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... How am I being jealous? View More

Nonyame: LOL Your Just Jealous you can't be part of these Shady Queens Destruction and Anarchy Tour! With a Master like theirs Our Little Princess of Naughtiness has a lot to look up....😍

My Crown Prince Consort Is a Firecracker! · C183
2 days ago
Reading Status: C60
Has all the FL cultivator tropes and cliches, but that's in no way a bad thing since we came expecting that, right?

Plot and pacing, characters and interactions are all well written and I've enjoyed everything out so far View More
The Tempestuous Consort - Wilfully Pampered by the Beastly Highness
2 days ago
What are you saying... which one of them isn't just as naughty as her, if not worse? xD

Her master tied DY to a tree below the tide just to trap her, and now her fellow deciple is running around wanting to slap a talisman to any rando's face View More

Nonyame: I 💘 THEM! Just like Master they are treating her like a Cutie Doll While still appreciating her Naughtiness!

My Crown Prince Consort Is a Firecracker! · C183
3 days ago
Errr... What advertising? The farming mode is clearly just a replacement for the old "minutes read per week" reward system they used to have in place.

I've got over 13k points of farming and I've gotten 1 3-day discount and 2 fast passes for it so far. I have yet to see an advert though. View More

Legion20: I'm very sorry to hear this. 🙇‍♂️I have also added instructions to disable the farming mode. I never asked to be added to farming. Sadly, I have no voice in the matter. Thanks for your undrstanding

Supreme Magus · C436
5 days ago
Ok. We got a villain with backstory and a player title.

Who else thinks we've got to ready another Loli bag? View More
The Legendary Mechanic · C672
1 week ago
No u View More

jm12017: shut up

Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl? · C234
1 week ago
Eh, I feel it would have been contrived. But it's only been two chapters and one conversation, irks happen eventually and organically View More

Varus_Praetor: No Jirni / Kamila interaction? That’s disappointing.

Supreme Magus · C435
1 week ago
The mental image she conjures is amazing: her sister is the little foodie, and she's the evil bun View More
My Crown Prince Consort Is a Firecracker! · C166
1 week ago
She's tethered to the husband in a more literal sense. Talk about turning the expression "ball and chain" on it's head lol View More
Zombie Sister Strategy · C926
2 weeks ago
it's a bit of an **** concern: firstly, things only get murky if he were to put down the entire song, opposed to just the title. Think about it, imagine newspapers getting taken to lawsuits every time the listed a company name, or movie, or whatever. Secondly usually people do mock-ups if the want to parody, stereotype or criticize it, so they can't get sued for defamation or whatever if they take it to far. Kind of like how you always have the "this is a work if fiction and any resemblance to actual person's is purely coincidental" in a lot of series and movie credits. Makes me think of a child closing it's eyes expecting not to be found... I don't know where I'm going with this xD View More

hwnplaya: pretty sure author changed it due to copyright laws

Supreme Magus · C425
2 weeks ago

hwnplaya: pretty sure author changed it due to copyright laws

Supreme Magus · C425
2 weeks ago
Ehhh... I might have been a bit heavy on the jargon there lol View More

Daoist_Rubeno: Are you speaking English? I dont get what you have written here 😳

Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl? · C290
2 weeks ago
I agree, if we selectively ignore the fight against the arena boy View More

Phantowhite: well, she definitely won't have as much trouble with the elves anymore, so that's a plus. though she'll still need to level up more if she gets the chance. which should be easier thanks to her new title. shiro's on a roll in this arc

Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl? · C290
2 weeks ago

Phantowhite: well, she definitely won't have as much trouble with the elves anymore, so that's a plus. though she'll still need to level up more if she gets the chance. which should be easier thanks to her new title. shiro's on a roll in this arc

Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl? · C290
2 weeks ago
I find it amusing that there are a lot of actions, reactions and interactions lifted from anime/manga tropes, that only actually work if you see them, instead of describe them. The whole ideal behind those mediums is to allow the communication of subtle nuances through visual aides. Nuances you can just write out in normal literature instead of going out of your way to convert them to weird actions first.

It's not that I just noticed this, but some turns of phrase in this chapter we really awkward xD View More
Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl? · C290
2 weeks ago
Yeah this happens when you don't have a professional editor.

This kind of useless technobabble is something only the author should have to read in their personal notes and can be published in a bonus work or glossary. It doesn't contribute to the story in any way, so it should be chopped. It's not like we'll ever use this information ever again, since it's all made-up **** anyway.

Putting a lot of words into it is basically a prideful boast, like 'look how great my worldbuilding' is. View More

Maganas: Damn .... talk about too much information. Not saying it's bad that an author cares a lot to actually do his research but I had to reread this chapter several times to know what the **** I was reading.

The Legendary Mechanic · C662
2 weeks ago

Maganas: Damn .... talk about too much information. Not saying it's bad that an author cares a lot to actually do his research but I had to reread this chapter several times to know what the **** I was reading.

The Legendary Mechanic · C662
2 weeks ago
Your face doesn't make sense!

Ok, kidding aside, I this is actually a very realistic portrayal of a (repeat after me) *character trait*. Just suddenly having money will not make someone stop being frugal. Trust me, I know. Having to go through financial difficulties or poverty in your childhood is traumatizing, the constant stress of not knowing how your future will play out, having to listen to parents argue, or witnessing them try to hide it, day to day when all your friends get nice things but not daring to ask for the same to not be a burden. It leaves some scars. This is most apparent once someone like this starts to earn properly, they deem a lot of 'normal' things as unnecessary, and because of the pride they've developed in this...survival mechanism, will look down on 'decadence' (eating out, even at a franchise, is at the top of that list).

This is my position now as a software developer that still drives a 32yo car. Sure, no rust, airbags, fuel economy, aircon, automatic windows, power steering, abs, seats that aren't sat through and stained and a dashboard that's not cracked in half are nice. But are they necessary? My miser ass that hàs been carted around in that car for my whole life doesn't think so. My colleagues at work constantly joke at my expense that for a German, I'm an amazing Jew and the irony of the etc etc.

I for one, think Legion did an amazing job with Lith's character and in particular this trait, considering that he's had to go, not through one, but two financially ****ty childhoods. View More

sentientreader: I still don't understand why Lith is a money scrooge, I mean he practically has no use for money as far as I've seen zero, nothing it's becoming old quick, turn it into an obsession with something else maybe a hobby? I don't know but being stingy doesn't make sense

Supreme Magus · C423
2 weeks ago

Shamial: Nothing stands out at the moment not sure why everyone's hyping it up. World setting seeming more like insignificant filler atm. Nothings happened and seems generic poor person from far away finds old teacher and learns he has mysterious powers people want to capture him for WOOOOW. This is so original you should copyright it.

Just started the novel so I may be wrong but just wanted to give in unbiased opinion coz the comments seem fake as **** at the moment.

Paragon of Destruction · C2
2 weeks ago

BURNING: Arena Master = Filler

Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl? · C282
3 weeks ago
Honestly, that fight was barely mediocre.

Shiro's use of skills was super dumb compared to her usual grace and it was painful to read (as if she never went through that fight against herself). Not to mention how the duck do branches get through her gear and skin? Branches! Are they classified as purple or red gear? Maybe she should equip those instead. Not to mention that getting hit from her own skill's backlash is, as I mentioned, dumb.

Also there's not been any mention of it, but she's still using her Nytrie disguise isn't she? How have her parents not noticed the feature similarities, even if they don't have inspect.

I'll chalk this fight off to the weak reasoning of 'cuz level', but please don't do it again, this arena boy didn't do anything interesting and to see her struggle against her own incompetence was a pain View More
Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl? · C282
3 weeks ago
Personally I think it will have a larger impact than expected, because the proxy war here isn't even the Crimson's proxy war, its a sub-proxy war to decide who will have more to offer the universals when it comes to the unexplored region. We don't yet know if the Purple will or won't align with them. XH himself made sure his and Floating Dragon's position with the Crimson's stayed neutral.

I would expect the fighting to drag out like in the Cold War. Developed hubs would turn into games of espionage, while backwater places rich with resources would have local proxy wars, like the Angolan and Korean conflicts. Occasionally developing into something like the Soviet-Afghan and Vietnam war. In my mind HX would move around as background actor in these conflicts, training and equipping locals like a shady CIA or KGB agent. Maybe partake in infiltrations and key decisive battles for the quests.

As for the forces involved, I think that all the dudes joining the purple after HX saved their A grades may have evened things out a bit, and that HX himself will primarily act as a qualitative force, instead of a quantitative one. I don't think that Herber himself will personally get involved much, if at all until some final battle (typical Demon King style)

I'm more concerned how the 10 years will be covered in written content. Will we end up with time jumps? Will we have a whole lot of mini stories? Will it get monotonous? Will at some point, the black star bases be subject to terror attacks to cripple logistics or morale? View More
The Legendary Mechanic · C653
3 weeks ago
Something to take note of, is that, literally in this chapter, he said that a fail condition was to lose the war before the larger civilization stepped in, that means success conditions are either to win, or to hold out until then. Players in his past life probably did the latter, as they wouldn't have the influence to cause the prior.

Going by the plot trend of the novel, we will get that unlikely prior result, regardless of what tier HX is at, similar to the thing with the germinal war. The author will find a way to justify it somehow. And probably use a fight with bloodshed land's leader to promote to grade S if that's the case.

Alternatively, if he does actually promote to beyond A, a fight with the boss dude will be used to 'establish his foundation' as they like to do in these Chinese stories.

I actually anticipate that artificial planet becoming a black star HQ.

What actually makes me curious is how his experience as grade S will be in general, since no player had ever reached that point so it might muddy some of his development, since he never done it at that tier before. But somehow I doubt that the author bothered to take that into account when this was written and HX will only have pseudo setbacks View More

Doc_E_Style: If HX doesn't reach S grade, there should be absolutely no way for purple crystal to win this war.

The Legendary Mechanic · C653
3 weeks ago
I just binged up until yesterday and I didn't notice any drops in quality. The sections where it takes half a chapter to explain how spells work/spell practice were pretty boring though. No need for that after establishing how to learn fake/true magic early in the story. It felt like there was some lag when everybody was being depressed, especially the cold war after protectors fake death was revealed, but I feel it was necessary to set up the character development we needed to get to where we are now. All in all 10/10 (-1 for the magic info dumps) View More

BenRaiders: Remember from 1 month ago when there was a negative comment on the story with 150 likes, regarding its overall quality? I figured I would ask this now, since the Kaduria arc has neared its conclusion as well now, but what is our consensus of the writing quality now versus then?

Personally, I believe it has improved by leaps and bounds, recreating an immersive atmosphere both in Kaduria and Belius. Though, I am surprised how easily the main villain of the arc was wiped off the map by Salaark. What do you guys think?

Supreme Magus · C410
3 weeks ago
Reading Status: C409
This is one of the 5 stories that have made it 💯% worthwhile to install this app and sift through all the other (not necessarily bad, just cliche and drama prone) stuff. It's immediately obvious that this isn't just set in western fantasy, it is styled as western fantasy. You could easily compare it to series like Shannara, the Belgariad and Eragon.

Firstly the world building is amazing, with a lot of mystery and sense of adventure permeating most if not all scenarios. The author also skillfully shows us the world through the character's explorations, showing, not telling amazingly well. It's also great with how he compares the systems of the world to ours where it's doable, and dextrously keeps a sense of mystery where it would prove too plotbreaking to do that.

Speaking of systems, I have to admit that there are a lot of 'eastern' elements in the magic system, but it's explained and termed in such a way that you wouldn't be able to tell if you hadn't already read a thousand cultivation stories. It's refreshing and masterfully done. Usually when people try this it comes across as a tacky attempt to hide it, or it just seems like some kind of videogame element. In this case though, it fits the setting naturally.

Next is plot, the plot will always keep you on your toes, eager to find out what'll happen next. In simple terms, this is a Page-Turner. There is minimal, if any faffing around or dumb running in circles. There are numerous cases where we have POV shifts and foreshadowing done *right* so that any otherwise tired phases are given a boost.

There are hints of a a romance sub plot, with at least two solid ships. The great thing about these is how realistic and surprisingly healthy they are portrayed, never really getting exploited unless the main plot naturally involves them. There are hints of a potential two more, but right now there's literally nothing to go on, so we'll see if it's just another side note, or if it'll become something more.

Character-wise I have to say that this story does them better than a lot of works out there, in this regard I would compare the vereity to something like Overlord, where you have so many different well rounded personalities that it makes me sad now whenever one of the other stories here updates with their 2d villains, shameless ML and scheming FL. Seriously, what a bore. Meanwhile, in SM we have actual character development! The most notable ones being the MC, the...companion, the younger sister, the four friends, the... Well you get it, it's like Oprah, but with free character development.

Lastly, I have my sole critique: magic info dum**! It's great that they are so we'll reasoned out, but I don't want to read 5 half-Page paragraphs about that! Wasting time! Info dump bad! Either do it more naturally, or not at all, please! This kind of stuff should be in an author's reference and could be put up as bonus merch on Patreon or something, not waste 'ink'. But that said it's not unbearable, just kills the flow a bit. Reading how to create two balls of something then add something to them so something doesn't happen then connecting them with something so that something happens, giving you something is...ya catch my drift? It's useless technobabble.

Aneeway, cheerio, I'll go back to waiting for this to update :') View More
Supreme Magus
3 weeks ago
The number of paragraphs starting with "of course" is too damn high. Not to mention that it's a lazy way to make something seem 'obvious' or 'natural' in a blatant info dump. Just tell the story already! View More
Kalar´s Continent · C1
3 weeks ago

Ryan_Pierce: Overall, the book has an overwhelming sense of self. This isn’t a story that follows every other trope or timeline, but one that follows its own path.

Not only that, the story is consistent and makes sense, the foreshadowing is used correctly, the characters have shown steady, fluid development, and the world is created well. 5/5 stars deserved. This could be published as a paperback eventually as a bestseller if wanted.

Supreme Magus
3 weeks ago
Now, now, we can't have him be too op. It's not like using ice, fire and wind magic to rapidly compress and expand air or other propellant (like spacial magic's imploding) to launch projectiles would be very easy and give him an effective weapon in places where mana is restricted. View More

VertChicken: Wouldn't it be cool if lith used more of his biochemistry background and earth knowledge like with chess and other stuff, he's like a mad inventor ticking bomb. Also always bothered me, why doesn't he use vacuum to protect from fire and like use water magic directly in blood or inside people? Wouldn't it be a lot more effective?

Supreme Magus · C275
3 weeks ago

VertChicken: Wouldn't it be cool if lith used more of his biochemistry background and earth knowledge like with chess and other stuff, he's like a mad inventor ticking bomb. Also always bothered me, why doesn't he use vacuum to protect from fire and like use water magic directly in blood or inside people? Wouldn't it be a lot more effective?

Supreme Magus · C275
3 weeks ago

MasterHaug: It is really hard and dangerous, and we need to listen to the Life Force.
Lith: Laughts in true magic.

Supreme Magus · C275
3 weeks ago
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