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TatsuyaShiiba

TatsuyaShiiba

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2019-07-18 Joined Global

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TatsuyaShiiba
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Your, ponctuation is, horrible, man.😂 Seriously though, You're over-ponctuating and my brain gets all messed up while reading the sentences.
TatsuyaShiiba
TatsuyaShiiba
TatsuyaShiiba
TatsuyaShiiba
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I'm not surprised. Well, at least I tried...

After knowing this his Aunt May who got married to his lover after Ben's death throw him out of Home while saying he is useless now.

Marvel : Different Peter Parker

Marvel : Different Peter Parker

Movies · INSANE_GAMER

TatsuyaShiiba
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ii'm pretty sure more than 50% of your audience drops this novel because of this chapter( as I did a few days ago ), so I'd suggest you take more time to work on this chapter, or If you ddont want to mention his past, just make him suddenly wake up in his new life. The way you started it just shows that you weren't even trying, and if the very first chapter is just a summary ( and a very bad one at that ), it says a lot about how the next chapters' quality is going to be.
TatsuyaShiiba
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Severus is a 13-14 years old teenager. Dumbledore is a 100+ old, extremely powerful and wise. I hate FFs that portray him as a manipulative idiot. and to be frank with you, that is exactly what you've done here. nothing about this conversation felt natural, not that your grammar and vocabulary helped ( not that I really care, mind you, as its still somewhat acceptable), but the content was really out of place. It is wrong on so many levels it would take some time list them all. Now I understand you'd want to make your MC look smart and act cool. But it shouldn't come at the cost of other characters. Don't make them dumb just to make him look smart i mean. speaking of which, you've done the same with the marauders. James and Sirius were bullies, and I hate them very much. But they weren't exactly idiots. ( at least most of the time ) I mean James himself was a Transfiguration prodigy. But here they are acting with the maturity of a 6 years old.
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IIIIShameIIIIIII

IIIIShameIIIIIII

Movies · IIIShameIII

TatsuyaShiiba
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that's the author whispering things to you to guide you in his plot 👀
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IIIIShameIIIIIII

IIIIShameIIIIIII

Movies · IIIShameIII

TatsuyaShiiba
TatsuyaShiiba
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ah... a hero. Should've said so earlier.

Ever since he saw how Diana tried to protect him despite being in danger herself, his thoughts had been in disarray. He had always wanted to help people, but he never really had any power to do so in the past so he fell to biology, but now that he had the power to, he felt it would be a shame not to use them. And so, he decided he would help them.

Marvel: Mortal Ascension

Marvel: Mortal Ascension

Anime & Comics · SlyOW

TatsuyaShiiba
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min temp is -273 celsius ( absolute zero ). you cant go lower than that because of what the previous comments said.

I lowered the temperature on the collar to -300 degrees Celsius. That's below absolute zero. And when most metals are exposed to temperatures of such a degree in either range, they become quite brittle.

An Osmosian in Marvel (MCU Fanfiction)

An Osmosian in Marvel (MCU Fanfiction)

Anime & Comics · ArifuretaForever

TatsuyaShiiba
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Isn't she speaking japanese though? how can she pop the P :O

"Nope." Konan popped the 'p'. "She barely reached the middle of the wind zone but even that's already commendable for her age." She distractedly continued but when she saw Tsunade's reproaching look, she frowned. "What... don't give me that look! You are by far the most brutal out of the three of us." She said lazily, making Tsunade lower her head in embarrassment.

In Naruto: Reborn with Talent

In Naruto: Reborn with Talent

Anime & Comics · KasiCair

TatsuyaShiiba
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is this the blue flame from atg ? mix of fire and ice

Konan's eyes went wide as her mouth opened in 'O' when she saw what he decided to use. The blue flame was similar to mokuton! Merge between katon, suiton, and nature energy as the stabilizer!

In Naruto: Reborn with Talent

In Naruto: Reborn with Talent

Anime & Comics · KasiCair

TatsuyaShiiba
Replied to AS9
ikr, iits as if everyone in that world is dumb except for the mc. If they're doing it, there is a very good reason for it.

Alas, they never learned Jutsu for that reason. They refused to learn hand signs. They knew that once they fix it in their brain that they need hand signs and learn to instinctively mold chakra according to them, it would be hard to unlearn it. No matter how big of a crutch they were. Rei could compare them to a wand for wizards in Potterverse. It was easy to learn them and their bodies got quickly used to them. But it was insanely hard to start molding the chakra consciously on your own once you did get used to them.

In Naruto: Reborn with Talent

In Naruto: Reborn with Talent

Anime & Comics · KasiCair

TatsuyaShiiba
Replied to Acsmaster007
I will in a few days, actually xD I know I've been delaying this, but I had my reasons, sorry :3

"You mean their target was among the spectators?" she said with wide eyes. That was ridiculous. What kind of idiot would hide there among students, with a horde of dementors after him. She knew he was innocent of 'betraying the potters', so it didn't make much sense. Unless he was that kind of idiot that would endanger hundreds of helpless students just to see his 'godson' play Quidditch.

Ascension: The Rise of the Crimson Wizard

Ascension: The Rise of the Crimson Wizard

Book&Literature · TatsuyaShiiba

TatsuyaShiiba
Replied to IAmNumber5
It's irrelevant as you are reading a fanfiction. I'm not sure the true reason they were there, but I think this makes sense for that particular event

"You mean their target was among the spectators?" she said with wide eyes. That was ridiculous. What kind of idiot would hide there among students, with a horde of dementors after him. She knew he was innocent of 'betraying the potters', so it didn't make much sense. Unless he was that kind of idiot that would endanger hundreds of helpless students just to see his 'godson' play Quidditch.

Ascension: The Rise of the Crimson Wizard

Ascension: The Rise of the Crimson Wizard

Book&Literature · TatsuyaShiiba

TatsuyaShiiba
Replied to Razish
I'm aware, but I'm avoiding the problem alltogether, i've found a solution to keep time travel reasonable

The next day, Kaiser woke up early in the morning unable to hold his excitement. He was about to learn how to do magic. MAGIC! That's a dream come true for anyone. For him however, it's not only about being able to do magic. It's the endless possibilities it opens. The broom is the best way to demonstrate this. In order to fly using normal means, it requires an exceedingly complex craft, based on many branches of science. Yet the wizards can somehow make brooms fly. Or apparition and portkeys, the ability to travel long distances instantly, like a wormhole. And time turners! Time travel! Saying he was excited is actually an understatement.

Ascension: The Rise of the Crimson Wizard

Ascension: The Rise of the Crimson Wizard

Book&Literature · TatsuyaShiiba

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