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Not “revising”— which means changing something— but reviewing, which means examining in this context.

Qin Wentian withdrew one of the books from the bookshelf, sat down cross-leggedly, and began revising it’s content. After which, he withdrew his silver needles and inserted them into the various acupuncture points located in his head region. After a few moments, Qin Wentian could feel the effect taking place; the radiant corona of golden light began to diminish in brilliance. This technique would only affect the intensity of the Astral Light. Despite dimming the light reflected, the might contained within the Astral Soul was still unchanged.

Ancient Godly Monarch

Ancient Godly Monarch

Eastern Fantasy · Jing Wu Hen

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Ah, I like this directness! Instead of invoking the euphimistic “cultivating incubator,” just call it what it really is: *** slave.

Qin Yin followed him hurriedly once more. "Only death awaits me if I stay outside, Senior Brother Di. This is not because of my appearance, but because I possess the most suitable constitution to become a sex slave."

Ninth In the World

Ninth In the World

Eastern Fantasy · Goose Five

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Now that’s a refereshing first! Normally xinxia sexytime is referred to by the more circumspect term “dual cultivation.”

"I have never heard of the True Li Sword Sect before. I will forgive you this time, as you are considerably pretty. Otherwise, there would be nothing the True Li Sword Sect's Void Spirit cultivators could have done if my sect master came," said Di Jiu with a chuckle. After feigning arrogance, he walked in a circle around Qin Yin and clicked his tongue. "Junior Sister Yin'er, why don't you become my partner in cultivation intercourse?"

Ninth In the World

Ninth In the World

Eastern Fantasy · Goose Five

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Oh, you naughty THOT.

Jing Mobing only cared about the Foundation Quintessential Elixirs and any other elixirs that Di Jiu possessed. In her opinion, Di Jiu should probably have some other elixirs besides the Foundation Quintessential Elixir. However, she did not tell Senior Brother Wan about this.

Ninth In the World

Ninth In the World

Eastern Fantasy · Goose Five

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Now the flyng boat is a spaceship. Sure, why not? Later in the story, it will become a Golden Roc with a wingspan of a million kilometers, easily able to transport a major continent complete with thousands of cities. In short, I’m no longer expecting consistency n this dumpster fire of a novel.

When he saw Di Jiu come out, Zheng Feisheng quickly stepped forward and said, "Brother Zimo, our spaceship has come across a Beast Tide. Don't worry, though. The flying boat that travels to the Sky Screen meets this kind of Beast Tide often. Under normal circumstances, it is not fatal. We still have to go up, though. If the flying boat has to face the monsters, anyone who does not go out to deal with them will be kicked out immediately."

Ninth In the World

Ninth In the World

Eastern Fantasy · Goose Five

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Cannon fodder refers to the frontline pawns in a military battle. The more apt term for the role Di Jiu has been forced in to is either “patsy” or “fall guy.”

To put it bluntly, Di Jiu was nothing but cannon fodder the hunchback had thrown at the Qi Family's Commercial Building to divert the attention away from himself.

Ninth In the World

Ninth In the World

Eastern Fantasy · Goose Five

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Man, I hate hot heat! I’d rather have cold heat any day. /s

Before Di Jiu could consider what type of array disc the hunchback had, the hunchback's array disc was activated. In less than a minute, Di Jiu saw the hunchback's array disc ignite a mysterious ripple that collided with the cave abode's Defense Array. The fifth-level peak Defense Array split and created a path full of hot heat.

Ninth In the World

Ninth In the World

Eastern Fantasy · Goose Five

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That’s right. Di Jiu nearly dies because of arrogance, realizes his error, but then seems to forget the humbling lesson and goes on to suffer another near-fatal encounter due to more arrogance. I get that the author should give the protagonist a character flaw or two to increase tension in the story, but this repeated rinse and repeat arrogance is getting stale.

He was too arrogant. This would not have been a problem if he had possessed a higher cultivation level, but he was just a measly Foundation Establishment cultivator. The reason he was so arrogant was because he was a fifth-level array formation master and his cultivation had always been smooth.

Ninth In the World

Ninth In the World

Eastern Fantasy · Goose Five

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Because the author apparently forgot this specific detail in his own story. As I recall, Di Jiu had deemed the third jade slip, the one with all the array specifics, as “garbage.” Naturally, he made this premature judgment out of ignorance, which seems to be an ongoing flaw in Di Jiu’s supposed genius-level “intelligence.”

When he was free, he would have to spend a lot of time researching the array formation and the three jade slips Ai Di had taken. It seemed like those jade slips were still very valuable, so as soon as he got back, he would take the Crimson Sea Array Sect's refining jade slip from Ai Di.

Ninth In the World

Ninth In the World

Eastern Fantasy · Goose Five

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Or, in other words, his ambitions have become bigger than his fat gut!

"Now you are my Big Brother and class monitor, Di Jiu. You are so wise and heroic. You even saved He Tai! If we used my talent in martial arts and your talent in medicine, we could conquer the Fairy Planet!" After attaining the late-stage Yellow Tier, Pang Fan's lofty ambitions had risen even quicker than his cultivation level.

Ninth In the World

Ninth In the World

Eastern Fantasy · Goose Five

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