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Lewis_Dark

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Will offer unneeded and more importantly needed advice about grammar or spelling. I also offer what I consider cool ideas to your stories.

2019-07-24 Joined Global

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Lewis_Dark
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Wow! A palace made entirely of marbles!
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The palace was made up of red marbles since Punta loved the color red. The structure of the palace was made like a collection of several domes, and the Bisan Kingdom flag was on top of the tallest dome. The flag was also made up of red color with an angry ox in the center of it.

The First Store System

The First Store System

Fantasy · pinaka_

Lewis_Dark
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Of course he requested! There was a question mark after all.
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The First Store System

The First Store System

Fantasy · pinaka_

Lewis_Dark
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No reason for a question mark.
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The First Store System

The First Store System

Fantasy · pinaka_

Lewis_Dark
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The only way the suns would all rise and set at the same time acro every continent is that they move in a north or southward direction.

Unlike other planets, Visteerna operated differently. It had eleven suns in total, each representing a continent. They rose at the same time and set at the same time. So there was no day and night difference between the entire planet.

The First Store System

The First Store System

Fantasy · pinaka_

Lewis_Dark
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why a question mark?
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The First Store System

The First Store System

Fantasy · pinaka_

Lewis_Dark
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this definitely needs to be replaced with the infinity symbol!

[Host, your strength and agility are at 1. It tells that you are very weak in comparison with others. The -0- in stamina and intelligence shows that you don't need improvement in them anymore. You have infinite stamina and intelligence.]

The First Store System

The First Store System

Fantasy · pinaka_

Lewis_Dark
Commented
so I guess humanity never evolved.

The first race Aakesh learned about was Humans. Humanity is a species that originated on planet Earth around a quadrillion years ago. They have the same ancestor as apes; that's why they look similar to apes in body shape. They went on to conquer many planets, then galaxies, and then universes. They are still one of the weakest races in this Multiverse.

The First Store System

The First Store System

Fantasy · pinaka_

Lewis_Dark
Lewis_Dark
Commented
Milk, not water, idiot!
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The participants were surprised. They were allowed to drink water? It was known that drinking water could relieve the spicy taste. This was tantamount to lowering the difficulty of the challenge.

Gourmet of Another World

Gourmet of Another World

Eastern · Li Hongtian

Lewis_Dark
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Several thousand miles. Impossible when on a planet the size of earth. Plus, the cruise ship would have already been swallowed up. There is an authors exaggeration, then there is going to far.
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All of a sudden, the seawater began to spin, forming a huge whirlpool. That startled everyone, and they turned to look at it. As it spun, the whirlpool grew larger and larger, and at its center was a bottomless black hole. As the whirlpool grew bigger and bigger, the black hole also kept expanding. Gradually, the hole reached a diameter of several thousand miles.

Gourmet of Another World

Gourmet of Another World

Eastern · Li Hongtian

Lewis_Dark
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“So by jo means do not try to fight it.” What a contradictory sentence! Do they fight it or not?
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Yuthia was quick in returning after she went to get Sei. The two girls stood before Fox High God Methiesee awaiting his orders. "I want you two to descend to the mortal realm early and investigate what that pope is up to. Your powers will be bound to that of a demi god but I will also give you the ability to activate your normal powers if things get out of hand. Under no circumstances are you to enter any gates. If you come across a monster that you have never seen before, do not try to fight it head on. If I am right and I hope that I am wrong, the thing that the pope is engaged with is not something we can take lightly.  So by no means do not try to fight it. If you sense danger, get out of there quickly and guard your future aunt. Do you understand?"

Reborn As A Dragon Girl With A System

Reborn As A Dragon Girl With A System

Fantasy · invayne

Lewis_Dark
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At this time, an owl man with glasses walked down the hall. He stopped in front of a strange indent in the wall to see a squirrel boy stuck inside of it. "Student Freados, may I ask why you are lining the halls as a piece of artwork? Well… with your eyes rolled up in the back of your head, I guess you wouldn't be able to answer me anyway. I will just leave a note here for you as a friendly reminder to clean up and repair the wall when you're done with your art display." With that, the owl man stuck a note to the squirrel boy's forehead and walked into the classroom.

Reborn As A Dragon Girl With A System

Reborn As A Dragon Girl With A System

Fantasy · invayne

Lewis_Dark
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Weaning?

"Why clothes? I'm already weaning clothes." Kana asked. She did not see any issue with her current clothes. It was the same kind of clothes she met the king in on multiple occasions.

Reborn As A Dragon Girl With A System

Reborn As A Dragon Girl With A System

Fantasy · invayne

Lewis_Dark
Lewis_Dark
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Un. Yes. Which to use when writing in English .

"Un…" Elder Lan nodded, yet there was still a shred of doubt in her heart.

Dual Cultivation

Dual Cultivation

Eastern · MyLittleBrother

Lewis_Dark
Commented
Didn’t thay leave Su Yang?

Qi Yue sighed. She turned her head to look at Su Yang, who was still standing there quietly and calmly. "Senior apprentice-brother Su…" her face reddened at the sight of his face.

Dual Cultivation

Dual Cultivation

Eastern · MyLittleBrother

Lewis_Dark
Lewis_Dark
Replied to BeesBumble
Idiot. Is does not matter if it is a place or object. It is still Chinese.

Conti took a look at his roujiamo. The white bread was sliced open and stuffed with lean meat and fat. The name roujiamo[1] was quite accurate. He had never seen any bread like this before. It was so unique.

A Stay-at-home Dad's Restaurant In An Alternate World

A Stay-at-home Dad's Restaurant In An Alternate World

Fantasy · Whispering Jianghu

Lewis_Dark
Lewis_Dark
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Who wants to see the sister with a “gruff” voice?

According to his memories, this should be the voice of the little sister of this body, Lin Yue.

Cultivation Pet Shop

Cultivation Pet Shop

Eastern · DXHaseoXD

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