- 0 d Continuous Writing
- 0.6 h of Reading
- 40 Read books
WyattJaymes54
male LV 1Badges 5
Moments 16
1yr
Commented Sounds like a horror version of star trek
2yr
Commented Very easy and interesting to read
ch 0 4 Arrival
She Belongs To The Devil
Fantasy · sanimimosa7
2yr
Commented this is a very good story. however you have problems with missing words in sentences. I suggest reading the sentences out loud to yourself and adding the words that flow into the sentence. Other than that this is a great read. you have exceptional talent. Your characters are really well developed. I really enjoyed reading this. I can't wait to see more from you.
ch 0 1 SATURDAY
Jacob Mornings
Action · chimychimes
2yr
Commented You have a good story here. The only problem here is that you have so many misspellings and grammar issues that it's messing with the flow of the story. All in all, this is a great book. It has a good writing style and it is a good idea. Keep writing! I can't wait to see more from you!!!
ch 0 1 CHAPTER ONE
THE DEAD KING'S PROXY
Fantasy · grim_reaper_4698
2yr
Commented This is a good story. The idea is there. The only problem is the flow of the sentences. You have a good writing style. But you need to read the sentences out loud to yourself cuz you're having problems with words need to be added into the sentence or words being in the wrong spot. Other than that it was a good read. keep writing. Can't wait to see an update for the story!!
ch 0 2 Bad day for Angelina every day
THE ZODIAC SERIES : C A P R I C O R N (THE SHY PSYCHOPATH)
Teen · Juan_2032
2yr
Commented This is very good. The world you crafted quite good. This is a great book and has good potential. I can't wait to read more. But one thing I would like to know is why Issac has been hospitalized all his life. His he physically/mentally ill? What are his thoughts behind being in this predicament?
ch 0 1 Beginning
Dragon Ball Rebirth
Anime & Comics · NekoScribe
2yr
Commented This is really good. You have crafted a good world for your characters. But the thing this story lacks is conflict. Yes her lover is Dracula, but how does that pertain to the story? Is Dracula the villain? If so, explain on how it came to be that the MC fell in love with the enemy. This story has great potential. I will definitely add it to my collection.
ch 0 1 CHAPTER.01 PRELIMINARY
MY LOVER IS DRACULA (English Version)
Fantasy · Febyola_Manoppo
2yr
Commented I love this story. You have exceptional talent. I would like some more action though.
ch 0 1 Princess Savage
The Bloody Angel
Teen · listen_moon
2yr
Commented This a very good story. I very much like how you drew your readers into the story. Your characters are so life-like. But they lack emotion and its very hard to see where your characters are coming from. I suggest including the characters' thoughts and emotions to those thoughts and the emotions to what's happening around them.
ch 0 1 CHAPTER 1
THE KINGDOM OF AMARIS
Fantasy · Valentina_Gift
WyattJaymes54
ch 0 2 Chapter 2
Bored Gamer in Other Worlds
Fantasy · The_Procrastinator