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At the beginning there are some really funny parts but later on it gets a bit dull. And his setting as a shameless mage is rarely brought up. It seems like just a side note to the rest of the events. Also it is NOT complete. It ends abruptly and the major plot points aren't resolved. On that note, the plot is all over the place. I'm not sure who half of the people are. Like, some new character shows up and they're instantly friends? No background or depth. I think it had potential but failed on the execution. Still an enjoyable read but it could've been even better.

Laundry

1yr

Commented

He should have at least told him! So sad

ch 58 2.28 A Gift

Laundry

1yr

Commented

I'm kinda scared for this ending

ch 57 2.27 SSS Level

Laundry

1yr

Commented

The system's probably worried he'd want to stay in this world forever

[666: Because Host has been taking Theodore's blood regularly, the simulator comes up with another scenario to eliminate you, this overpowered character. Corruption is something that usually happens to low bred vampires, turning them deranged and the possibility of a pureblood getting it is very rare because they're almost immune to anything. They can only be corrupted when consumed by extreme negative emotions such as grief, rage or hatred. After that, purebloods usually choose a desolate place to pass their last days. Some even chose to self destruct and the power they hold is enough to cause a massive disaster. Actually, Raphael isn't capable of being corrupted otherwise he would already be gone for long but the world forces you so...yeah *nervous laugh*]

Villain Saving System (BL)

LGBT+ · delanasiwarka

Laundry

1yr

Commented

How did the original villan get a obsidian heart stone? To my limited knowledge, coal is not part of the obsidian making process...

ch 37 Diamant and Fausforus

Stone Mage: Revenge of the Villain System

Fantasy · Aries_Monx

Laundry

1yr

Commented

He needs to keep talking to this God lady and have her show him different runes lol

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Stone Mage: Revenge of the Villain System

Fantasy · Aries_Monx

Laundry

1yr

Commented

I can't wait to learn more about the war! Thanks for the chapter

ch 35 The Origin of the Snowflake Lady

Stone Mage: Revenge of the Villain System

Fantasy · Aries_Monx

Laundry

1yr

Commented

Maybe something will change my mind but, I can't think of a great reason to ever curse a child. Those gods are kinda cruel

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Stone Mage: Revenge of the Villain System

Fantasy · Aries_Monx

Laundry

1yr

Commented

I have a feeling his sister is going to become pretty powerful.

ch 34 The Goddess of Winter

Stone Mage: Revenge of the Villain System

Fantasy · Aries_Monx

Laundry

1yr

Commented

Thank goodness!

But somehow not his.

Stone Mage: Revenge of the Villain System

Fantasy · Aries_Monx

Laundry

1yr

Commented

I'd like to see him try haha

Jeffrey was so angry that he laughed. In the whole continent, the only person who dared to behave this atrociously to him was Theodore. Everyone scrambled to please him because he was the most capable vampire hunter. Who did Theodore think he was? Nothing more than a useless, arrogant brat who couldn't even do anything without his servant. Exactly where did he get such courage? Wasn't he scared that Jeffrey would be enraged and then maliciously directed a wave of vampires to his side? Or did he not fear vampires at all?