Webnovel Author: kazuma123 - Fanfic Collection

kazuma123

3yr

Posted

it's so hard to find a novel with good grammar!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Mason Aves: The Wizard [DROPPED]

Movies · HelloDarkness07

kazuma123

3yr

Posted

i just think it needs a editor or the person who put it up to reread it and correct some things and some things are stupid and others make no sense

Naruto Time Control (by Ye Nan Tin Feng)

Anime & Comics · dbdel123

kazuma123

3yr

Posted

It's not bad, some things are not as good as i thought it would be but altogether it's not half bad. It does needs someone to proofread though and change some things but besides that its pretty good.

Wizarding World: Arcturus Black

Movies · Fanfiction_Fanatic

kazuma123

3yr

Posted

it's a pretty good book it could have been a little better but so far not bad.... .......................................................................

kazuma123

3yr

Posted

it needs the auther to reread and edit it...................................................................... .......................................

kazuma123

3yr

Replied to Tezmaster

it was way bad before 700 chapters already

kazuma123

3yr

Posted

It's not bad at the beginning but it turns into trash in the middle................... ................................................................

kazuma123

3yr

Posted

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Reincarnation in One Piece: The Adventure of Ian Louis! [COMPLETE!]

Anime & Comics · CrazyGuest

kazuma123

3yr

Commented

I don't understand this part, there is bad grammar in this entire thing!

"I'll have you know if it wasn't for was in here you would most likely be dead. Honestly, after over a week of you doing not much more than breathing and eating whatever mashed up food or water I could get down your throat I was ready to declare you dead in truth, being brain dead practically is a death anyhow. Also you are lucky the ealdorman paid me to care for you and is paying for replacement sheets you shit and pissed all over as well." the old woman stated plainly.