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    The Elemental Knights

    Fantasy Action Adventure Romance Magic Fantasy Isekai Knights Forbidden Romance High fantasy Lore

    Have you ever found a book that you loved so much that you wished you could go to that world and meet all those characters that mean so much to you and see all those places you could only visit in your dreams? Well fortunately or unfortunately, Casey Bennett got that chance when he fell into the world of "The Queen's Riders". His entrance into his beloved book may not have been done willingly nor was it very smooth, but he is there nonetheless. His only clue to getting home lies at the end of the story. However, there's a catch, the story he knows so well and the story unfolding in front of him are slightly different. Given a power that had been hidden away for 500 years, Casey must find a way to limit these differences in order to bring about the ending written in his book. A task made even more difficult by the fact that his own presence is already bringing about changes. With the help of the main protagonists of the book, he must navigate through this world that is both familiar and completely alien if he has any hope of going home.

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Conspiracies... View More
The Elemental Knights · C9
1 month ago

ursus010: Curiously, intrigues, conspiracies, the church probably has its own intelligence service inside the Order of the Knights ...

The Elemental Knights · C9
1 month ago
I'll have to look up all of the references you've mentioned so far, I hadn't heard of many of them and they seem interesting. View More
The Elemental Knights · C8
1 month ago

ursus010: This scene in the forest is similar to the approach of a stranger in a hishnik, the same escalating atmosphere ... or like a play of shadows in the low-budget film "cats". But in my opinion it turned out well to convey a sense of ******* ...

The Elemental Knights · C8
1 month ago
That might be a plot hole you found there. The books wouldn't have been able to last as long as they did if they weren't taken care of. Maybe musty wasn't the correct word to use, I'll have to find some other way to describe the smell. View More

ursus010: the musty smell of dust from books suggests that their custodians neglected to air the books every six months, dry them in the sun, and wipe them. But apparently the local archivist was drinking his salary and therefore the books were covered with dust, ticks, mold, which is detrimental to books. Modern book lovers would still have to vacuum every page.

The Elemental Knights · C8
1 month ago

ursus010: the musty smell of dust from books suggests that their custodians neglected to air the books every six months, dry them in the sun, and wipe them. But apparently the local archivist was drinking his salary and therefore the books were covered with dust, ticks, mold, which is detrimental to books. Modern book lovers would still have to vacuum every page.

The Elemental Knights · C8
1 month ago

ursus010: I do not believe! Each library has its own department of internal security. Since there are books in library storages that are closed to ordinary people, in order to access them you need to get permission from the secretary or curator from the security service. So in libraries, a very reliable supervision. And woe to that thief who enters the library at night)))

The Elemental Knights · C8
1 month ago

ursus010: the horse, as I heard, needs to be often cleaned, cleaned, prepared for riding, as it was in the horse armies, every 6 hours. a horse can walk an average of 60-70 km a day, but a distance of 150-170 km can also pass, though then he must rest for 3 days. And caravans on average a day traveled from 30 to 37 km per day. Interesting!

The Elemental Knights · C7
1 month ago

ursus010: Class contradictions always undermined allied relations, as did the Imperials in the beginning, and cannon fodder from the colonies. Together they achieved victory. But then the honors went to the Imperials. That is life.

The Elemental Knights · C6
1 month ago
Something I didn’t know. Seems very interesting. I haven’t looked much into archaeology along the Silk Road but I’ll have to research it some more. I know virtually nothing about archaeology in that area but I am in the middle of reading a book about the excavation of the Ming tombs. The history of the area is one of my favorite sections to study. View More

CapTillon: It is very difficult to read this story. The grammar does need some work. However, as an archaeology student in college, this story's premise really does interest me. Finding lost cities is definitely high on the bucket-lists of most archaeologists. Though this is maybe a little closer to grave robbing than archaeology, it is still very interesting to me.

The Adventures of Treasure Hunters
1 month ago

ursus010: Thank you for your honest review, due to grammatical errors and difficulties to read, I know about this. I have an English third language. Of course in the future it would be nice to train him. In the meantime, I am writing and it is improving a little.
Thanks for your thoughts.

Diggers and search engines cannot work in the "Red Zone". That is, in the area where there are cultural layers, on the territory of cultural heritage monuments entered in the register of the Ministry of Culture, at archaeological sites, near religious buildings, cemeteries, historical monuments. When finding cartridges, weapons, bones or material monuments of cultural heritage, local authorities, state museums, the police, and pastels must be informed about this. So search engines also have their limitations. Yes, and they pay taxes, these are white diggers.

And so the search for the lost cities of the Silk Road is an exciting process, there are about 360 of them!

The Adventures of Treasure Hunters
1 month ago
Thank you for the review! I'm really glad you enjoyed the story so far. View More

ursus010: Synopsis is already fascinating. Let's see how the author managed to develop this idea? Let's go read it! That's how dangerous it immediately gets on its feet, they only need to be hung from the bed))))) Ahahahhahahahaaa !!! The first chapter, the first lines already impress! Not the fact that having reached the end, a literary hero or a real hero will return home. The system is an insidious thing, it will go to the end, and there the system will say, well, the guy you got was a joke. But let's see, the author can also arrange the plot differently. Oh, the protagonist as Princess Alice Melvin from the "pumpkin scissors" had the same gift! The first chapter is amazing, read on! Interestingly, after watching modern horror films, is the hero still afraid of medieval monsters? He should not be afraid of them, if he read a prayer and gained enlightenment of the soul, comprehending the Tao, he would not be afraid of darkness. But probably the young Padawan had not yet comprehended the path and gained the strength of the Jedi. And probably the hero did not look like Bosch and Goi. Oh, the hero seems to have found a room of supremas ?! And now he will become one of the superheroes. Hey man, don’t let out squeals! You got the money, grab and run! Eh, a modern person would understand what happened to him, and some kind of hero turned out to be whispering, not a watchman. But reading is interesting. Third chapter? Oh no, I forgot to read the prologue. And he looks something like the Wizard of the Earthsea, Ursula Le Guin. Tombs of Antoine ?! But now we go to the third chapter, but this is not a typical, classical review, but simply my thoughts after reading the chapters. The author is generally well done, he writes fascinatingly and intriguingly. So after reading one chapter I want to read and find out what happened next ?!

It is very interesting to read, it is written cool, I read up to chapter 6. This novel has potential. I’m sure that in two or three months 100-200 thousand readings will already be read. Only need to properly promote! In the meantime, get 10 reviews to get into the rating. This novel will promote itself. Since the story itself is interesting, understandable, but at the same time intrigue is preserved.

The author of success in creativity !!!

The Elemental Knights
1 month ago

ursus010: Synopsis is already fascinating. Let's see how the author managed to develop this idea? Let's go read it! That's how dangerous it immediately gets on its feet, they only need to be hung from the bed))))) Ahahahhahahahaaa !!! The first chapter, the first lines already impress! Not the fact that having reached the end, a literary hero or a real hero will return home. The system is an insidious thing, it will go to the end, and there the system will say, well, the guy you got was a joke. But let's see, the author can also arrange the plot differently. Oh, the protagonist as Princess Alice Melvin from the "pumpkin scissors" had the same gift! The first chapter is amazing, read on! Interestingly, after watching modern horror films, is the hero still afraid of medieval monsters? He should not be afraid of them, if he read a prayer and gained enlightenment of the soul, comprehending the Tao, he would not be afraid of darkness. But probably the young Padawan had not yet comprehended the path and gained the strength of the Jedi. And probably the hero did not look like Bosch and Goi. Oh, the hero seems to have found a room of supremas ?! And now he will become one of the superheroes. Hey man, don’t let out squeals! You got the money, grab and run! Eh, a modern person would understand what happened to him, and some kind of hero turned out to be whispering, not a watchman. But reading is interesting. Third chapter? Oh no, I forgot to read the prologue. And he looks something like the Wizard of the Earthsea, Ursula Le Guin. Tombs of Antoine ?! But now we go to the third chapter, but this is not a typical, classical review, but simply my thoughts after reading the chapters. The author is generally well done, he writes fascinatingly and intriguingly. So after reading one chapter I want to read and find out what happened next ?!

It is very interesting to read, it is written cool, I read up to chapter 6. This novel has potential. I’m sure that in two or three months 100-200 thousand readings will already be read. Only need to properly promote! In the meantime, get 10 reviews to get into the rating. This novel will promote itself. Since the story itself is interesting, understandable, but at the same time intrigue is preserved.

The author of success in creativity !!!

The Elemental Knights
1 month ago
Thank you for the review! View More

Shiksha_Jerath: The author doesn't have many grammatical errors which is a blessing tbh. I am tired of reading works which are peppered with grammatical errors.
Anyways, the author has a good grasp of the English language which makes for a good read where the reader doesn't have to keep on correcting the sentence in their own mind.
Though the paraphrasing could use a bit of work, it doesn't take away from the enjoyment of reading the story.
I would recommend shorter sentences and paragraphs.
All the best for your future endeavors, Author!

The Elemental Knights
1 month ago

Shiksha_Jerath: The author doesn't have many grammatical errors which is a blessing tbh. I am tired of reading works which are peppered with grammatical errors.
Anyways, the author has a good grasp of the English language which makes for a good read where the reader doesn't have to keep on correcting the sentence in their own mind.
Though the paraphrasing could use a bit of work, it doesn't take away from the enjoyment of reading the story.
I would recommend shorter sentences and paragraphs.
All the best for your future endeavors, Author!

The Elemental Knights
1 month ago
Reading Status: C5
It is very difficult to read this story. The grammar does need some work. However, as an archaeology student in college, this story's premise really does interest me. Finding lost cities is definitely high on the bucket-lists of most archaeologists. Though this is maybe a little closer to grave robbing than archaeology, it is still very interesting to me. View More
The Adventures of Treasure Hunters
1 month ago
Reading Status: C4
So far I have been enjoying this series. The grammar is very well done overall. An awkward sentence every now and then but that is about it. I found it a little hard to follow at the beginning but that didn't last long.
I look forward to reading the rest of this series. View More
Quick Transmigration - Counter Attack Of Various Characters
1 month ago
Thanks for the review! View More

BlackCarapace: I think your paragraph is too long. you can cut it into pieces.

how much word in the second chapter? It's very long chapter.

you can mix the tought of the main character, rather than using too much description.

and what's wrong with the main character? It's reincarnation story. He must be dumbfounded first with the situation rather than walking around like know everything.

The Elemental Knights
1 month ago
Thanks for the review! View More

may1st: Not bad! But bruh! The chapter is so long haha.

You need to break paragraph and also, the MC's reaction doesn't really fit for someone who suddenly find himself in an unknown land.

He's too cooperative with the situation and made it less exciting.

Those were my thought, others may be cool with it!

The story looks good and grammar is nice! Wish you all the best.

The Elemental Knights
1 month ago

may1st: Not bad! But bruh! The chapter is so long haha.

You need to break paragraph and also, the MC's reaction doesn't really fit for someone who suddenly find himself in an unknown land.

He's too cooperative with the situation and made it less exciting.

Those were my thought, others may be cool with it!

The story looks good and grammar is nice! Wish you all the best.

The Elemental Knights
1 month ago
Reading Status: C7
It seems pretty interesting so far, pacing seems a little fast to me but it’s still good. As for grammar, it’s not bad but watch your tenses. You switch between past tense and present tense a lot. Also be careful on switching between point of views. Third person omniscient is a pretty difficult way to write because it’s easy for the reader to get confused about who is thinking what. Despite its difficulty, when it’s done well it’s a very popular writing style. View More
I Can't Believe I Fell In Love With You
1 month ago

BlackCarapace: I think your paragraph is too long. you can cut it into pieces.

how much word in the second chapter? It's very long chapter.

you can mix the tought of the main character, rather than using too much description.

and what's wrong with the main character? It's reincarnation story. He must be dumbfounded first with the situation rather than walking around like know everything.

The Elemental Knights
1 month ago
Reading Status: C4
Overall pretty good. The story has a lot of potential. The dialogue is done pretty well. It’s still pretty early in the story to give a thorough review so I’ll probably update this after more chapters are out. Right now my only problem is the grammar, but for a non-English native speaker it’s not bad.

A tip for the author would be to decide on a tense, past or present, and to stick with it. I always find present tense more difficult but I’m a native speaker so I’m not sure what it’s like from another perspective. If you’re going with past tense than never use ‘is’ and ‘are’ outside of dialogue and direct thoughts, instead use ‘was’ and ‘were’. If you’re ever unsure on the past tense of a word than don’t be afraid to take the time to look it up. I find that usually quality is better even if it slows down the writing speed a bit. Present tense is a little more complex because there are times where you would use words like ‘was’ and ‘were’ outside of dialogue and direct thought. It’s still early in the series so you can experiment a little with past tense and present tense but eventually try and pick one and don’t change it. View More
Damn, I'm Wreaking Havoc
1 month ago
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