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Doublenile

1yr

Replied to H2Oz_Anxious

i read up to 56 and i disliked most of it. the cliche turn wasnt to my taste and tbh if i wanted something like that i have many many novels with cliche turns like that which are more my style. you did good though, if it wasnt for that cliche moment i think i could have gotten really into the novel, hope you continue and do well in the future chapters

Isekai Journey Of The Magic Archer

Fantasy · H2Oz_Anxious

Doublenile

1yr

Posted

overall it was decent. had a solid start with only a few minor cringe moments that where fine. unfortunatly at chapter 49 it changed. from the start it was quite a similar feeling to "The beginning after the end", but at chapter 49 it just straight copied with the only difference being the method of seperation from his parents. (btw copied losely, like it wasnt word for word but it was the near exact same situation and annoying cliche shit). I know authors like to add conflict and need to do it for the plot, but you actually dont. adding a forced section just for "plot" is dumb, 1 its cliche and personally pisses me off, but 2 if it went down the more pieceful route of actually completing the journey "plot" can still happen. Conflicts at the city, training against stronger and better people, etc. Writing quality was decent, a few mistakes and oddly worded sentences but nothing that majorly affected anything. Characters where decent, had a few laughs as well as a few cringe moments but not bad ones. Dynamic between parents was sometimes odd but overall they where better than the mc himself. World is good, explains the systems decently well and is intresting. The mc is fine, but not to my tastes massively. To me it was very unatural and weird that the moment he reincarnated he cried at having parents. like at least wait a few years for feelings to develop. He was also a little weird with his logic, like he would train to get stronger seemingly having novel knowledge but then gives himself a bunch of obvious red flags. he was also a little too childish for me, now i dont mind them having fun but he was too into the child roll for someone with his mental age. The only major problem i have with the story was the chapter 49 part. it ruined it, was unoriginal and boring, and personally would have much rather seen him be with his family and learning stuff their than useless and plot armour driven forced combat.

Isekai Journey Of The Magic Archer

Fantasy · H2Oz_Anxious

Doublenile

1yr

Commented

was good up till here, its just turning out to be a beginning after the end rip off, like why. its not only cliche like the title says but its a bad cliche that just ruins it. unfortunate it went down the predictable route of forcing conflict and likely going to replace any hard work or talent he has with plot armour.

ch 49 Cliché Tragedy

Isekai Journey Of The Magic Archer

Fantasy · H2Oz_Anxious

Doublenile

2yr

Replied to WillOblivionK

ive read some of those, like i might be a fake cultivator and chaotic sword god, i started library of heavens path but didnt get too into it. tbh novels like that would be quite hard to do a ff on, there are so many power levels and information that need to be taken in to acount with every step. they are also super long novels so planning ahead is super hard and tedius. i would be quite tempted by "bringing the farm to live in another world" or "Apothesis" since i really enjoyed them but large cultivations ones like that would require a lot of research and time since i would activly need to read the whole thing then constantly check back and forth and wiki and stuff. its a maybe but unlikely for those long ones, shorter ones like battle through the heavens are more likely.

Supreme Gods Memories within a Cultivation World

Eastern · Doublenile

Doublenile

2yr

Replied to WillOblivionK

so far ive done a "beginning after the end" tho thats on hold/dropped due to time. right now i'm doing a black clover one but its a personal thing i just chill on in free time and not something i plan to upload right now. i do really wanna do some cultivation ff's like "tales of demons and gods", "battle through the heavens", and some others but again that takes a lot of time. maybe in future i will do a cultivation ff, i would really like to do one

Supreme Gods Memories within a Cultivation World

Eastern · Doublenile

Doublenile

2yr

Replied to WillOblivionK

thx for review. i would also like to really continue this novel but time constraints r hard. there might be a chance for around Christmas/ winter as uni work lessens a lot then but would also depend on motivation since rn i'm kinda into doing ff's.

Supreme Gods Memories within a Cultivation World

Eastern · Doublenile

Doublenile

2yr

Replied to Guillhermo_De_Leon

yo dude, spamming doesnt make me just magically continue. i'm just really busy and aint got time to do novels right now. might continue, might not will depend on if i get enough free time to reliably do it.

Doublenile

2yr

Replied to ArthurCE10

yh he condensed his mana from when he didnt have a core yet. when he awakened, that condensed mana created his mana core. which i think was when he was 2. so its been around a year or something since then. dont forget he doesnt spend every second working on his mana, he splits time between, physical, training, enjoying his life as a child and then magic devopment.

His core is still in the black level so he meditates at least a few hours everyday and half of his 8 hours sleep every night. Even with only 4 hours sleep, because he can take in minimal amounts of Ki from the air, that is enough to reduce the fatigue to nothing and makes him feel fully rested.

The Horizon After the End

Anime & Comics · Doublenile

Doublenile

2yr

Replied to ArthurCE10

in the original? cause i made it up. it never really mentions there is ki, he only says that mana is similar to ki in his previous life. i added ki in this world myself and added to it and that it has these effects.

These past months I have been splitting my attention between developing my mana core but also sensing Ki in the air and within myself to minimally strengthen my body. Enough so that I should now be able to walk.'

The Horizon After the End

Anime & Comics · Doublenile

Doublenile

2yr

Replied to Ratisu

same, ive been struggling recently to read it. its just become quite average and taking on more and more cliche/standard stuff like the memories, stupid conflict's, the standard where people have been secretly cultivating. i'm also just tempted to drop, but drop in general. it started really good but just fallen off a lot since the dreams.

ch 513 Why Do You Reject My Existence?

Cultivation Online

Games · MyLittleBrother

Doublenile

2yr

Commented

standard, kinda disapointing. was hoping for a more original reveal or for Yuan to just be the only spirit master.

The old woman then leaned over his shoulders and whispered in a low voice that could only be heard by Yuan, "After all, we have managed to keep cultivation a secret from the rest of the world for many centuries…"

Cultivation Online

Games · MyLittleBrother

Doublenile

2yr

Replied to Zyes1

well personally i'm really bad at remembering names and so are a lot of people. like i dont know about you but i read at least 1 manhwa/manga per day, or contiunue reading one from previous day, then I also watch normally 1 anime per day and maybe a few chapters of a light novel. I feel its really unrealistic to be able to remember every characters name, especially when they arn't main cast and only appear every once in a while. For this situation I imagined it a bit similar except well, 1 he did all that before he died and 2 has already spent multiple years in this world never having refreshed his memory on names. like he needs to remember as many details about the world he can. Names are less important to try to remember than key locations and times. As such he didn't remember their names just what they do and when they do it, since thats more important.

There was the busty wind mage, the nice guy earth user, the spear guy, bow girl and dual blade girl. I completely forget their names since they aren't really present much in the manhwa so their names are forgettable.

The Horizon After the End

Anime & Comics · Doublenile

Doublenile

2yr

Replied to Sephtis_Azrael

doing it based off novel is so much extra effort compared to the manhwa, and its just more effort in general to read. i think the manhwa does more than enough for me to base it on.

The manhwa only got up to the academy arc, so that is my knowledge but also the mc's current knowledge. So after the academy he is in the dark to the future.

The Horizon After the End

Anime & Comics · Doublenile

Doublenile

2yr

Replied to BASTILLE

thx

so making this temp chap to tell people that this will be on hiatus for a little. obviously there is the chance i never come back but I hope to return. University is starting soon so have lots of work to do and need time to actually do the uni work during lectures. Hopefully i can return but if i feel my schedule is too much then i won't be. At the very least there is a high chance at like weekly chapters should i return, bascially how its been for a little while now.

The Horizon After the End

Anime & Comics · Doublenile

Doublenile

2yr

Replied to Sub_Mav

also soz about slow upload. i'm starting uni again soon so im very bust with getting acomodation ready while also keeping up on projects n stuff

The Horizon After the End

Anime & Comics · Doublenile

Doublenile

2yr

Replied to Sub_Mav

who the arrogant elf? yh I know he becomes chill but right now he ain't and unlike original I dont plan to make the two friends. more acquaintances but not at the level of friendship.

*crack* the sound of a bone snapping could be heard at Art clenched down on Feyrith's shin. Art then threw Feyrith back and at insane speeds his fist smashed Feyriths face sending him even further back.

The Horizon After the End

Anime & Comics · Doublenile

Doublenile

2yr

Replied to Sleay

umm, kinda. for now i will say yes, but i can't be sure i wont pick up again in the future, tho i might just start a new one instead since there where parts i didnt like in this one. so idk, yes and no but for now yes its dropped.

Another thing has changed, and that is the young man's body. The previously deathly pale skin and sickly aura around him was completely gone. The almost translucent skin was replaced by a deep jade like colour and skin that felt like silk and the aura was replaced by a calming envelope, like looking at one's grandparents. One that would make you forget all your troubles just by catching a glimpse of them.

Supreme Gods Memories within a Cultivation World

Eastern · Doublenile

Doublenile

2yr

Replied to Hiraeths

thx for feedback. I will take note. as for meeting Tess at academy, yh ot won't be like that at all.

ch 20 Monster Furnace

The Horizon After the End

Anime & Comics · Doublenile

Doublenile

2yr

Replied to LarryMurfen

this has been long dropped. soz, unlikely i will pick back up in future. might do a remake or a new one with monster mc, idk.

ch 0 7 Dropped

I'm a Centipede? (DROPPED!)

Games · Doublenile

Doublenile

2yr

Replied to Maximus1334

yup, i'm making it a common thing for most of my novels to have some relation to the truck-kun cult. kinda like a running joke kinda thing

An ominous atmosphere was created as the people on the ground started to chant at a not so quiet voice. "Praise be the lord, Truck-kun. May our brother live on within Truck-kun's embrace. Praise be the lord, Truck-kun. May our brother live on within Truck-kun's embrace. Praise be the Lord,Truck-Kun…"

Becoming a Demon God

Fantasy · Doublenile

Webnovel Author: Doublenile - Fanfic&Novel Collection

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Isekai Journey Of The Magic Archer

Isekai Journey Of The Magic Archer

Isekai Journey Of The Magic Archer

Supreme Gods Memories within a Cultivation World

Supreme Gods Memories within a Cultivation World

Supreme Gods Memories within a Cultivation World

Becoming a Demon God

The Horizon After the End

The Horizon After the End

Cultivation Online

Cultivation Online

The Horizon After the End

The Horizon After the End

The Horizon After the End

The Horizon After the End

The Horizon After the End

Supreme Gods Memories within a Cultivation World

The Horizon After the End

I'm a Centipede? (DROPPED!)

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