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Sis down, Mom next? Great job

jealous younger sister syndrome

seal the deal with mom before her lonesome trip, and spend some "quality time" with the sis while mom away

Almost time to take mom and big sis! Keep it up

I would agree that we don't know the extent of her feelings for him, but she does say "Let's hurry up here. I missed him so much" and that she can't wait to see the sole warmth in here life. If that is meant to be or develop into something more than platonic is left to be seen. But my earlier comment wasn't based off of her being introduced or knowing her feelings yet, just like some of the other's mentioned previously.

she has been vaguely introduced at the end of Chapter 39 (the previous chapter)

Will he be able to jump into the 4th dimension and mess with time like in Interstellar?

don't count out his cousin either, he is the Sol warmth in her life

since he is using his knowledge from Earth, and that is how is making fog, boiling water, plant magic, etc. can't he use blue fire or increase the temp of the fire while thinking of other things burning like gas? The elves and everyone else in his current world should only know the equivalent of wood burning right?

I understand that he doesn't want to reveal his name to a lot of people yet, and Su Yun being one of them makes sense for now. But doesn't Jiang Mei already know his name? She has alternated calling Xiao Fang and Da Long about every chapter she is in, and if she is truly his woman, shouldn't she know who he really is?

great job, keep it up Daily training other than pushups etc could be mentioned, more about the world in general. Beginning the process of conquering the twins, and completing the conquest of the teacher. You kind of just dropped her out of the story after *** with her, more development of their relationship together would be nice. Along with training, maybe a hunting trip in the woods to gain more battle experience and get stronger would be a good direction.

I hope Millia doesn't turn out to be a spy. That would be a huge bummer. Keep up the good work

Is it possible to write on a word doc then copy and paste into webnovel? I'm not sure, but you could save your work that way. Keep up the great work, looking forward to the next chapter