Webnovel Author: ShadowsFall - Fanfic Collection

ShadowsFall

1yr

Commented

When will the next update be?

ch 25 Chapter 25: Advanced

Charm Full: Start From Immortal Online Game

Fantasy · Vaness_Dar

ShadowsFall

1yr

Commented

Can’t wait for the next chapter thx author

ch 25 Chapter 25: Advanced

Charm Full: Start From Immortal Online Game

Fantasy · Vaness_Dar

ShadowsFall

1yr

Commented

Can’t wait for the next one thanks for the amazing chapter

ch 24 Adventurer's Guild

ShadowsFall

1yr

Commented

Legendary is above mythical 🧐 is this a typo

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ShadowsFall

1yr

Commented

A truly great chapter thank you 🙏

ch 31 [Genius]

ShadowsFall

1yr

Commented

Thanks for the chapter!

ch 0 6 Chapter 6: Novice Task

Charm Full: Start From Immortal Online Game

Fantasy · Vaness_Dar

ShadowsFall

1yr

Commented

Thanks for the chapter

ch 14 The Library

God’s Domain: Returning to Take It All

Games · Stupendous_Steph

ShadowsFall

1yr

Replied to GIDICAsan

No problem 👍🏻

ch 0 1 Chapter 1

Question? Am I An NPC? So Cringe!

Fantasy · GIDICAsan

ShadowsFall

1yr

Commented

If you move this story to the games or fantasy section you might get more people to read. It kinda gets buried in the sports section.

ch 0 1 Chapter 1

Question? Am I An NPC? So Cringe!

Fantasy · GIDICAsan

I’m not understanding why a 6 year old, and 1st graders are given such sophisticated dialogue. They are kids. The adults act childish and only talk in one liners pretty much. Overall I think you’ve made some major errors thus far with the dialogue between characters.