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Red_Tempest: I just did a 75 chapter mass release. So don’t ask for a mass release againSupreme Emperor System · C75
Sleepinglord: If we can’t ask for a mass release can we ask for a Ultra Super Mega Mass Release ?Supreme Emperor System · C75
REN: The ocean (or wherever they're going) is going to be dyed with blood. Lyrica's nosebleed when she sees Shiro in a swimsuit is going to be legendaryNanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl? · C125
Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl? · C125
Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl?
Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl? · C124
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AnCient: WoW orcs are greenTouch of Fate · C14
Rise of House Cason
Uesama: She also buy something called mana spring, right??Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl? · C106
Supreme Harem System · C23
Naruto world reincarnation
MuskIpinki: Not only the grammar is horrible but the plot is also bullsh*t. The author couldnt write the fanfic based on dxd anymore, so he thought lets add naruto arc so now naruto fans will join and read. What next? You will add fairy tail and other mangas as well and steal plot from other novels cause you cant create the plot for yourself? Garbage author.Dantalion Duke of Devil (DxD fanfic). (Naruto Arc).
SonataL: How the heck does this trash of a novel get into the top 50? Is it normal for people to like horribly written novels? The grammar is a mess!Dantalion Duke of Devil (DxD fanfic). (Naruto Arc).
MarKarp: This novel is the same as the first I tried, also multiple mistakes everywhere... you will not make it big if you keep writing like this.............................................................................................Fix it!Dantalion Duke of Devil (DxD fanfic). (Naruto Arc).
SrDickinocada: A novel like that is in the top 50?? wow.......... Fix your god damn grammar holy sh*t..................................................................................
Grammar in this novel is just tragic. You can see a mistake in almost every sentence. How can you people read this garbage. It's just impossible to write this badly. If you don't even know english, why do you even try to become an author...Dantalion Duke of Devil (DxD fanfic). (Naruto Arc).
FrostFire: RIP grammar
How did this even get to top 50 with this kind of grammar. There are too many grammatical errors in this novel, please fix them.Dantalion Duke of Devil (DxD fanfic). (Naruto Arc).
Saadido: The English language has been butchered. I can't read this so I'm going to have to give you a horrible review.
This is literally unreadable.
Fix it.Dantalion Duke of Devil (DxD fanfic). (Naruto Arc).
Katarinna: Grammar in this novel is just tragic. You can see a mistake in almost every sentence. How can you people read this garbage. It's just impossible to write this badly. If you don't even know english, why do you even try to become an author...Dantalion Duke of Devil (DxD fanfic). (Naruto Arc).
Klaziki69: I'm only giving one stars because this isn't your story to begin with. This is literally a 99% translation or a copycat of a One Piece fan-fiction posted on Qidian. Original is titled 海贼王之冒险之旅 on Qidian's main Chinese novel site. No credit was given in your synopsis or any of the chapters currently released and no I don't think you had the author's permission to use his materials either. I know the story and plot itself is nice because I had finished the original story but you butchered it somewhat with your own bad grammar and half-assed attempt to make it your own story. The only thing I've seen you change so far is the MC's name and that's it. Honestly the grammar is still readable and a lot better compared to machine/google translated material but this story isn't yours nor is it supposed to be in the "Original" novel section. At least give the author his credits.one piece adventure
one piece adventure
ThomasDarkrose: Writing Quality: 5/5 - While there are occasional typos, ****y tiny grammatical errors or punctuation errors, they do not detract from the story in any way. The writing is excellent and just draws you in.
Stability of Updates: 5/5 - The author pumps out chapters like a madman all in order to feed the addicted souls he has created. 'Nuff said.
Story Development: 5/5 - The story starts with a nieve and broken main character, Vahn, and through interactions with the world and the characters in it, he grows. Vahn still has a lot of growing to do and I, personally, look forward to seeing the man that Vahn will grow into.
Character Design: 4/5 - I would love to give the author 5/5 stars just for the design of Vahn, but I prefer to be honest and forthright. Because this is a fan-fiction many of the main characters were already designed by the original author of DanMachi. That said, Einlion takes those pre-existing characters and completely makes them his own without violating the source material. While reading this story you will be hard pressed to find any reason to complain about the use of the pre-existing characters, their reactions, or their believability.
World Background: 4/5 - Again, I would love to make this 5/5 stars, but the story takes place in a pre-existing world. Just like the characters though, the world is not violated or discarded it is embraced and honored.
Fan-fictions are a tough genre to write in, you have to take a world and characters that already exist, and are loved, then make them your own while writing your own story. Einlion does this exceptionally well and is crafting an amazing story that follows a unique and amazing character. The only thing I could possibly complain about is that I found this novel now instead of a year from now, I can't binge read it nearly enough.
On a final note, if you are a fan of DanMachi, or anime in general, and looking for a story with a unique and entertaining main character than I strongly recommend reading this story.Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos
Chrysalis · C347
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