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Titan_King: Sweet new transformation but please explain the limits of his power next time.

Jurassic Hero (Boku no Hero Academia Fanfic). · C163
1 month ago

Ziavory: 😑 Why is this in the top 10?
Don't listen to the reviews, at most this story is average. It started out interesting but the mc acts like a generic, hotblooded 16 year old with very little development in the brain section.
Excluding the fact that the world seems to revolve around him, he's op in the bad way.
And the 'politics' in this world seems a bit...childish.
Because it's totally normal how the mc who was an average guy in his past life is so much more cunning then the seasoned, old adults. Go read Joy of life or something for better, more realistic politics.
The story is not bad, but it's also not good.
It's Meh.

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1 month ago

TRUCK_KUN: Wow author really went on a bender this time hell i almost thought he was the troll till i saw the username classic anger issues bruh

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1 month ago

SorcererCat: I agree with you. He is a good writer. However, EVERY single girl in the story is HOT for the MC. It is fine when it is a few or several girls. There are almost no normal girls or guys in the story. All but 2 of his entire guild (Familia) is made up of his Harem of girls that are chasing after him or sleeping with him.

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1 month ago

SorcererCat: Quite true! I tired to leave a 3 star review like this a few days ago and it was Deleted.

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1 month ago

DannyDao: So far from the reviews I read, author doesn't like criticism.

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1 month ago

Zyvers: Well i think my brain do have some problems since here i am replying to a puny minded author that doesn’t accept bad reviews. Heck, you even criticize me for saying good things which is kinda brainless since i am only stating my positive and negative viewpoints. Instead of taking it constructively you just had to view everything personally with your high ego huh. You just don’t get it do you, the reason many people states the same thing is because we all share the same view and definitely is a problem which should be taken a point of instead of yapping to the reviewers who are just stating their viewpoints. Well i’ll just stop here since i hate to waste more time typing comments that would just end up in circles and pointless since author just can’t take any bad things regarding his novel.

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1 month ago

Zyvers: This is my first comment and im the type of reader that usually stays silent and create an account for the sole purpose of reading. I know that author would probably critizise me (like seriously i have read some of the bad reviews and none of them is heartfully accepted by the author which kinda ticks me off since most of what they write is kinda true or similar to what i have in mind).

So moving on to the reviews, like most people said it starts off quite well in the first 100 chapters but quickly goes downhill as girls quickly fall for him for no apparent reasons (except for some of them), probably the moment they met tiona, aiz and others from the loki familia. I understand if its only Tiona since she is an amazon, but for the others like aiz to fall for him so quickly is kinda inconsistent with their canon characteristics which kinda disappoints me. It also disappoints me that author makes all the notable girls in that world to fall for him and makes the story terrible as there are too many girls falling for him and making the story goes out of hand. Moreover, since vahn is still in his first world i can’t imagine how bad it will be when he goes to other worlds and have all the girls throwing themselves at him like whores and taking all the notable girls within that world like danmachi ones.

I think author has some talent for writing action since the action scenes are really quite good in my opinion so i think its a shame for the author to drop the action and focus solely on slice of life. Author also have good writing skills and grammar since they are easy to read and understand with only very few mistakes.

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1 month ago

Heavens_Son: Author seems a bit mad here. It's not a good look.

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1 month ago

Wallker: Author is a shameless person who deletes bad reviews

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1 month ago

Intra_Cetum: Author censors reviews, do not believe the high positive ratings you see. Not sure why the website allows for authors to do this ****. Disgusting.

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1 month ago

Wallker: Author is a shameless person who deletes bad reviews

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1 month ago

Intra_Cetum: Author deletes reviews and comments that criticize the novel. Only wants fluffy love letters in the comment section. Multiple people have said their posts were deleted, and I have commented on those posts so I know there are literally dozens of people the author is censoring. Disgusting.

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1 month ago

Wallker: Author is a shameless person who deletes bad reviews

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1 month ago

lukereps: he's not very good at taking criticism

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1 month ago

Intra_Cetum: Not sure why the author let this review stay, since he's an ignorant piece of **** who I've seen delete dozens of reviews and comments. Maybe he wants to keep one so he can look like he's not a dictator piece of **** who censors all the reviews ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

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1 month ago

Nydre: You don't have the right to speak for the majority, and it ain't nice. It's boring and stupid. Nothing happens, other novels with slice of life show the MC progressing to achieve his goal while this... Is just life. Girl introduced, girl get. His harem members fall like flies and their personalities are superficial. Overall it's boring, whenever he used to fight anything there was literally no danger. Bell the now side character risks his life to get stronger in order to reach his goal, without a system or special blood just his personality and love. I really don't like bell but when compared against vanth... He seems like a kid spoiled by everyone.

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1 month ago

Nydre: He wouldn't have said anything if the author didn't argue.... Also if it's painful tell him to stop releasing his anger on the reviewers.

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1 month ago

lukereps: Lol I stopped reading a long time ago, but the review is there forever. You should really think sometimes.

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1 month ago

lukereps: Aww does it hurt your ego to know that your story isn't as good as you think it is? How sad! What's even worse is that you basically reply the same thing to all the people who has given you a low rating. No originality, not a good writer. I give it a 2 star. 😂

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1 month ago

Wallker: Author is a shameless person who deletes bad reviews

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1 month ago

Undereducated: https://forum.webnovel.com/d/25834-why-are-authors-and-translators-allowed-to-artificially-boosting-their-ratings
exactly this guy, abusing the system

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1 month ago

Intra_Cetum: Seriously hate this author. If you hate your work being taken for granted, how do you think your reviewers feel when you DELETE THEIR REVIEWS AND POSTS!?!

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1 month ago

SorcererCat: I tired to leave a 3 star review like this a few days ago and it was Deleted. It is easy to have a HIGH review rate when you delete anything that isn't 5 stars. It is fine when it is a few girls but it is EVERY single girl in the story that is HOT for him. There are almost no normal girls or guys in the story. All but 2 of his entire guild (Familia) is made up of his Harem of girls that are chasing after him or sleeping with him.

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1 month ago

SorcererCat: I tired to leave a 3 star review like this a few days ago and it was Deleted. It is fine when it is a few girls but it is EVERY single girl in the story that is HOT for him. There are almost no normal girls or guys in the story. All but 2 of his entire guild (Familia) is made up of his Harem of girls that are chasing after him or sleeping with him.

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1 month ago

Undereducated: https://forum.webnovel.com/d/25834-why-are-authors-and-translators-allowed-to-artificially-boosting-their-ratings
exactly this guy, abusing the system

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1 month ago

Wallker: Author is a shameless person who deletes bad reviews

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1 month ago

Wallker: Author is a shameless person who deletes bad reviews

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1 month ago
Honestly man, you have been going into the reviews and just telling everyone with less than 3 star reviews why they are wrong for not liking your fic and insulting people who provide criticism or reasons. It's understandable to be upset when someone dislikes a free story that you have obviously put a lot of effort and dedication into, but if you feel the need to respond to bad reviews by deleting them or leaving nasty comments, it should be pretty clear who is being negative. The review section is there for people to say how they felt about the story, not to be the author's private hugbox. View More

Einlion: There is a difference between criticism and complaining. You provided no beneficial information, only negativity. Get over yourself.

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1 month ago

aguy: The first 100 chapters were fine. A few bits that made it obvious author was finding their feet with the writing, pacing etc. A good mix of character growth, leveling up, fighting, etc. Pretty much what I was expecting.

But then. Oh dear god. It's almost like the author's bad-romance-obsessed twin took over or something. A *hard* veer into pure fluffy harem land that's lasted about a full length novel. Holy cow. It's the literary equivalent of trying to finish a bottomless chocolate milkshake. Nice when it's accompanying a good steak or burger, but after a while you get a brain freeze and go into a diabetic coma. That was about 30 chapter ago, and it *just won't stop*.

Not to mention, the harem just keeps growing. I'm not sure why the author has the MC trying to go the Solomon route (1000 wives and concubines) but that seems to be the case. So instead of legit character development with some sort of defined story-arc, it just blends together in this repetitive merry-go-round of dates, fooling-around, and an occasional bit of (not very good) emotional drama. It's like watching a bad soap-opera. I have no idea why or how the author thought this might be a good idea, beyond possibly catering to a patreon base which can't pick a best girl (or three-five) and instead gave us *this*.

When it's harder to keep track of your characters than in George R.R. Martin's ASoIaF, you've messed up. We passed that territory dozens of chapters back, and *just kept going*.

After a while, it looked like the author had recognized that problem and was going to (finally) bring things back in to the story I started reading. Even the characters were discussing how this story-line had become the literary equivalent of a cultivation novel's heart-devil. But no, it was just an excuse to focus on *yet another* "best girl".

I'm also unsure if the author has spoken to a girl. I'm not exactly the moral champion of monogamy, but poly relationships are like chemistry; any reaction which requires more than three individual (molecules) coming into contact at a time gets *very* improbable, and adding people is an exponential issue rather than a linear one. In other words, finding the right(ish) girl? 1 in, say, 20. Two of them? 1 in 400. More? How much are you going to strain our belief...

... Not to mention scheduling issues. Even if they double up they'd get less than a night a week. Love's not an assembly line, and if you think it is I shudder for any partners you might have.

At this point, I'm scrolling through, hoping to find the end of this interminable harem bonanza before my patience with the story evaporates entirely.

I am impressed by the sheer quantity the author has managed. But perhaps a bit more thought into the story itself would keep the quality a bit higher. The author is capable of it, or at least managed a full novel's worth of it. By sheer fluke seems unlikely, but I wouldn't dispute it if someone said it was written by someone other than the more recent parts. I'd like that first part, the part that's kept me going through chapter after chapter of this rom-trash, to come back.

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