Webnovel Author: dallaswander_ - Novel Collection

Sorry, I just read until Chapter 9. But this book screams “Showing”. Ever heard of “Show don’t tell”? This book is descriptive especially in the Prologue part, the action scene. From Chapter 1-9, the phasing of every chapter is good which makes the story exciting. Sentence construction and the writing tone are also good, makes the story not boring to read. Dialogue and Action tags are used properly. The POV used is fitted on this type of story.

Great book, makes me want more! Your ideas and sentence constructions are good and fitted to the type of your Point of View. The phase of the story is also good that makes the story interesting and not boring.

Settings and scenes were well detailed. The characters’ physical features were also carefully detailed for the readers’ imagination. I love reading and watching this kind of story and plot. *Made me remeber the Love 020 hehe. *I love Ace personality