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Same goes to you ^^

Your welcome ^^

Writing Quality is 4.3/5 from me since the way the author describes things were easy to understand and wouldn't be much problem unless you're such a picky grammar reader. The update's stability is five, considering how the author able to update many chapters on the same day. Looking at the way the story goes fairly smoothly and logically without any hint of awkward development, I guess 4.7 is not a bad rate for the story development. Here's the unique. The MC was a gambler, but unlike any other gambler, he is surprisingly the opposite of a bad gambler, a good gambler with family being the centre of his life. He was bold enough to leave his job/hobby as a gambler to make his family's relationship goes well. The MC's wife also quite mischievous and tend to prank MC and her son. There is this moment where the MC's wife also broke out in tears upon knowing the MC's source of money was entirely came from gambling. This shows how MC's wife is another human being and not an expressionless robot, unlike in some novels. The MC's son was designed like a child of his age. Full of curiosity, childish, and reckless. The author has described the world background perfectly at the start of the novel. Hence, 5 stars from me <3

Thanks!! Hopefully, you'd meet my next novel in near future, coz I really a critique reviewer like you to point out my mistakes so bad xD.

Hey I'm not that petty for deleting random review :y Yes yes, all your points are correct! Tbh, I did not think while creating this novel at the first time. The idea was popped out of nowhere and I make the story based on that. That's why I start to erase some ability and characters as I realized they are worthless in the first place *facepalm* Pleaase don't compare me with other decent author T_T, I'll be ashamed af. Anyway, thank you for sparing your time by reading this <3 Appreciate it mate!

Tbh, I recommend u to continue read my novel a week later. Im on my way editing most of my chaps. If you decide to resume ur reading now... uugh I cant guarantee you wouldn't be bbaffled or puking in cringe 😂😂

*Sigh* I also felt it either. But arghhh.. You know, I first creating this story without thinking and assuming it will just be another my trash story. So, I didn't have any outline about most of my chaps. It just pure an idea popped out of nowhere. Now, seeing my chaps already reached 68 and get tons of view, I realize the earlier chaps its kinda weird and had to edit it a few times. But you know, since its an earlier chaps, the chaps were required to connect with the later chaps. So, its hard for me to edit 😩 Unless I redo most of my chapter, and rewrite it, but thats impossible. Im sorry for dissapointing you 🙏🙏

Thank you for the review. I also wish my grammar would improve 😞😂