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ArthasMenethil: So far so good my friend.I really like the storyline,
Kakashi should be in the spotlight.I also like his new jutsus hope to see more of that.👍👍




Keep up the good work!

Kakashi!
1 month ago

Arashi: I mean... you have to realize that Dylan is 16, which means he can’t really ‘go’ anywhere, by the time the avengers movie happens, he’ll be 18, so then he could branch out. Also Dylan is only giving the symbiote to Peter and Harry, not anything else. Why we he hoard things that could help him in the long run?

Klyntar · C11
2 months ago

Daemonlord666: I just wanted a heads up.

Klyntar · C11
2 months ago

Arcan1987: Thanks for the chapter!

Klyntar · C11
2 months ago
I mean... you have to realize that Dylan is 16, which means he can’t really ‘go’ anywhere, by the time the avengers movie happens, he’ll be 18, so then he could branch out. Also Dylan is only giving the symbiote to Peter and Harry, not anything else. Why we he hoard things that could help him in the long run? View More

PeruAncestral: I agree with you ...
he could be out looking for mutants or any kind of empowered person and ask his Symbionte to absorb those powers so he can get stronger because he is so weak now and this world is Dc / Marvel the 3000x level of danger if I tell in chronological order the land will be invaded 4 or 5 times and to make matters worse there is the Symbionte god ..

but no he has to be .. '' the hypocritical hero who saves all his enemies '' ...

well just have this symbionte fanfic so we have to enjoy it while it is here ..

but seriously the symbionte is a cheat code if it merges totally with the symbionte any power it absorbs will be in his genetic code too .. this is such an OP system that is

Klyntar · C11
2 months ago
Hey man, I needed a bit of time off. View More

Daemonlord666: First where were you?

Klyntar · C11
2 months ago
Venom will be a lot stronger, just you wait. View More

Daijena: The chapter was pretty cool, just slightly sad that the mc isn't strong enough :/
I mean if I remember correctly the symbiotes have som much potential and in the vision he's still only using webs and hand to hand combat? No other powers? Berry kick Venom's ass, he needs to train and collect some powers.

Klyntar · C10
2 months ago

Daijena: Nice~
But weird question here, because I'm weird, can he still use Kamui? No right? Only his normal sucking eye power and not the self sucking one. (No idea how to describe it otherwise) But since he still somewhat has access to his own dimensions shouldn't Kaguyas meat still be in there somewhere?(Since it's a privat dimension outside of normal time and space?) Could he use that to strengthen himself or develop countermeasures against Kaguya and her clans-men?
Also good story idea :3

Kakashi! · C3
3 months ago
No he can’t use the right Kamui, since obito is still alive. View More

Daijena: Nice~
But weird question here, because I'm weird, can he still use Kamui? No right? Only his normal sucking eye power and not the self sucking one. (No idea how to describe it otherwise) But since he still somewhat has access to his own dimensions shouldn't Kaguyas meat still be in there somewhere?(Since it's a privat dimension outside of normal time and space?) Could he use that to strengthen himself or develop countermeasures against Kaguya and her clans-men?
Also good story idea :3

Kakashi! · C3
3 months ago

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Klyntar
3 months ago
I have a plan for Batman, but you’ll have to wait till the time of the Avengers movie. View More

CornboyRay: I know batman is a kid but he is a pretty huge character, along with the rest of the justice league. (You should age him up and have him train earlier with the L.O.A making him more deadlier than any shield agent.)I feel you can go two ways with DC that wouldn't contradict plot. Either make the justice league the age of Dylan to make the marvel story stay consistent, also doing things like making Victor Stone apart of the friend group( I think he will be like a protector of the group being the star of the football team and preven Flash from bullying or trying to get a reaction out of Dylan <getting beat up by Dylan😁>while being in the vicinity of Victor) along with beast boy because why not (I personally love their friend ship) Giving DC a chance to join the Avengers(Dylan's version) along side Dylan and implement other metahumans along the way. (For this I feel like you would have to change the term muntant to metahuman if you plan on implementing mutants) The second way you can do thing is have the old justice league (J.L.A with Alan Scott Ted Kord ect.) Be apart of shield fighting alongside Hank Pym and captain America. That way you can already have an established DC universe.

Klyntar · C0
3 months ago
I have one question though, you only spoken about the marvel part of the universe. What about the Dc part? View More

CornboyRay: My different interpretation are base of of your art. Without your novel I wouldn't have thought of it. And yes of course you can use my ideas. Take em all if it helps

Klyntar · C0
3 months ago

CornboyRay: Thanks for the shootout. Personally, I think you should rewrite but only to improve plot holes, Inconsistencies and also character development. No need to rush anything because as a reader we come here to immerse ourselves in a universe. I also think it will take the edge off the author by having the characters look to their surroundings and react. There doesn't have to be a new major plot point every 3 chapters otherwise it can lead to writing fatigue. Why not have a chapter about Nick Fury document about what he sees, spying on Venom . Observing the MC from a far, discovering who he is. (after all, he is the worlds greatest spy ). Or having a chapter about Dylan utilizing knowledge of what to invest in Considering the fact that he knows bits and pieces of the Marvel/ DC universe to void himself of money problems( You can him pull a Back To The Future and have him realize that he can bet on sports once he sees that the outcome of the winning sports teams are the same as his original world.) But don't got too far with it. I personally don't wanna read a chapter about cooking or how Dylan is eating a bowl of Trix. (Theres a line) Most importantly build relationships with the characters and also have fun is all I have to say😁

Klyntar · C0
3 months ago
Thanks, I don’t know if I’ll keep the memory transfer, but I’ll find some other way to make them powerful View More

katorishi: 2nd time writing this i'll keep it short you do you, you already made the enemy's op darkside army Thanos army chutari all of d.c villians on top of marvel Villians an top of the god of sybots keep memory transfer in my opinion but again you do you

Klyntar · C0
3 months ago
How do you come up with all these new ideas? They make me feel like a fool for not thinking of these things. Is it okay if I use some of your ideas? View More

CornboyRay: Thanks for the shootout. Personally, I think you should rewrite but only to improve plot holes, Inconsistencies and also character development. No need to rush anything because as a reader we come here to immerse ourselves in a universe. I also think it will take the edge off the author by having the characters look to their surroundings and react. There doesn't have to be a new major plot point every 3 chapters otherwise it can lead to writing fatigue. Why not have a chapter about Nick Fury document about what he sees, spying on Venom . Observing the MC from a far, discovering who he is. (after all, he is the worlds greatest spy ). Or having a chapter about Dylan utilizing knowledge of what to invest in Considering the fact that he knows bits and pieces of the Marvel/ DC universe to void himself of money problems( You can him pull a Back To The Future and have him realize that he can bet on sports once he sees that the outcome of the winning sports teams are the same as his original world.) But don't got too far with it. I personally don't wanna read a chapter about cooking or how Dylan is eating a bowl of Trix. (Theres a line) Most importantly build relationships with the characters and also have fun is all I have to say😁

Klyntar · C0
3 months ago
Yeah, I guess it is kinda lazy. You put out some really good ideas though, it kinda makes me feel embarrassed. But for my second story, I think I'm doing pretty good. And I won't give everyone their memories. View More

CornboyRay: Yeah, but you could have made the MC take up the position of leader of The Avenger to train them and prepare them for future events because he knows the dangers that it holds. It would have given time to build up a relationship between the MC and the Avengers and furthered character development. It also would have been the opportunity to implement a flaw in the MC(It being he thinks he know everything) because he then realize he relies on his knowledge of comics and the MCU far too much considering that he is in neither of those universes, only to come to the conclusion that he is now in fact in a new amalgamation of chaos which is his new reality. He has to make decisions for himself instead of relying on the future knowledge that isn't guaranteed. You could have had the MC go through a character ark That brings him to this realization, Causing the creation of an MC who Doesn't know everything but grows to know himself, foraging a main character with intrigue and wisdom which is arguably more important. And just go on from there. You have new elements in the universe such as DC so the story still has an opportunity to get there, but I personally don't like the fact that you gave Tony, and are planning to give everyone else their memories. You could have had the MC guide them to the path that they would have eventually walked down them selves earlier So that the new innovations would inspire them, leading them to see potential(Example: The MC could have gave Tony an idea/hint for his amours and that inspires him to make the bleeding edge earlier) and even goes beyond that. Instead you chose to force character development by just giving everybody their memories which I personally think is boring and lazy from a reader's standpoint. I think it's a cop out. I really like the story and don't want to drop it. Just don't be lazy.

Klyntar · C6
3 months ago
Thanks man. I understand. We all have our own opinions so it’s cool. View More

amaturewriter: Its a good story..well written..cool concept...though the only reason I gave a low rating is because the MC is kinda weak seeing all his potential and also the fact that this guy doesn't want to do **** by himself but rather wants a team..I dont like this and I think it's bull**** and stupid..i prefer one man army style...

either war this is my opinion..anyway good author

Klyntar
3 months ago

amaturewriter: Its a good story..well written..cool concept...though the only reason I gave a low rating is because the MC is kinda weak seeing all his potential and also the fact that this guy doesn't want to do **** by himself but rather wants a team..I dont like this and I think it's bull**** and stupid..i prefer one man army style...

either war this is my opinion..anyway good author

Klyntar
3 months ago
Yeah but it’s all for the story. I really didn’t want the avengers to sit in the backseat of the story and if they almost lost to Thanos, how do you think they’d fair against Knull? View More

CornboyRay: I agree

Klyntar · C6
3 months ago
Hey man, just you wait. Cause' I'm gonna try to make him not lame. View More

Newsourpatch: Harry is lame

Klyntar · C5
3 months ago
Nah, I won't. It was just a fun reference. If I did then this story would become a whole lot more complicated. Because right now, Goku and Vegeta could one-shot Knull. View More

The_crow: Bulma brief is studing monkeys, will you really add DBZ universe??

Klyntar · C5
3 months ago
See the thing is that I’m pairing Harry with Cindy. And if Cindy got bit she would have that thing she had with Peter. You know the urge to have sex every time they got in close proximity of each other. Not good for ol’ Goblin junior. Oh and that won’t happen to Harry. Peter and his bond will become more like brothers. View More

WolfLord: I hope you're only pretended to crush them I'm surprised you didn't include Cindy Moon she's a powerful Ally as well just because you have a symbiote if your add Spider-Man Power that actually enhances everything.Thanks for the chapter on a good story

Klyntar · C5
3 months ago
You just gave me an idea. View More

MacouilleETmoncul: From what I know (I'm not sure...) symbiote can copy/absorb the ability/power/bloodline of it's host no? If it's true he should be able to absorb the power of someone like Thor or The Human Torch for his weakness to fire and a metahuman/mutant related to sound for his weakness to sound.

Klyntar · C3
3 months ago
It would make more sense for my story, for Dylan to train with the symbiote to get an emotional connection with it. And if he had all the powers at the get go, the story wouldn’t be interesting. Also Klyn stated in previous chapter that if he gave Dylan all of the symbiote’s powers, he would go insane and kill everyone in his sights. View More

CornboyRay: Why did you decide the nerf to symbiote by saying a can only cover part of his body when every other symbiote host instantly gained mastery over it just by having it bond with them. I think from a writing standpoint it's a weird and odd decision.

Klyntar · C3
3 months ago
Maybe I’ll have to think about it. View More

CliffkunLolRekt: Is your novel going to be harem/polygamy novel

Klyntar · C2
3 months ago
Yeah the weakness will be addressed. Yeah the comic version of knull was awesome but I did my best to describe him. View More

EmbarrassedEdge: what about the weaknesses? would he train for that? I liked that the comic version of knul symbiot more, he looked more intimidating.

Klyntar · C3
3 months ago

MovingCorpse: Just to make sure, he'll merge with Symbiotes and turn into Venom right? I mean, if yes maybe you can make it like this, Peter cover his weakness with technologies, how about our MC cover his with magic/mystic arts?

Klyntar · C2
3 months ago

WolfLord: Thanks for the chapter on a good story

Klyntar · C2
3 months ago

C_H_I_E_F: Good start liking it so far

Klyntar · C2
3 months ago

Primordial_God: Well , so far good plot indeed

Klyntar · C2
3 months ago
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