Nmastte

6mth

Commented

Wow, I'm coming back to this after a while, a lot of memories while reading it again.

ch 0 7 Chapter 7

With stands from jojo in onepiece(fck this this is dropped )

Fantasy · Kopie

Nmastte

6mth

Replied to DonaldSenju

So, as far as we can see, he totally could have, and on the last mission he would have won a lot more alone

But now, as we appeared in God's dimension, some for the first time, and for the fourth time for me and Johnathan, I only felt pride as I said, "God, heal everyone with my Points."

Nmastte

7mth

Replied to Yfhu

she said that, so it's not an explanation but a point of view , she liebe manipulativ or anything else

This time, Sarah didn't seem to have any argument left. Still, she ended up grabbing my face, and planted a kiss on my lips before saying, "Have some trust in us, then. We are going to win."

Nmastte

7mth

Replied to FangYuan1234

I think you misunderstood me I'm implying that if you really use that word I feel sorry for you, not that the "word" is misused for the character

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Floating through the multiverse

Movies · FangYuan1234

Nmastte

7mth

Commented

I hope the use of TopG here is more satirical than anything else, otherwise I can only feel sorry for you...

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Floating through the multiverse

Movies · FangYuan1234

Nmastte

7mth

Commented

It's ridiculous why nothing has anything to do with the mission he did? Besides, I don't mind you making your character look broken, but it's totally lacking in subtlety and logic.

[Shuten Doji's Mask: Doubles Reaction Speed and increases damage with swords by 30%.]

Nmastte

8mth

Commented

I don't know, am I the only one who still doesn't like it? And who still finds that she stays with the Mc like a puppy, makes her seem even more forgettable to me.

Viera is definitely more than a friend, but romantic feelings are a bit...

Nmastte

9mth

Replied to Nmastte

I was talking about the beginning of the chapter, which I found more cringe than cool, not the thing after.

ch 94 Half Transcendent?

Nmastte

9mth

Commented

I say it for me you've done too much with this chapter it's just become ridiculous ...

ch 94 Half Transcendent?

Nmastte

9mth

Commented

I have to say that for me it's this part that seems like a 14-year-old's fantasy.

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Nmastte

9mth

Commented

I really don't think romance is for you, Mr. Author...

ch 66 3.28

Nmastte

9mth

Commented

Why does every phase of this romance have to be so cliché I beg you stop just make it normal at least ...

As for me, I was still on top of the castle, but this time with my head laying against Sarah's thighs as she fiddled with my hair.

Nmastte

9mth

Commented

This amount of cliché + empty chapter . I received very powerful mental damage. Added Sarha's character, who seems incredibly fake to me, it was a very long chapter.

ch 65 3.27

Nmastte

9mth

Commented

liar

"... Not as bad as I thought." Philip replied with a scoff

Nmastte

9mth

Commented

I'm on the verge of lodging a complaint of defamation against murlocs, they're a sensitive race and just as humanoid as worgen are, so this is just filthy defamation from a racist, worthy of an Alliance player ....

ch 0 1 Author Note

The Odd Shaman (Read A/N for further info)

Video Games · QuiteSarcastic

Nmastte

9mth

Replied to ManasCiel

And besides, these are things that just about anyone would be likely to do.

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I'm not upset, just that every cliché makes me bitter this one too, I rather think you're the one who's upset considering the last sentence even though you could answer normally. Also a fact for you perhaps, but for me moderately I suppose that your entourage is not the same as mine.

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Zero Fate against the world

Video Games · Abadom

Nmastte

9mth

Commented

Other than the slightly misogynistic idea that a woman should always take hours in weeb works, why, if they can change in 5 minutes, have they taken so long?