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Ren was a transmigrator who didn't get anything like the system or a cheat. He only got a loving family who he cherishes very much. But a chance encounter changed his destiny and he started playing the world's first VRMMORPG. It is a story about his legends. * * * Release schedule would be 1/2 chapters a week as the length of the chapters are 2500+. Hope you understand
A villain trying to change his fate of dying.
A small time director died and got transmigrated into the body of a young 21 years old. He noticed that he was in an alternate world and all the songs, novels and movies in this world are different. Moreover, his family owned a entertainment company which is going to be shut down after his father's death. What will he do now? He will walk towards the path of a legendary figure in the entertainment industry. With the knowledge of his previous life and a cheat, he will rule the entertainment scene. Hollywood? Grammy's? They are just small things in his life. From making the world's greatest movie to becoming the world's richest person. He will do everything in his journey that will go down in the history as a legend.
Fame, wealth, prestige, genius, destruction, despair, loss and failure. Those are the eight words which describes Ren's life completely. He was hailed as a genius but his arrogance led him to despair. From a genius, he became a failure. He was just struggling with his life when fate gave him a second chance. Now, what will he do after he found himself waking up in another world.
Ren, he was someone with great talent in acting and singing but due to bad luck and some wrong choices, he was only able to become a third rate actor. After dying in an accident, he noticed that he had returned to the past. With the help of his talents and the knowledge of future, he started his journey to become the trendiest star of the century. * * * The story will take place in an alternate world. It is just to avoid the copyright infringement. I don't want my story to end up like I'm in Hollywood or IRAS. Contact me on discord : Killerbee#4748 Here's a link to the server : https://discord.gg/F9xfJWv PayPal account: https://www.paypal.me/Killerbee11 Support me if you want!!
Lu Fei, a debt ridden orphan who struggles through his daily life. His only wish is to provide a good life to his sister. With the threats of the loan sharks knocking on his door, he sets out to try his luck in the VR game called 'Ark'. With a dark past as a returner and Ian has his alias, he fights in Ark for a better future for his sister. Will he be able to reach the top? What will happen when he suddenly got a mysterious class and he can hear the voices of spirits? * * * This novel is inspired by novels like LMS, OG, EOSP, Praise the orc etc. Warning: The first ten chapters of the novel are similar to some of the other novels. I'm putting this warning here as many people will give negative reviews because of that. If you get past the first ten chapters, then you will be up for a interesting story about adventures and becoming the best. Join the discord: https://discord.gg/F9xfJWv
IjustWanaRead: I was thinking, wouldnt real world cooking skills and some library reading about fauna and flora of the game and some alchemy knowledge help him to create recipes more easy than he is doing it now?VRMMO: The Returnee · C45
Killerbee: No, honestly, you didn't said anything wrong. The MC is doubting people but as he was in the fantasy world, he had learned never to trust people easily. It's not like he don't trust his sister but he just fears that his sister will leave him someday as she can't live with her brother forever. It is like how parents would worry that their children will leave them once they have grown.
Now, for the teacher part, I would just say that there will be no young master face slapping movement and Fang Xue is just struggling with her feelings. There would be more character development and back story later.
There would be some character development for his sister too actually and yeah, honestly, perfect MCs made the story a bit too boring. A good character is a flawed character.
Sorry, if you don't like my words.
Thanks for reading this novel!VRMMO: The Returnee · C44
Melodyfist: Beeeeeeeee 👿👿👿🤡🙀🧘🧘🧘VRMMO: The Returnee · C44
DaoSleepi: Im sorry but it would be IMPOSSIBLE to get the name Ian just saying lol more like Ian694462.VRMMO: The Returnee · C7
Ravindra_Bisht: Another mc who could be manipulated by emotions. Seriously I hate it when mc starts to doubt people around him. The people who actually cares for him. The teacher really wants him to enter troubles. I mean Author don't they have novels in their world. They should read them. It would help them to understand about young masters. Mc would face many problems in real life just because of the teacher uncertain feelings.
I hope mc would not let other people control him because of his sister. Otherwise if this continues then many people would strike at his weak point which is his sister obviously.
And when he was thinking about the rebellious nature of his sister, it felt like he was really convincing himself that she would leave him.
Note: Sorry Author if I said something which I shouldn't. Its frustrating when something like this happens. I guess I want a perfect mc which wouldn't happen right ?.VRMMO: The Returnee · C44
budihanggie: Spirit warriorVRMMO: The Returnee · C25
HasaDigaEebowai: Can't you try to use the robe that hides your presence and directly sneak into 3rd floor?VRMMO: The Returnee · C42
druser: dang only 42 chapters? why didnt i start reading this when there was 1000 chapters already. very good novel so far. its very enticing. read through all the available chapters in 1 sittingVRMMO: The Returnee
Narcox: he having all those skill been classless make no sense, i hope the author give him class soon because if he became overpower like in the prologue classless will be novel killer for meVRMMO: The Returnee · C25
FangMing: Author, is your novel harem? I think it is moving in that direction. I ask because I hate harem.VRMMO: The Returnee · C10
Sleepyreader: I’m curious about KariosVRMMO: The Returnee · C34
Melodyfist: Rip u bee. Die. Decrease time in discord and write. 😐😠😡😡VRMMO: The Returnee · C26
SpookySaint: Sometimes you look at all those brand of chocolate cookies on the shelf and think "All are just the same what's the difference, does it matter if we choose one over the other without thinking". Yes it does because... QUALITY and UNIQUENESS. This can be applied to the alluring quality of Bee's Reurnee too. In this oversaturated market full of similar books with similar themes, Bee breathes a new life in the genre. The universe he creates is something you'd often heard about in other VRMMO books too but you can't help but think "This is new..." Every now and then. The writing style is top notch and the dialogues are just wondrously witty and the humour is not something that will leave you with a grin but pure laughter that may make your stomach hurt at some point. This web novel is totally different from the others, a true embodiment of the phrase "to stand out from the crowd"VRMMO: The Returnee
Melodyfist: Bee this is sky. Lol I missed second chap yesterday!VRMMO: The Returnee · C23
VVandering_phant0m: Its effing good bro
Also not a cliche vr novel good job authorVRMMO: The Returnee
BigBoobs: Wow another cool story you wroteVRMMO: The Returnee · C20
V4Zzy: I think the problem is that in chapter 18 he used chinese word.VRMMO: The Returnee · C20
Spade_Z_: I like how this MC doesn't win just because he's the MCVRMMO: The Returnee · C19
Melodyfist: Bee I like ur book. Pls keep writing!VRMMO: The Returnee · C19
QuickSilver: it seems there's a problem i cant vote your novel.
it says it didnt support using spirit stone?VRMMO: The Returnee · C20
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SpookySaint: I thought this would be good but didn't knew this would be so good. Even many Japanese novels don't have the kind of hook that makes the reader feel fascinated by the story in the prologue itself. I honestly can't wait to read more.VRMMO: The Returnee · C1
Spade_Z_: ♠️💚VRMMO: The Returnee · C16
ishaanagni: Nice chapter, but do you want power stones in this novel or top star because I am currently giving all my power stones to top starVRMMO: The Returnee · C16
one_chance: An amazing story. The author has nicely displayed the world of VR in this story. Fight scenes are nicely portrayed. While the concept seems similar to other stories, the skills to write a good story must be noted. The development is well paced and I look forward to the updates. Nice workVRMMO: The Returnee
Rifle: Enjoying the story so far.
The book contains strong resemblance to other VRMMO novels, that's to be expected. The author even mentioned that it was inspired by the likes. Just thought to mention that first and foremost.
What separates this from other novels of this genre is the MC, who is a returner from a Isekai world. I like his thought process. He thinks through things and knows what he's doing. His expierence in the Isekai world heightened his senses, and while you might say that makes him OP, and the story boring, the author depicts it as a liability. I want to see him overcome that.
As mentioned before, the story is very much inspired by other novels of the genre. Thus, the world-building inside is very similar/the same to those of other stories. As a avid Eastern fantasy/lit rpg reader, I would've like to see some differences.
Finally, I want to conclude this review with words about the writing. Info dumps are relatively low, and grammar is above average. I notice though the structure and fluidity between paragraphs can be improved on. There can be some rewording and better word choices to make the writing sound not so bland and flat.
All in all, this is a great read for fans of LitRPG and VRMMO. Characters are great and story develops very well. I hope author keeps up the good work.
Happy reading!VRMMO: The Returnee
HanRyang5: Hello, hello! I come from your other story! Seems like this will be about E-sport? Lets see where this goes!VRMMO: The Returnee · C1
Killerbee: So, here is your author here but I will not just give a shameless review here. I will tell you all the good and the bad points of this novel.
You can decide to read it or not after that.
The good points:
A calm MC: Lu Fei is mature, not brainless just because he's OP or something. He used to be a mercenary in a fantasy world, so he experienced the so called human nature there. He's not a guy who would blush talking to girls or hesitate to even insult them.
The game: Ark is going to be one of the highlights of the novel as the whole novel is mostly based on it. NPCs would just like be regular people and the interaction between them and Lu Fei would be one of the highlights of the novel.
Weak to strong: Lu Fei would not just become too OP from the start. He would struggle and even die sometimes but he would still be stronger than an average player.
Romance: It's one of the points I am confident you will like. It's going to be sweet, like really sweet. There would be more than one girl liking him but I can't say about the harem.
Characters: Characters would be unique and even some typical characters will have some unique points or a back story.
Chapters: The chapters will be 2k in length, which is above average in WN terms.
The bad points:
The start: The first ten chapters can get annoying to some people as there would be some info dump and the game part will only start on the 6th chapter.
Similar start: Many people will feel that the start is similar to other novels. A debt and a sister to take care of, but it will change as the story will progress.
Plot holes: There would be some plot holes in the novel. I can't do anything about it as every novel have it.
Not an OP MC: I know that VR novels in WN is filled with an OP MC who had come from the future and knows everything. This is bad point because most of the users look for an OP MC.
I can't think of more bad points and it's up to the readers to decide in the end.
I will advise the readers to read both bad and good reviews before reading the novel. Give a review, either positive or negative.
I don't think there would be any problems with the grammar unless one is a grammar Nazi. I will end my words here.VRMMO: The Returnee
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Ravindra_Bisht: It's great novel Author.Everyone should give it a chance.Mc is cool and calm.He is going to be Op because of his 10 years experience.
I just hope Author that he would not become scarred in front of girls.(typical mc who fears and can't even talk to a beautiful girl)
Let's see how would this novel continue.VRMMO: The Returnee
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