sleepingdragon69: Amazing so far just please post more as it has a lot of potential also I hope is still gets one for all thank for the novel it is really goodMy Hero Academia: The Grand Gamer
Scam_Artist: Note that my reviews are quite harsh so I'm sorry if I accidently hurt your emotional well-being.
It's quite a common trope, reincarnating into another world, and is usually quite boring. You've managed to write a snazzy redo of the genre that honestly, I quite like. Having the MC reincarnate so early on, during the cretaceous. That's pretty ingenious.
- Original plot
- Nice and enjoyable world building via descriptions.
- Very well written. High quality for WebNovel.
- Interesting main character and even the Gods are fun to read. Heracles for instant, was a douche. Written well!
What needs work?
- Grammar and spelling. Double check or edit.
- Slower development. The power jump seems a bit much for only seven chapters. Maybe make it take longer for MC to gain a omniscient, omnipotent status.DC: God of Evolution (Dropped)
DC: God of Evolution (Dropped)
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