• Joined Aug 2019
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  • I have a story called Enforcers that I want to someday turn into an animated series like RWBY, but good. That's pretty much it.

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I like Foxes to. Kitsune is actually my favorite character. I just wished I could have done his chapter better. View More

Jackele523: Foxes are cool. Fire is cool. So far this is the best part of the story.

Enforcers · C4
1 day ago
Thank you :) criticism always help. I am trying to improve every day. Even if my story isn't good I'm going to keep writing it since it's what I like. I'm glad that there were some parts you liked. Have a nice day. :) View More

Jackele523: It's an okay story. It starts off kind of crap but then again every webnovel I've read has started off the same way. I'll give it a 3 so far since it does seem to be sort of getting better. Right now though there are definitely better stories to read.

Enforcers
1 day ago

Jackele523: It's an okay story. It starts off kind of crap but then again every webnovel I've read has started off the same way. I'll give it a 3 so far since it does seem to be sort of getting better. Right now though there are definitely better stories to read.

Enforcers
1 day ago

RainyLiquid2020: Okay, this has basically nothing to do with the story I just wanted to point it out because I ended up finding it hilarious.

I know it writing isn't the best and it might not have a lot od emotion or love put into it but if you really want to listen to this story be emotionless than play the audio version.

It is so robotey with no emotion or love at all.

I just thought that was funny.

Enforcers
4 days ago
Reading Status: C2
Okay, this has basically nothing to do with the story I just wanted to point it out because I ended up finding it hilarious.

I know it writing isn't the best and it might not have a lot od emotion or love put into it but if you really want to listen to this story be emotionless than play the audio version.

It is so robotey with no emotion or love at all.

I just thought that was funny. View More
Enforcers
4 days ago

RainyLiquid2020: Cloud is by far my favorite written character that I have made so far.

Enforcers · C6
4 days ago
Cloud is by far my favorite written character that I have made so far. View More
Enforcers · C6
4 days ago
I like how Sniper has had a punt for like a year now and he still has the default picture but you just got yours and you already changed it... Never change Robert. View More

RobertJohn2000: Well I finally into reading your storu finally. Sniper kept bugging me to do it saying you could use the help. And what the hell I forced you to read my stuff more times then I can count. I'm glad to see you managed to get this story going. All of us kept trying but just couldn't get it right. Oh well.

to the actual review. I like the story but then again I helped with like 10% so I am a bit bisas with my review. Sniper went full critic mode but ill be mpore gental. I do like it. The ear;y chapters are kind of bad but around the train station which is the last capter is where it gets good to me. Ken and Hero are kind of funny. I like how Hero looks. I look forward to seeing what else will happen. I hate Kitsunes chapter though. The action almost dulled me and Kitsune just seems like a typical rich boy. Feels more like a card board in the shape of a man.

That said I do enjoy reading this story and I know you can do a lot better. I look forward to seeing you improve.

Enforcers
4 days ago

RobertJohn2000: Well I finally into reading your storu finally. Sniper kept bugging me to do it saying you could use the help. And what the hell I forced you to read my stuff more times then I can count. I'm glad to see you managed to get this story going. All of us kept trying but just couldn't get it right. Oh well.

to the actual review. I like the story but then again I helped with like 10% so I am a bit bisas with my review. Sniper went full critic mode but ill be mpore gental. I do like it. The ear;y chapters are kind of bad but around the train station which is the last capter is where it gets good to me. Ken and Hero are kind of funny. I like how Hero looks. I look forward to seeing what else will happen. I hate Kitsunes chapter though. The action almost dulled me and Kitsune just seems like a typical rich boy. Feels more like a card board in the shape of a man.

That said I do enjoy reading this story and I know you can do a lot better. I look forward to seeing you improve.

Enforcers
5 days ago

queenV: Amazing story line. I love how the characters are developed. The mc is really amazing love his personality. Keep the story up looking forward to the rest.

Anime/Cultivation System
1 week ago

Fantatic: I enjoy how the story is progressing it's interesting. Keep up the goodwork author. Keep writing chapters and don't drop and I will keep on supporting.

Anime/Cultivation System
1 week ago

FurinjiSaiga: I like it good job man little bit of spelling errors but it's fine. I can't wait to read the rest of the story looking forward to it. Keep up the good work.

Anime/Cultivation System
1 week ago

Marchen: I went back and fixed the first chapters. My writing has improved compared to before. I use grammerly so there isn't spelling mistakes but I might still have some. I release chapter's Friday and Saturdays now sometimes Sunday. I hope you all like the story try it out and I would really appreciate you all reviewing my novel.

Anime/Cultivation System
1 week ago

RainyLiquid2020: 1 star. Worst chapter yet. I did terrible on this one and I don't like it.

Enforcers · C5
1 week ago
1 star. Worst chapter yet. I did terrible on this one and I don't like it. View More
Enforcers · C5
1 week ago

RainyLiquid2020: Why can an author rate their own story? Of course ima give it 5 stars on everything even if I know it's realistically only 2 stars. That's just kind of silly.

Enforcers
1 week ago
Reading Status: C3
Why can an author rate their own story? Of course ima give it 5 stars on everything even if I know it's realistically only 2 stars. That's just kind of silly. View More
Enforcers
1 week ago

SniperGuny: The character Ken is okay. I like her more then Hero. So far I am more interested in her and her story. I think the fighting was kind of rushed though so I won't give this chapter 5 stars.

Enforcers · C3
1 week ago

SniperGuny: I like Kitsune. That is the only thing I liked about this chapter. Everything else was meah. Kitsune is the onl thing saving this chapter...

Enforcers · C4
1 week ago
I didn't like it though. I know I could have done better with her chapter. View More

SniperGuny: five out of five. I liked Irene and her siblings. I also am glad we finally get to see more of the monsters and slightly more world building. Funny since all you did was tell me how much I hated this chapter I think this one is so far my favirote. I also like the ice based idea for powers qand how each sibling used it diffrently.

Enforcers · C5
1 week ago

SniperGuny: five out of five. I liked Irene and her siblings. I also am glad we finally get to see more of the monsters and slightly more world building. Funny since all you did was tell me how much I hated this chapter I think this one is so far my favirote. I also like the ice based idea for powers qand how each sibling used it diffrently.

Enforcers · C5
1 week ago

SniperGuny: Shortest chapter ever. This one was kind of bleh with how small it was. I can't judge this one are anything other then how small it is. If you wanted my opinion rainy you didn't need me to read this one from how short it was...

Enforcers · C1
1 week ago

SniperGuny: I can actually comment on this one. Its... Okay I guess. Kind of silly and over the top which is the style you have fun with. Hero is bland right now but I don't hate him. I don't know what that cow thing was but it was kind of cool. All in all yo0ur story suffers a bit from explanations but while its going it is actually kind of cool. Keep it going and maybe you'll get better at writing.

Enforcers · C2
1 week ago

SniperGuny: Its an okay story. A bit all over the place at the start and needs a lot more chapters before becoming great. The world building is kind of slow as so far it has a lot of main characters rather then just one. Right now the story is building up the main guys and building the world on the side. It has still left some questions but just enough pieces for us to figure it out on our own. Its not bad but right now this story is just a 3. Not the worst but there is probably something better out there. Who knows though. My ratings may change. This story is only 4 chapters after all.

Enforcers
1 week ago
Reading Status: C3
It's good. A little bit janky early on but it does get better. If you want a fun story to just go in a read then I would recommend this. However on the flip side if you want a super deep story... Well, then this isn't your story. The characters are characters. None of them are amazingly well thought out but they do have their charms. All in all its a fun read with a bad start. View More
Anime/Cultivation System
1 week ago

DaoistDarkStar: I know, was helping my little brother with his English homework. When i saw that you used both present and past at the same time i could not stop myself from commenting☺

Anime/Cultivation System · C1
1 week ago

Marchen: Thx man I appriacte it 🙌🙌🙌

Anime/Cultivation System · C1
1 week ago

Heya_its_HT_Sans: sorry but this story hurts my grammar nazi soul, and ive already noticed glaring mistakes in the first chapter, they're tolerable but also incredibly easy to fix, i wont be dropping this just yet but do expect that if this keeps the same quality i saw in the first chapter i will

Anime/Cultivation System · C1
1 week ago

Marchen: Tell what you think if you like it. The writing gets better later on. I could edit the first few chapters but I want people to see what my writing was like when I first started and how I'm getting better as I go on.

Anime/Cultivation System · C1
1 week ago

Procrastinate: Can i just ask why he wants to be so short

Anime/Cultivation System · C1
1 week ago
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