Webnovel Author: melancholy_sins0 - Novel Collection

OOo, that sounds good :O

Hehe >:D

Who came from the manhwa? :DDD .........................................................................................................................................

WAIT. WAIT BEFORE YOU START HATING ME; let me say that I am not a romance lover. However, despite that fact, I loved the story in the beginning. But, as the story progressed, the things I liked started to disappear, so... It's really about preference. You should try the story though :D

I FINALLLYY FOUND YOUUUUUUU PLEEASE OH PleEase Don't GEt COntrActEd beFore I finIsh You. i DOn'T wAnNA gO BRokeE. Actually though, Author... I wouldn't mind if you got contracted. I'll support you with my measly, daily power stones. -Thumbs up- Your writing's just my style :D Don't feel pressured though. I'd like anything you'd put on, so don't feel pressured. :DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDd

Good day. I thought I'd write a review, while I cry over my 2 fast passes, and inability to catch up to the recent chapters. The story starts off pretty "cliché," you'll especially feel that way if you've been a long-term Wuxia novel, or y' know; Chinese translated novels, starring a reincarnated woman. To be frank, due to my uncanny bias to "new" "story plots," I was a little put off in the beginning, and wasn't really pulled in until the 16th chapter. If you're wondering, I've never read any of the author's works (mainly because I don't want to go broke), so this was a new experience. After all, things do become bleaker with each glance, right? If you're wondering on whether to read it or not, you probably should. It doesn't have a lot of detail, but it still works. Oh, when I mean by a lot, I mean Crime and Punishment detail, or War and Peace detail; where the explanation of someone's thoughts go for 10 pages. Yeah... But, I gotta say, the writing does remind me a little of Wattpad fanfictions. It's not like; "Christian had green, emerald eyes, and the most kissable lips that enticed you with each look." Not in that way, just really catchy? Y' know, "worry worm." You don't really get a feeling of what the characters look like, until the later chapters. Before then, you're just going to have to imagine how they look like. BUT. BUT. It works that way (I have no idea how the author did it). Oh, one of the things I should probably include is that, character development seems to be something that will be a HUGEE factor in the story. However, it looks like the author's too strong, so even if you hate the genre, we'll all go broke under her/his/it's hands. :D I'm sorry if it's a little cluttered, but I hope you get the idea. (Let's go broke together :D).

The ratings come down to preference, and perspective, so don't be discouraged by my ratings. But, to make it clear, my ratings of "5 stars" mean that I literally cannot find anything wrong with it. First impression (based on first chapter): The writing style is really similar to S.E Hinton; the simplicity is all you need to "form" a visualized voice of the narrator, and it's never too lacking. Oh, just a heads up, it's not a standard translated novel, with systems, cultivation. It seems to be a romance novel, from the 21st century (I'm assuming). Wattpad fanfiction vibes, is what I'm getting. :D P.S, missing periods are there, and there. After reading all chapters (1-35): Thoughts: Chapter 2: WOOOO***W, who is that right there? Did you really- NOOO. I knew it. Dave was always a bastard. Chapter 3: Trish seems like that crazy girl, who everyone likes ngl. Chapter 4: WOOOWW, grey eyes has the perfect name. CHRISTIAN? YEAH, WHOOP GIRL. THIS IS SERIOUSLY GIVING ME FANFIC VIBES NOWWW. WHOOO, RAIN ON ME. Chapter 5: That's one good mother. Nobody likes two-faced, abusive ladies >:C Her world should end, not Ashley's D:< Chapter 6: Darn, I wished all guys chased me like Christian did. But honestly, Ashley's one tough girl. I would've been pushed to the edge with everything. Chapter 7: Hm... Trish's got that attitude~ I didn't think she was the type to react like that. Pumpkin's a real cute pet name. I'm kinda drooling over it lol. Chapter 8: OH, Trish was upset for an entire week? WOOWW. She must've trusted Ashley a BUNCh. Also, gO GIRRRL. ------------------------------------------------------------------------ YESS ASHLEY HONEY, DON'T LET THOSE REEKING HANDS TOUCH YOUR ARMS. WE DON'T LIKE CHEATING BASTARDS. ------------------------------------------------------------------------ Oh, my, lord. Is Christian... An... Overprotective... Guy? AHHHHH, MY WATTPADIAN SENSES ARE TINGLINGG. Chapter 9: I understand Trish, but honestly, I'd find it hard to even talk about it. Not to mention, Ashley's school life seems pretty messed up already. I definitely wouldn't be the type to poke into her business, especially considering all the other factors. Also. May Lily burn in a trash can, wrapped in rip-off satin ribbins (which are actually plastic), thrown into a pit of fire :D Chapter 10: Christian's confidence is everything lol. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------OHHHH MYYY LOOOORDDDDD DID- DID ASHLEY REALLY JUST? YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS GIRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL GOO GET YOUR- oH My LOrD. Chapter 11: I'm surprised Christian can tell she was having a panic attack. I don't even know what to say. Actually, I wonder how Ashley could even get unto a car in the first place. Chapter 12: SO that's why Christian knows. OHHH. Poor guy :C. Also, fibbling's a nice word. Chapter 13: Ashley's talking habits are adorable lol. The story's pretty realistic too :O. Chapter 14: She's going to get drunk isn't she? ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- Yes, she's drunk, and wow; she's witty. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- LOOKS LIKE IT'S NOT A RAPE STORYYY YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS. Chapter 15: My personal opinion, but I'm getting put off by the "we just wanna help you." Some people probably like that, but I don't really like having noses in my business lol. Chapter 16: YESS CHRISSLEEYYYY. I'm gonna stop here lol. My eyes are screaming from pain :__D So, I'm not double-checking ;D

I realized I have a grammar issue lol

I'm not even going to read beyond chapter 2 before giving a review, because that's just how good it is. Look. Character development, story development, and everything that makes a novel good, disregarding the actual storyline, is incredibly hard to do. Y' know what the author did? The beginning of the story provided more "flow" than my entire story will ever have. That's just how skilled I found it. In fact, I find it crazy that this novel hasn't exploded yet. Like many people have already said, there are just enough details that it doesn't ruin the "visualization" of the image the author directed through her/his/ it's words. But yet, it's so detailed at the same time, that it confuses me (guilty of over-detailing lol). Don't be discouraged by the large rating, nor the synopsis. Just read the darn chapter, and don't waste your time love. aNd If I SEe "yOu have gRAmMar iSsUEs. I WiLl suE YoU I'm kidding, I love you lol <3 You too author.