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That end was too funny loved it hahaha!!

Nice ending very cool

Nice ending very cool

Lol pretty good so far wasn't sure if I was gonna like it but you've hooked me so I'll stick around for a while keep up the good work 😉

Hopefully it's one of his limbs looking forward to his power up

Doing great so far pls continue also I'm wondering if he will ever be a fighter or will he just be sitting back from most hand to hand combat

Do's he find love or is he just going to be alone for the entire book cause that sad

Honestly I'm wondering if he will be tainted because she does something to him or because someone will do something to her n that makes him snap well it will be interesting to see the results

For some reason I really want the Adrian from the future to come back n see how she is now so maybe he could understand her n all the things she went through to become what she was in the future n maybe he would feel sorry for misunderstanding her at that time n try to protect her now n give her the freedom she truly desired lol thats how great this book n the writing is to make me crave for more thanks author for doing such a great job please continue hehe looking forward to more excitement

So like I'm wondering if people heal really fast in her world or is it just her cause she seems to hurt herself a lot n they are not light injuries U no but then she seems to be perfectly fine the next day or so??

Fuck hurry up n send the ML so he can take her away from that ass n give U some peace n quiet before to makes her come back

Lol that last part made me laugh so hard could U imagine his face hehe

Awesome chapter keep up the good work

Wonder who that old guy is wats his beef do's he no her? Why he want to kill her straight up

Trippy!!!!

Would have been cool if she could have traveled to 99 different worlds n learns a whole bunch of different stuff her own world has never seen before U no like in the novel (Phoenix destiny)

Lol love the story so far keep at it

Will the baby be back somehow I really want him to have a pet so he is not so sad anymore