Webnovel Author: TheUnsuspicious - Novel&Fanfic Collection

TheUnsuspicious

4mth

Commented

the author probably uses Chatgpt to assist his writing. i can see it since i also uses it. nothing wrong with it though

"Yeah... I might be screwed up," Niel sneered, his expression cold and unsettling. He pressed on, undeterred. "But tell you what, I'm having the time of my life here. Trapped with the finest ladies from our university. And Denise," he added, his tone dripping with a sinister edge, "I can hardly wait to get a taste of you."

Surviving the Zombie Apocalypse With My Military System

Sci-fi · Faux1231

TheUnsuspicious

4mth

Replied to Death_012

not really, the title didnt say anything abt the System nor did the synopsis. so this review has been really helpful. good job OP, you save me from wasting my time. and you, the guy who complaint, it is our right to complaint abt a book, if we dont allows people to give negative review(which is not this one) then you might as well has no need for review. dont get mad when someone doesnt have the same taste as you.

Unlocking The Easy Mode Of Cultivation After Getting Married

Eastern · Faint Fragrance Of Red Beans

TheUnsuspicious

4mth

Replied to GifflarGod

the only reason you think cultivator is strong is bcs the author wants them to be stupidly strong without any basis or reasoning. i mean how could one person create a whole world out of nothing without breaking a sweat with pure Qi alone? how could one understand a whole book in just a second without flipping the whole book? cultivators seems strong bcs theres no proper theory supporting their power. they just are.you are comparing imagination with reality. you really think that's fair?

'I will remain a mortal and eliminate all cultivators, even if it's the last thing I do.'

Mortal's Insanity: Revenge Against Cultivators

Eastern · Fixten

TheUnsuspicious

4mth

Commented

it is not about who is allowed to kill or not. the purpose of law is to relief the victim from acting out their revenge. and although this may seem unfair for the individuals if it is not done properly. it is many times more beneficial when society has no one allowed to kill just bcs they are a victim.

No matter how righteous his reason, murder was still wrong.

Shocking the Whole Internet! You Are Not a Psychologist at All!

Urban · Netizen 13

TheUnsuspicious

4mth

Commented

Tck tck tck. these readers are just crybabies! they're just complaining cause they are jealous! Look at me, i can definitely relate myself w the MC, cause I'm also handsome to the max!🤣

However, a handsome young man closed his shop early amidst the busy street.

Shocking the Whole Internet! You Are Not a Psychologist at All!

Urban · Netizen 13

TheUnsuspicious

8mth

Commented

those that like scifi, i have a proposal for a scifi detector to share and i want you to tell me whether its acceptable or utter bs.TLDR: A photon-based sonar detector.the main idea is by directing the light to the empty void in a series, and that if the reflected photon ever get reflected back to the detector, that means the photon had just hit something and we can calculate its position using the red shift or the speed of light. the saving power mode is ofc to use the sunlight to minimize power usage. (just realize this is basically a sonar/echolocation lmao).if you are wondering if this is not just looking with a telescope like normal, the goal is not to get a complete picture of the area, it takes too much resources and computing power. instead the goal is for energy/computing efficient and for a quick way to detect anything abnormal. so if the light that was aimed at a known planet was reflected faster than expected. that means theres an unidentified object flying between the targeted planet and the detector. so this detector works best if you already have a map of the surrounding planet and know how far it takes for the light to return back to the detector (ofc the orbit of earth and the targeted planet are within calculation)

"These are all conventional technologies. Nothing high-tech about them."

People Found Out About The Base I Built On the Moon

Sci-fi · Silver Lining

TheUnsuspicious

8mth

Commented

ok i can stretch the age part. but position? how the actual f are you gng to determine its position with decay? all elements decay in the first place... i guess you could just detect the decay of all the surrounding elements and see if theres iregulari..... yea f it, this is dumb.

"Radiation Decay Detector: It can use the half-life to calculate the position and age of celestial bodies…[Technology Points required: 10]"

People Found Out About The Base I Built On the Moon

Sci-fi · Silver Lining

TheUnsuspicious

8mth

Replied to Jediknight

this is an actual alien pov. it seems their decision is to eliminate all potential civilization while in its infancy and not giving them a chance to develop the technological level that could threaten the alien's civilization.

"I hope we can encounter other civilizations and destroy one more. Then, we can return to our home planet…"

People Found Out About The Base I Built On the Moon

Sci-fi · Silver Lining

TheUnsuspicious

8mth

Commented

based on that logic, they couldnt stand a chance against a nation's military tech from 80 years ago. thats freakin sad honestly.

"Even if the extraterrestrials 'technology is one or two hundred years ahead of ours, they still can't do anything to negate the damage of nuclear weapons. That's how nuclear weapons have been like for the past eighty years, and it'll be the same for the next eighty years!"

People Found Out About The Base I Built On the Moon

Sci-fi · Silver Lining

TheUnsuspicious

8mth

Commented

lmao, this author is desperate in making the ehem ehem "certain" ehem nation look really violent and dumb. but i guess the more social credit the better, huh?

"Nuclear weapons are extremely powerful weapons that can destroy any civilisation…"

People Found Out About The Base I Built On the Moon

Sci-fi · Silver Lining

TheUnsuspicious

8mth

Commented

dumbest conclusion ever. you dont att something just bcs u know nothing of it. thats a very rash thing to do, and considering the information they already had only makes this worse. they clearly know that theres a 50 year gap at the very least. and 50 years gap in modern time is not the same with 100 years gap in medieval time. this is foolish. what they should have realize is the resources, moon has very little rss. so they should begin looking if the aliens are mining the asteroids or not. if not then negotiation is definitely a possibility. they just need to find a way to establish communucation and from then identify the aliens aggresion level. and not frkn go for a definite war route! how dumb can this author get?

"Stop beating around the bush," Thomas said. "Our proposal is to launch multiple rockets loaded with nuclear weapons and aim them at the center of the circle, eliminating the hidden alien base or spacecraft, whichever it may be.

People Found Out About The Base I Built On the Moon

Sci-fi · Silver Lining

TheUnsuspicious

8mth

Commented

*sniff* aah yes~~ my daily dose of propaganda *sniffffff*

"Don't use the one from Great Xia, It's the most complicated one, we should save it for last," said a third member.

People Found Out About The Base I Built On the Moon

Sci-fi · Silver Lining

TheUnsuspicious

8mth

Commented

this is actually very true unfortunately. that many people would not want to pay something of high quality if it is done way too fast. which ironically should have made it even more expensive.and it is such a widespread biased that companies had to intentionally fool the consumers that it takes some time to complete the process. an example would be the loading screen of games.

"It's just a satellite. It'll take three to five minutes, but I can't give it to my clients too quickly. They'll think that they are overpaying me if I do that."

People Found Out About The Base I Built On the Moon

Sci-fi · Silver Lining

TheUnsuspicious

1yr

Replied to Jumure

good enough for me!

She hadn't even given him a chance to say bye. It seemed she hadn't warmed up to him completely after all.

World Domination System

Fantasy · KillerHemboy

TheUnsuspicious

1yr

Replied to tho1

some knowledge are indeed forbidden and should be forbidden. Simply type 'information hazard', that would be a good start to know why some knowledge are not allowed to be disclosed to the general public.

The Golden Tome of Creation appeared in his mind. It opened to the first page and revealed Xia Jing's information as well as the crime she committed. She had surreptitiously read through the forbidden book left behind by Emperor Taizu—Nine Heavens Evil Spirits Purification Skill.

I Transmigrated As A Prison Guard And Suppressed The Princess

Eastern · Little Bai Takes Flight

TheUnsuspicious

1yr

Replied to Hungry_BookWorm

no there isnt. yes, the principle of how a nuke work can be found online, however, detailed instructions on how to make it is tightly controlled. if it is as you said, then terrorist such as ISIS would have made those weapons long ago.

The Golden Tome of Creation appeared in his mind. It opened to the first page and revealed Xia Jing's information as well as the crime she committed. She had surreptitiously read through the forbidden book left behind by Emperor Taizu—Nine Heavens Evil Spirits Purification Skill.

I Transmigrated As A Prison Guard And Suppressed The Princess

Eastern · Little Bai Takes Flight

TheUnsuspicious

1yr

Replied to Iron_M

good point. but u dont force that as a rule. for example, there's no rule that you must support your country. Well sure, there's social expectation for that. But a proper country doesnt force u to do that. instead they use other ways to uplift your patriotism. like healthcare or education.

"Fourth, if you encounter anyone who dares to humiliate our Heaven Demon Sect outside, you have to stand up for the sect. You can't let others humiliate the reputation of our sect."

I Am Such An Expert; Why Do I Have To Take In Disciples

Eastern · Wood Easily Starts Fires

TheUnsuspicious

1yr

Replied to JhonAriel

Although I was on a bad mood hence why i was so harsh for such a cliche plot, my point still stands. Just bcs they are the OG does not protect them from bad plot. So prove me why my criticism is wrong. Explain it. Point out wrong assumptions if I did make some. If i did make wrong assumptions, I'll admit it.

Ji Wuxia smiled faintly and said, "Granny Li, this place is not like our Imperial Palace. The Heaven Demon Sect is very small and lacks resources. There's no need to build any array formations in the sect."

I Am Such An Expert; Why Do I Have To Take In Disciples

Eastern · Wood Easily Starts Fires

TheUnsuspicious

1yr

Replied to Grim_Reaper_5208

I believe i dont deserve to get insulted just from that reply. but each to their own.

Ji Wuxia smiled faintly and said, "Granny Li, this place is not like our Imperial Palace. The Heaven Demon Sect is very small and lacks resources. There's no need to build any array formations in the sect."

I Am Such An Expert; Why Do I Have To Take In Disciples

Eastern · Wood Easily Starts Fires

TheUnsuspicious

1yr

Commented

Fine then! *starts licking candies aggresively*

Yes, yes. I do rob other junkyard scrappers. I didn't have to, but I did. I am not a kind person. So there. If you don't like it, you can... go eat candy.

The Undying Mecha Emperor

Fantasy · mrant12

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People Found Out About The Base I Built On the Moon

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World Domination System

I Transmigrated As A Prison Guard And Suppressed The Princess

I Transmigrated As A Prison Guard And Suppressed The Princess

I Am Such An Expert; Why Do I Have To Take In Disciples

I Am Such An Expert; Why Do I Have To Take In Disciples

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