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the story is quite terrible to be honest, the story is boring and weird at the same time. hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhjhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

the entire story seems too convenient for the mc. The mc has literally faced no setbacks, opposition and struggle. The way he confidently dismisses more powerful people than him is frankly laughably absurd because we all know he ain't that smart and charismatic enough to not get burned by daemon or ruined by his own hubris.

From a dragon, he now has the ability to turn into a human. why make him a non human in the first place you could have just made him a powerful valyrian sorcerer in the beginning. no need for the whole nonsense you pulling off now.

this story feels like it was made by ai......................,...............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................,...............................................................,.......................................................................,. ................

Its another run of the mill op mc story. Terrible plot overall .............................................,........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

shameless plagiarism of the original work. stop trying to pass it off as your own fic here's the original by the way: https://m.fanfiction.net/s/13923897/1/Locke-s-Legion