We all went through that awkward self-important, fantasy-ridden teen years, thinking "urgh, everyone is so stupid", "I'm so secretly special" and the first few chapters make us wonder if the MC is going through THAT phase. Turns out she is indeed special LOL.
"It was nine. Nothing unthinkable was happening." I've read many stories on this site but this opening sentence triumphs over all.
Pacing is good and chapters are at lengths digestible to today's readers. Super Squad is a name designed to be a jab at the cringy daydreamings we all had at least once, but the author takes it up to eleven which pushs the whole thing into the cool territory. You secretly want your teen fantasy come to life, this story delivers.
This chapter tells a lot about the Best family and its members, especially the MC, but not in a spoon-fed way. That's a promising display of good writing.
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"I forgot to hand it in…"
I shall wear Jenn's smile
LGBT+ · Toobo