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Tilted_Axis

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I am currently writing two novels: Evil Goddess System and The Stained Tower. The second is not on WebNovel.

2019-10-26 Joined United States

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Replied to WhatACliche
Hmm. In all honesty, I probably shouldn't respond with all the assumptions made against me, but I feel I should respond to reviews if I can, and I don't delete reviews like many novels on this site. At least your review doesn't contain any slurs; that's better than some comments, haha. Anyhow, I don't think you were expecting nor really wanted a response, so there's not much I can say. I frequently get comments like these. Either she shouldn't kill anyone, or she should kill everyone she comes across. Should have run, should have fought, should have hid, shouldn't have hid, should have gone left, but went right, jumped when she should have leaped, ducked when she should have dived, etc. The only thing I can really point out is your thinking seems shallow. A bit too black and white. Little to no thought beyond, that's bad, and that's good. All I can ask is if Eira were human and the human's vampires, would that affect your opinion. Sometimes I think I should have reversed things and made humans 'aliens' and Eira 'human.' There are novels like that, and people always cheer the human on. The real issue is everyone can relate to humans, that cashier or police officer, so they feel bad for them. I probably should have set the novel in a fantasy world to detach people a bit more, but I wanted to do it in a world similar to our own. No one can relate to a town guard of the evil empire, but many can to a police officer in a city. As for her actions, I understand why you might feel that way. Mary Sues and Gary Stus that always make the correct decision, things always go great for them, they lack negative emotion, everyone loves them, and they rarely, if ever, suffer consequences. These protagonists are extremely popular in web serials. There's nothing wrong with liking those kinds of protagonists. Web serials are an escape for many. They don't want to read one where things adhere to the real world, that's fine, I like those novels a lot myself. I'd like to point out that the MC does, in fact, say why they did something pretty much every time. Just because it doesn't work out doesn't mean it was the wrong decision. We'll never know if it was the wrong decision, it's possible it was the best decision, and there was no perfect decision. Because that's how reality works. Nearly every action produces positives and negatives. If every time you make a decision it results in only positives then I question your reality. Yet, even so, I still can't help but question how someone can read a novel titled 'Evil Goddess System' and not expect some morally questionable occurrences. Even leave a review citing it as the reason they don't like it. It's a bit baffling. Should I rename it, 'The Morally Questionable MC That Might Make You Reflect,' perhaps...? Sorry, that's not fair; I just don't know why people read novels with the villainous protagonist tag and then complain about the villainous protagonists.
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Replied to Derar
Really? It's very common in the U.S. Usually have the sink and then a door to the bathroom right next to it. That way, someone can use the mirror, brush their teeth, etc., while someone else is showering or doing their 'business.'

The bathroom has a large jacuzzi on its left side, a shower on its right, and obviously a toilet between the two. Like many hotel rooms, the sink is actually outside the bathroom with a divider dividing it and the bed.

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Evil Goddess System

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Replied to SmasherOWords
Fixed it. Thanks. I forgot to go back and check on it.
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Replied to Azurtha
Yeah, but Aponi didn't know that. Lol.

'They must have found some blood bags somewhere in the medical ward. How unfortunate I missed their first experience!'

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Evil Goddess System

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Replied to SmasherOWords
The night after yahtzee.

Pushing open the metal doors, a white hallway is revealed. It's similar to the upper floors' hallways, but this one has some more personal touches: a message board, some drink machines, a calendar with some special dates marked, among other such things.

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Evil Goddess System

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Replied to Nbhuo
Lol!

I cross my arms and think for a moment, "...I can run really fast. Especially when I don't have anyone else with me."

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Evil Goddess System

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Replied to Neilstone
Yeah, it’s an interesting addition. Criticism or not, as long as it’s civil, I enjoy reading and appreciate the comments!

Aponi steps forward, and in perfect Spanish, begins to speak to the woman. I stand awkwardly smiling at an older woman who walked out shortly after the Hispanic woman.

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Replied to Neilstone
If it's what I think you're referring to. She has a God Space. She just can't get to it. It's like if there was an elevator without power. Just because the elevator doesn't have power doesn't mean the floor it takes you to doesn't exist. Once someone (Ego) flips the breaker, restoring power, she can start moving back and forth as she wishes.

'Well, I guess that answers my Ego question. At least it isn't jumbled anymore, but this isn't much better. Still, this is the first task he's given me in a while, though. I'm curious what it's about, but the word that is there makes me think it probably has something to do with my God Space, which I can't get to without Ego. Also, it says failure is "not applicable", so I assume it isn't something pressing.'

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Evil Goddess System

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Replied to Neilstone
Funny you mention this. I saw a comment on a different website (not to do with the story) a few days back that mentioned something like this. It made me remember this chapter. :-|

"You trying to be a smartass? Why the hell are you calling me sir!?" he yells, poking out his chest, "This isn't the Army, and I'm not your boss!"

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Evil Goddess System

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