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You know this whole conflict would have gone better if he trained his destruction. I guess just any training would have been good. It's been forever since he actually developed his skill set.

ch 504 Chapter 457 Part 1

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My biggest problem here is that you aged everyone up but kept going as if they were still high schoolers. For example the powersacling issue from earlier, they had 4 more years to train their quirks. You also made UA function like a highschool despite it being a university. Honestly I think you only aged them up so it wouldn’t be weird to write about pairings. Basically you made everyone more grown without actually take the time to scale up the world around them.

ch 17 Under the Spotlight

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I just thought about it. The mc’s curse technique isn’t adaption rather it’s advanced curse manipulation. He uses patterns that make adaptations, this middle step means that adaptations isn’t actually his cursed technique . For example you know those cakes that look like real objects? Are those cakes or the object they look like. Same thing here, it isn’t adaptions but curse manipulation via patterns.

ch 42 Year 2

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This whole story has little actual story. Honestly don't even know Deku's personality rn.

ch 38 Chapter 38 : Contract

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but they don't though

ch 81 Meeting with Remaining Devils

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Okay I am still confused about if he perma adapts or not?

ch 20 First Assignment

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In people's defense, most novels are dropped by the time you hit chapter 10. Generally, if it starts off and things aren't going the way they like it's gonna end worse.

(A/N - "I'm tired of seeing it but this changes. He's five years old in this chapter. Just because he loses his phenomena now doesn't mean he will in the future. Chapter 12 is where things change. The reviews have been stupid talking about how its 'ruined'.)

Jujutsu Kaisen: Nah I'd Adapt

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Can we stop with this smoking nonsense?

ch 0 6 Chapter 5. The Kyoto Incident (Part 2)

JJK: Red Priest Pathway

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You know you can change canon.

ch 29 Chapter 29 : Test Of Courage

MHA : Adaptation

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It's not Webnovel, he copied it twice.

ch 95 [+]Chapter 92

Gacha In Marvel and the Multiverse

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Don't know what to write default to lemons.

ch 58 A Good Morning For A Spear Boy

Spear Boy Gets Creative (Cao Cao SI) DXD Multicross Story

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I'll speak for the author. No.

ch 55 Spear Boy Takes A Vacation

Spear Boy Gets Creative (Cao Cao SI) DXD Multicross Story

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That kid is so not Billy's son. I mean good on him for taking care of a little budding psycho.

ch 584 C584 Lovers Reunite

I'm Spider-Man (MCU)

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ch 12 Twelve

A Blind Man In Twilight

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I knew it would be funny!!! The moment he said pookie bear I knew it was gonna be hilarious!

ch 11 Eleven

A Blind Man In Twilight

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There is so much happening in the Star Wars universe at any given time that having a large harem would detract from the story.

ch 47 Chapter 45: The Corellian Conference Episode III

Star Wars: Scion Of The Sun

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I'm bummed that this chapter didn't pick up where the last chapter left off. I wanted to see their reactions to his regeneration. Also they for sure should have been able to tell if he was lying.

ch 10 Ten

A Blind Man In Twilight

Movies · outsidr

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He can turn is body into ice just like in one piece. It’s actually cool cuz he doesn’t age while in ice mode, in the comics he had stayed in ice mode before to live longer.

- Boon description: Ice Man is a mutant originating from Marvel with the ability of cryokinesis, you will acquire his mutant gene.

A Blind Man In Twilight

Movies · outsidr

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She’s not queen yet. They don’t even have land to call their own yet.

ch 17 Strive for Continuous Improvement rather then perfection...Unless your a Goddess.

Reborn as Hades In PJO

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No Harem. Please do not make this a harem novel. It makes no sense in this universe. You would have to dumb down your writing to make it work or just hand-wave away details. You can not make a harem work here without ignoring major plot issues, cultural understanding, and continuity.

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