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Ummm... did something get cut from the middle of this chapter? Also since when was that relationship “fragile”?

That gif is perfect 👌

Another chapter?!?! Woohoo!!! Thanks!

What is this? A mass release? Please, by all means, continue!

Will Joshua bring the “constant sale” business model to his new world?

Welp, once that spreads the reputation of the church should take a nosedive, at least in Norland.

Yeah, the Inquisition Leader will probably kill Messai before they go through the portal, to expedite the trial process. Claim there was no time for a full trial in the battlefield or something. Better than letting word of the Inquisitors weird actions get out.

It’s not the church, exactly. It’s the Cthulhu-esk monster that the Inquisitors get power from.

Well that’s one hell of a cliff.

Please update faster! This novel is dropping through the ranks!

I really hope Dubhe gets caught in the fallout from this- his one and only disciple corrupted the heirs of the AMAW! And yeah, I bet it’s Chu behind the scenes. It would be great if Dubhe gets tricked into wiping out the Chu family!

I love how the Gma forgetting demons don’t have mana was foreshadowed by Gma missing a few runes pre-calming aura- makes it super believable that she was just too stressed, and missed it. Awesome writing author!

Why’s it always got to be rape? Chinese novels are just addicted to rape.

A***. I was really hoping her ex-husband would be his dead brother, it would have been really beautiful. Oh well.

Lol that sounded kinda negative. Love the story, Author!

I know a lot of people are saying to go with a Roman-esque system for the military, but given the communication technology they seem to have, why not go with a modern military system? The Roman system was built in a world where traveling from one end of the empire to another could take years, so legions had to be highly independent, since commands from the capital would only reach them well after the war was won or lost. In the world you’ve written, information can flow much faster, so armies can be commanded far more centrally, reducing the risk of revolt and coup de ta. Additionally, if travel from one side of the empire to another is relatively quick, you don’t even need to station forces in the place they’re recruited, or even in one place the whole time; a system like the US where armed forces are sent to bases across the country for training, and then sent elsewhere for combat, could help minimize the loyalty soldiers feel for individual commanders, and lower chances of revolt, since your family is somewhere else in the empire. Additionally, this system allows soldiers to be thrust into an environment that makes them vulnerable to brainwash-ahem- training, so fanati-ahem patriotism can be fostered more easily. Side note- the idea of national identity is a very modern idea, appearing around WW1- does it exist in your world? Our MC could intentionally foster it if not! If it is, why? Second side note- people rarely revolt when they’re happy with the status quo, ie, they have enough food, they have upward mobility, economy is doing well. Almost all revolts in history happened when people were hungry, felt trapped, or had some other major complaint. Why are people of the empire revolting so easily? Are there some systemic inequalities in the empire? Are the local nobles not treating the people right? Is there a drought?

It’s a mythical horse ridden by a dragon. Take your sense and sleep with it, good sir.

Does Kat get paid in currency for her summoning? I feel like this must have been discussed, I just can’t remember when. I guess I assumed it was like a lot of “system” novels where they get paid with more powers.