, if they do not provoke me I do not kill them, but if they do I will kill them!

If you read Immortal Renegade, you will see how good this personality would be in Vahn, Wang Lin was once innocent but could still be strong base of innocence? Not

Okay, I already wrote something that did not have it here!

Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos
4 months ago

MoonLord: This story is one of my most favorites that I have ever read, from Royalroad to Webnovel, I've been reading stories for years. I've loved how this story showed me the gradual change in the MC, how his hard work made him grow stronger physically and mentally, however unfortunately, the story ended up following the usual harem template... I'm not saying that harem stories are bad, in fact I love a lot of stories like that, however when every character introduced is a romantic interest.. no, more like a sure fact that the character is immediately gonna join his harem... Because for some unknown reasons they immediately fall in love with him and act the same way as every girl that has feelings for him, relationships between the MC and the female characters are either Harem member, possible and future harem member and non-harem member, not a single friendly relation. The story quickly became bland. Also there's no friendship between the MC and any other Male character, in fact there's not a single interesting guy that the MC can befriend. The weird fact is how the female characters always end up falling in love with the MC in a matter of days, there's no developing and gradual romance in this story with the exception of veeerrrryyy few... I like some of the girls because of their personalities and gradual development, however for most of them, they just pop out like popcorns and the MC ACCEPTS every single girl that says "I Love You" as if they've had enough interactions to fall in love... and he can never say no. I love this story, this is why I'm frustrated with how it is developing. .. though I'll keep reading hoping that it'll get better, I'm just sad it developed that way.

Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos
4 months ago

DarthVetar: At first I was good for the fights!
Character development: Ok

The reason for giving 2 star: Harém, are too many members in the harem!

Ok Vahn, it's a white paper! Even so, at every meeting with the girls, at least some of them were already members of the harem! It is all good to have presented visions of each one of them. But I do not think this justifies this harem!

System: I did not like it! It gives you the feeling that you're restricting MC! Well, not that he is, for he is not! That's all I feel!

Action and adventure: At first I was enjoying this, I know the purpose of this is the battle of Vahn's social life! But even so, if you can incorporate more of Action and Adventure into the future, it would be great!

Romance: None! At first, it is by the harem that it exists!

I wonder ... if it merged [Enkidu], the Emperor's Domain, and Vahn's blood, would it extinguish the Divinity of a God permanently?

Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos
4 months ago

Moepop1: Writing Quality is top notch, really nice read.

Stability Of Updates are probably the best on this site, not going to lie. Fantastic job.

Not going to give credit where's it is not due, author only designed a couple characters fully.

World Background is danmachi.

As far as Story Development... every chapter after chapter 100 is him flirting with some girl with sprinkles of danmachi drama here and there.

I mean overall i still read 550 chapters of this book and it was a great binge but you can only read so many chapters of Mr.Hands

Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos
4 months ago

SorcererCat: I tired to leave a 3 star review like this a few days ago and it was Deleted. It is easy to have a HIGH review rate when you delete anything that isn't 5 stars. It is fine when it is a few girls but it is EVERY single girl in the story that is HOT for him. There are almost no normal girls or guys in the story. All but 2 of his entire guild (Familia) is made up of his Harem of girls that are chasing after him or sleeping with him.

Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos
4 months ago

Cupcake_Prince: Damn that sucks ! I’m glad I saw this ! Thanks for spreading the word !

Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos
4 months ago

despacitoh: This novel started as gem for me, really good fanfic and actually the first good danmachi fanfic tbh, the story is really good, the fight scene and progress is smooth, and author really have a great mind to make viewer heart goes roller coaster UNTIL 140++ chap where the romance start, dont get me wrong i love harem, but too much is gonna ruin the story for sure, atleast for me, suddenly the mc became s*x craze, and mostly he do is f**k, find new chick, lil bit progress, f**k again and repeat, tried to endure it till now, i give up this gem , its kinda sad to part ways, but cant stand it anymore, i wish your next work is great at this but more to development and story than harem hunting

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