Webnovel Author: Tsumihoshi - Fanfic Collection

Tsumihoshi

2mth

Replied to Redniro

True Vampires, in all Fiction, are always at least unageing as long as they continue to feed on human blood regularly. There are, of course, variations as many as there are stars in the sky, but the foundation of vampirism is blood and immortality. This has always been the case, at least in every single piece of fiction about vampires that I have ever read. It is a plothole in the Canon Universe. If vampirism worked properly in Canon, everyone able would choose to become a Vampire (at least every rich person, as it would be easy for them to procure human blood en masse). Immortality? And all it takes is a bit of human blood a day or perhaps even only once a week? One would be a fool to not take that chance.

[You'll probably need multiple partners to be honest. The more powerful you get as a Fallen… the stronger your urges will get unless they are routinely taken care of. I bet your regretting not picking human as a starting race right about now ;) ]

The Fallen Gamer (MarvelxDXDxMulticross)

Movies · StarWaves

Tsumihoshi

7mth

Commented

Hmm. This has potential even if the english is shaky. I personally don't like the 2 personalities in one body sub-plot, it never reads comfortably. It'd be best to remove this "Naraku" from Great Sage.

ch 19 Kidnapped

Marvel: Become a slime

Anime & Comics · Rei444

Tsumihoshi

7mth

Commented

I really don't like this Naraku part. Great Sage should be Great Sage until she becomes Raphael. There is no need for this random body-hijacking plot.

[Why are you taking back your body?]

Marvel: Become a slime

Anime & Comics · Rei444

Tsumihoshi

11mth

Commented

Hah, idiot. The only thing you could want is for someone you can see yourself loving to be so wholly in love with yourself that they would destroy the universe for you. There is literally nothing better in terms of romance.

"Do you still hate him?" I don't know why I'm still here but maybe, just maybe, she would not grow up to be crazy Wanda if I could help.

The Vision

Movies · QuackVader

Tsumihoshi

11mth

Replied to Reyviel_Faesly

And it really is Apathy that is the true Peak. Love can be found if you allow it to enter your heart. Hate can be all-consuming and comes from the deepest of depths within you. True Apathy is a choice. (Do not confuse it with the base numbness that something like depression could create. True Apathy is more than that. But real Apathy also means that you are soon going to die. Human beings cannot survive when they are empty and have lost the ability to care about their own survival.)

Hate. Such a wonderful emotion. The only human emotion that can completely destroy the feeling of love.

The Vision

Movies · QuackVader

Tsumihoshi

1yr

Commented

Well, personally, I don't know, but this seems like a deal-breaker kind of thing. Tickling torture is a thing after all. It's not pain, but it sucks energy and resistance and will like not many other things can. There is base pain, then there is things like this, and then there is sensory deprivation for example by making someone lie in a room full of cotton or something and taking away their sight, hearing, taste, smell and touch. Of course, the most interesting torture is emotional torture.

After an unknown amount of time, Robin decided that Cherry had paid for her crimes in full and released her from her bindings.

One Piece: Dream of Immortality

Anime & Comics · ScarletArboretum

Tsumihoshi

1yr

Commented

This cultivator's speak is extremely funny when it's so out of place in this universe. Well done.

"You're ready to stop hiding behind these weaklings now, are you Gan Fall? That's good because I was getting bored. It should be fun teaching you how high the heavens are..." Cherry finished, launching herself towards him.

One Piece: Dream of Immortality

Anime & Comics · ScarletArboretum

Tsumihoshi

1yr

Replied to Uchiwa_Madara

It's not so bad because it's not done seriously. Some characters will really believe that they are talented. That is when it really gets annoying.

"I'm indeed a genius in alchemy!"

I Became A Cannon Fodder In A Female Protagonist Cultivation Novel

Eastern · Countless Cold Autumn In Dreams

Tsumihoshi

1yr

Commented

Brothers, sometimes we can admit that another guy is like, cool and handsome, no? I'm not particularly interested in males or girls either way, but we all have eyes. And, it'd be easy to live as a girl if you are pretty enough. Sure, there are different hardships, but we know how simple males ultimately are. If you are pretty enough, you can attract a high-tier male and you'll automatically become a winner in life just by virtue of that. Let's not lie to ourselves here. Of course, if a girl is ugly, life is worse for them than for any ugly guy out there. That's just how society is.

"Moreover, it's hard to seduce the female lead's admirers… They are all powerful in their own ways. For example, the loyal Core Formation stage admirer, or the cool Lord of the Immortal City…"

I Became A Cannon Fodder In A Female Protagonist Cultivation Novel

Eastern · Countless Cold Autumn In Dreams

Tsumihoshi

1yr

Commented

Yes, but actually no. Because it's never JUST strength. It's also aura, personality, atmosphere. Being beautiful or handsome is a side-boon to real strength. You need all of it to become truly extraordinary.

He believed that everything should be based on cultivation.

I Became A Cannon Fodder In A Female Protagonist Cultivation Novel

Eastern · Countless Cold Autumn In Dreams

Tsumihoshi

1yr

Commented

It should help focus your will. And will is important when performing any technique.

"But more importantly, what should I hunt today… hmm, I haven't had wild Ox meat for quite a while." Luffy nodded to himself, then mumbled silently, "Soru." It was quite fun, speaking out named moves like an anime character, he grinned.

One Piece: The Unreal Adventure

Anime & Comics · Fallen_Crown

Tsumihoshi

1yr

Commented

Guys, it's actually a good name. They are brothers, showing affection is allowed. From whom else are they going to get it anyway.

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One Piece: The Unreal Adventure

Anime & Comics · Fallen_Crown

Tsumihoshi

1yr

Commented

But that's simply not true. Compared to humans, you are strong. But there will always be bigger mountains in the Universe. If you have a way to infinitely grow your power, not using it would be a crime against yourself.

But now that I was no longer weak, why did I still want more?

The Average DC Experience (COMPLETED)

Anime & Comics · Wicked132

Tsumihoshi

1yr

Commented

You aren't there yet.

My biggest concerns were to fly under everyone's radar and steadily grow more powerful. And yet here I am today, strong enough to do whatever I wanted whenever I wanted.

The Average DC Experience (COMPLETED)

Anime & Comics · Wicked132

Tsumihoshi

1yr

Commented

These "rants" are not helping anything, just so you know. It just breeds dislike with readers. This story is pretty good. I wouldn't have started when it only had 100 chapters because the chapters are incredibly small for the pace, this is true, regardless of what may be said. At this pace, with this amount of chapters, each chapter should have 3000-5000 words. They don't. This is fine. It's pretty good.

Author's note: many people are complaining about the story's slow pace, and to that, I say go fuck yourselves. Get the hint already, my dudes, it's been more than 200 chapters with the same slow pace, and it's not going to change just because you keep whining about it like little bitches.

The Average DC Experience (COMPLETED)

Anime & Comics · Wicked132

Tsumihoshi

1yr

Commented

So what if she believes herself right? Her opinions, feelings, her everything, is invalid if you want it to be.

Waller was a bitch, but she had her reasons. It wouldn't stop me from taking her down, nor do I particularly sympathize with her or think her actions are justified. But ultimately, Waller does what she does because she believes it's the right thing.

The Average DC Experience (COMPLETED)

Anime & Comics · Wicked132

Tsumihoshi

1yr

Commented

This is the natural progression. Someone will touch your bottom line eventually and you will use your powers to eradicate them, regardless of consequences. That is Will, that is Power. You can choose to be nothing, or to be a Force. Killing, in the end, is not that crazy a thing to do. It is natural. You might be revolted at first, or think it to be immoral, but in the end, these petty feelings will fade. After a few murders, maybe even after the first one, you will no longer consider it to be as devastating as before. It is merely your prior socialization talking, this isn't you, you don't have an innate moral compass. It is taught. If it sticks, wonderful, you are "normal". Of course, this is just how I see things, I'm not an expert on psychology after all.

Yes, you heard right. I killed a man, not on accident, not in self-defense. I murdered and tortured The Riddler in cold blood. I was fully aware of my actions. I did it merely for my satisfaction, and I slept like one satisfied fucking baby.

The Average DC Experience (COMPLETED)

Anime & Comics · Wicked132

Tsumihoshi

1yr

Commented

That does make more sense now. Because the writing really did not reflect his apparent anger issues. He rightfully got angry when provoked and attacked, that is normal. But I can see how this, as described in the story, could happen.

"You didn't realize it as the anger was deeply rooted in your mind... it was already part of your being..."

The Average DC Experience (COMPLETED)

Anime & Comics · Wicked132

Tsumihoshi

1yr

Commented

Again, ridiculous. It's just not matching up with what we are being shown. He is hypnotizing himself into believing it to be true.

Discovering I was ticking a time bomb, waiting to explode at any second, and not being aware of the fact was unsettling, and it led to the first argument I've ever had with my teacher for not telling me about it.

The Average DC Experience (COMPLETED)

Anime & Comics · Wicked132

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