Shortex_12

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Starts off well, really looking forward to what comes next because it looks to have the potential to be a very good one

Reborn as the savior of Manchester United

Sports · TheGreekMythosGuru

Neji paused for a brief second before continuing to comb his sister's hair. He gets experience points from doing this too. And since he is banned from going to the Park, aka not being able to enter the dungeon, any Exp is welcome.

The Cursed Gamer

Anime & Comics · Master4thWall

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2yr

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both definitely have their advantages, a spear would be better when you were fighting a small amount of people but in a crowded battlefield a sword would be better

Also, is Mathias right or not with regard to swords being just a common theme overused by people since immemorial for stories?

Saharan Successor

Book&Literature · Vostarian

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2yr

Replied to Kutu

I'm also a Muslim, and don't feel offended by it if you noticed he said " they think they are the saviors of islam" that shows he is just talking about that group of people, not the entire religion and everyone who is part of it

Riser looked at the man in front of him and gave him a warning. He already 'judges' this man lieutenant, and all of them have the same crazy-looking eyes as this man. They think they are the savior of Islam, but they are nothing more than a rapist, murderer, and terrorist.

How I Become a Flaming Turkey

Anime & Comics · Fangrove

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2yr

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I'm also a Muslim, and don't feel offended by it if you noticed he said " they think they are the saviors of islam" that shows he is just talking about that group of people, not the entire religion and everyone who is part of it

Riser looked at the man in front of him and gave him a warning. He already 'judges' this man lieutenant, and all of them have the same crazy-looking eyes as this man. They think they are the savior of Islam, but they are nothing more than a rapist, murderer, and terrorist.

How I Become a Flaming Turkey

Anime & Comics · Fangrove

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2yr

Commented

Bruh....

Chen Yuxing was a stranger to the current Chen Fan. Unlike his indecision about Wang Xiaoyun, he wouldn't bat an eyelash if Chen Yuxing died suddenly. In fact, he would use the opportunity to conquer An Youya who would be sad from Chen Yuxing's passing.

Adventure in the Xianxia Multiverse

Anime & Comics · Celestial_Demon

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2yr

Replied to TrueImmortalDevil

not really, in the show Gary was a good trainer, he was just annoying

He went on to explain, but you cut him off, "I know all that, what idiot would challenge you to a gym battle without knowing what a gym battle is?" you asked, shaking your head, "What's your rules?"

Ascent (Pokemon Story)

Anime & Comics · 0_Jordinio_0

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2yr

Posted

A truly great story, I don't know how to even start describing it so you should definitely try it, I'm sure you'll love it, or at the very least enjoy it, keep up the good work author!

To Go Even Further Beyond (Dragon Ball Z)

Anime & Comics · 0_Jordinio_0

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2yr

Replied to TyrantPharaoh

thanks for the clarification, and keep it up😁 I'm really enjoying your story

Game of Thrones: Wolf of the East

TV · TyrantPharaoh

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2yr

Commented

eid Mubarak 😁

I wish to congratulate Happy Eid al-Fitr to all people.

Story: Fate/ Against Fight

Anime & Comics · J_Titan

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2yr

Replied to Shortex_12

btw I'm just a few chapters in so I apologise in advance if I've said anything wrong

Game of Thrones: Wolf of the East

TV · TyrantPharaoh

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2yr

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it's a solid story, the main character has a nice background, and the story has good world building because the author uses the fact that his main character is a historian and develops around it. it does have some issues though, the first that comes to mind is the unrealistic politics, another is how the main character changes his mindset quickly, also the portrayals of can canon characters, and the bashing tone of the story, it's not there outright but you can tell. Another thing is that there is no solid reason given on why the mc does what he does, why he goes to such lengths. he also has a sort of god complex where he thinks he knows the characters, like in the chapter he's thinking of making Ned a wolf he has an internal monologue, and goes on a rant about how Ned is a foolish man who ruined house stark, and how Jon's line is better than Brandon's line, and it suddenly spirals into how he knows he can manipulate Bobby B. the final thing I have to say is about Torrhen stark, it seems that the protagonist truly doesn't understand why he knelt instead of fighting, the north had no more shifters at the time, and even if they did I doubt it would make that big of a difference, the fact is that as honourable as fighting sounds, they were up against dragons and Torrhen is a king so he has to protect his citizens, fighting against flying giant fire breathing lizards isnt exactly doing that, and also It was the correct thing to make his big brothers son his heir since it was rightfully his from the beginning. this is all I have to say, apart from the highlighted problems it's an okay story, great world building. I'm looking forward to more

Game of Thrones: Wolf of the East

TV · TyrantPharaoh

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2yr

Commented

I would totally do that hehehe

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DxD Multiversal Gacha System

Anime & Comics · Ashtin_Pratt

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2yr

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I feel so happy😢, first time I see an mc from my country, and better yet, named after the city I live in, you da best author👍🏽

My knew name is Abuja Orunfemi, 14 years old, 6 foot, and apparently I'm African, Nigerian specifically, didn't even know that there was a Nigeria in God of Highschool, and apparently my tail is considered a deformity. I try to sort out the information in my head and come to the conclusion that the ROB did exactly as he said with out changing anything.

ALSSJ Saiyan in God of High School

Anime & Comics · AfricanProdigy14

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3yr

Commented

This is disturbing

Magnus looked at her confusedly, "Why? It is you who works every day and makes money. Which buys us food that you cook. But I haven't even seen the god so I can't waste my Thank you on him. I need proof if he wants my thank you."

Harry Potter: Blood of the Dragon[COMPLETE]

Book&Literature · MisterImmortal

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3yr

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but not all uchiha have their sharingans unlocked, unlike the hyuugas, and also the whole hyuuga taijitsu style is based around seeing the chakra points using the byakugan and blocking them, so long story short the hyuuga reply on the byakugan more than the uchiha rely on the sharingan

"Hmm why would I choose them yeah sure the sharigan, mangekyo and, Rinnegan are great and all but I wanna Have something different from all that, there's a lot you can do with other kekkei Genkai's but unlike some Protagonist that dont think outside the box I very much do." I finished

Naruto: The journey of Rai Inazuma

Anime & Comics · Arekuruu_Tento

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3yr

Commented

"I refuse." Kyle deadpanned.

My Unconventional Delivery System!

Anime & Comics · Charlottes

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3yr

Posted

this is simply amazing 👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽 I hope that the author continues this, because this is one of the most amazing stories I've read and although it has a bit of a shaky start it quickly gets better.

Becoming A K-pop Idol

Sci-fi · Maxime

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3yr

Commented

Did someone call?

I'll have to shit gold to afford all of this I can tell just by looking at the sheer number of ingredients. I might as well not use oils unless needed.

God Pulled A Gacha and I Got Reincarnated

Anime & Comics · TurkishJesus

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3yr

Replied to Dracul91

Time is relative as they say

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The Epic of Leviathan

Anime & Comics · InGlorious

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