SpiritSiren

1mth

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I believe it is now time to point out the problems, perhaps flaws with this book. 1. Very misleading title. We have had barely 5 chapters with Luxs supposed "Girl friend." Now, this isn't necessarily bad if it was the only thing I disliked. However, 2.Too Large Scaled. we went from College Classroom to portals to whole galaxy. there is way too much going on. If we were going to get to this scale, it should have been set up at the beginning, or at least 200 chapters in when we are done on earth. And finally, 3. Power Scaling. The very beginning makes it appear that Lux is the highest power level attainable. Not "the highest potential to get there." This, for me, is the last straw. My hope was that through all this, Lux would be the "strongest" no matter what. Anyone or anything introduced can not compare to Lux. With this statement, Lux is literally middle, if not the bottom of the pack. This book had 3 interesting points going in: 1. The main character has a Dragon girl friend 2. It's on Earth, at a college, no less. 3. Lux is The Literally Strongest "God." Now, 60 chapters in, it has lost 2 of these with the last being nowhere in sight. it's hard to get excited to read more, knowing that it (I'm not saying this to be mean I'm saying this because I genuinely cared) has become generic. Stories with fantasy creatures and Abilitys are nothing new, so the application must be new. Having a very powerful protagonist is something new. It is on earth, and only the earth is new. Someone will probably say or state, "It gets better as you read." If it was free, I would give it the chance. Right now, however I can't justify to myself to spend money on it.

There were a lot of classes even after one surpassed God Class: Holy, Saint, Divinity, God King, Primal. Each was further divided by stages of Low, Middle, and High.

My Girlfriend is an Ice Dragon

Fantasy · Zefyr

SpiritSiren

2mth

Commented

Author, what the heck. does she love him or hate him?

If she hadn't driven him away last night, maybe he wouldn't have had an accident.

Pregnant Before the Royal Marriage

General · Gongsun Xiaoyue

SpiritSiren

2mth

Commented

Good Lord, She's been raped twice, and she's not even 16...

"She will be sixteen after the new year."

Pregnant Before the Royal Marriage

General · Gongsun Xiaoyue

SpiritSiren

2mth

Commented

Ah yes, the woman I treated disrespectfully to the point of not considering her worth more than a gardening tool, whom I got pregnant against her will and have also rapes doesn't like me... the worst part is that I've meet someone like this. utterly disgusting and shameless.

The person he liked did not like him back; this feeling was too terrible.

Pregnant Before the Royal Marriage

General · Gongsun Xiaoyue

SpiritSiren

2mth

Commented

I'll give the author credit. He/she is very good at showing a true hypocrite. in a sense, it's refreshing. Quite a few main characters when they commit crimes are treated as if nothing happened. not this one.

Recalling the hatred and anger on her face when they separated in the morning, the stark contrast deeply hurt Li Hongyuan's eyes.

Pregnant Before the Royal Marriage

General · Gongsun Xiaoyue

SpiritSiren

2mth

Commented

I'll admit I'm rather disappointed. this is such a cliche moment.

At this moment, Li Hongyuan galloped over on horseback and killed the assassin with a single sword strike.

Pregnant Before the Royal Marriage

General · Gongsun Xiaoyue

SpiritSiren

3mth

Commented

I've been hoping we would meet him soon. We have not heard from him in many chapters.

Who else if it was not Elder Yang, the Honorable Elder of the Immortal Sword Sect?!

Reincarnated As a Fox With System

Fantasy · godadi

SpiritSiren

3mth

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2 Words? Maybe in the original language.

"No." The two words, echoing in the stairwell, were filled with a manly decisiveness that was like a promise nailed to an unyielding spine.

SpiritSiren

3mth

Commented

For all intents and Purposes, this is a very good ending to the current arc.

ch 674 Chapter 674: Rejection!

Reincarnated As a Fox With System

Fantasy · godadi

SpiritSiren

4mth

Commented

Happy Thanksgiving, Sky Empress. I hope you are having a blessed time!

ch 203 An Important Prisoner

SpiritSiren

5mth

Commented

"SPOLIER AHEAD PROCEED WITH CAUTION"This is foreshadowing events that take place over 500 chapters from now. it's revealed that the Flying Dragon Special Forces had a traitor.

If she had an opportunity next time, she must ask her father what happened to the Flying Dragon Special Forces. Why were the people inside not as strong as she thought?

It's Not Easy to Be a Man After Travelling to the Future

Sci-fi · Madam Ru

SpiritSiren

5mth

Commented

This had me rolling 🤣

Tang Li Xue rolled her topaz blue eyes and thought: 'You really think that I am a protagonist in the movie or novel, huh?!'

Reincarnated As a Fox With System

Fantasy · godadi

SpiritSiren

6mth

Commented

Congratulations on having 200 hundred chapters. I hope you are finding it as fun to write these chapters as it is to read them. Please keep on writing.

ch 200 Hanyao Had Enough

SpiritSiren

8mth

Commented

I'm at a loss. What shall I say? What could I say? I'm very glad. I'm happy. I'm satisfied. I'm thankful for the long journey. My fellow readers, we are at the end of this adventure. Farewell Reli.

ch 1281 Epilogue

Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl?

Fantasy · Reili

SpiritSiren

9mth

Commented

4 square. A game with many rules, some that I despise, some that I love.

*Now. One of these two is the orphanage… but perhaps that's not what I need right now.* Kat took another look around and spotted something even better than the potential orphanages. Two blocks away there was what looked to be an empty lot. Though it wasn't so empty at the moment. A group of children had taken it over and split it up the best they could. One half looked to be a soccer match, while the other half was a group of four squares with one child each. They were passing a ball around, making sure it bounced once first. A small line of kids waiting next to it would cycle in when someone inevitably missed.

D.E.M.O.N.S: Getting Summoned Weekly isn't so Bad

Fantasy · Vongrak

SpiritSiren

10mth

Replied to rena_ok

The problems you have are not unwarranted. I, too, noticed the slight downgrade in writing quality. many events that seemed to be set up for large-scale fights (Shiro fighting the Greek pantheon)are over in a couple of chapters. The romance is ok to me due to how it's presented. However, I admit that Nian Tian was who I expected Shiro to Marry. I would not necessarily point fingers at Reli for this due to him admitting that because of his long absence and life needing him to focus on other things, he wanted to end the story in a good fashion for longtime readers of his book. So, while it is rushed in many sections, at the end of the day, we will have some questions answered and a decent conclusion. It's much better than it never ending at all, don't you think?

Once the door closed behind him, he could only let out a bitter smile before shaking his head.

Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl?

Fantasy · Reili

SpiritSiren

10mth

Commented

The relationship Is a little surprising. Loki often referred to Tang as his master in many previous chapters. I wonder when it changed its mind.

Do not look at Little Loki always obedient to Tang Li Xue, but it was all because Little Loki acknowledged Tang Li Xue as its close companion, not as its master!

Reincarnated As a Fox With System

Fantasy · godadi

SpiritSiren

11mth

Commented

I don't know if it's Mai, but I thought it was, and it had me rolling 🤣

Enuko still hadn't shown up as far as they knew, but just before Shizuka had finished eating the sound of a rooster crowing echoed throughout the compound. Shizuka paused food halfway to her mouth, and gained a look of confusion for a split second before bolting out of the room. Kat glanced at where her friend had left and quickly finished her juice before heading out after her. With Kat's speed it wasn't hard to catch up and she managed to see Shizuka bolted across the grounds at a giant rooster.

D.E.M.O.N.S: Getting Summoned Weekly isn't so Bad

Fantasy · Vongrak

SpiritSiren

1yr

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My interpretation of this comment is this: 1st Marshall Lan is not the spy that attempted to kill Ling Xiao or is attempting to kill Ling Lan. The 1st Marshall still knows the spy exists. he knows that if he let's Ling Lan go to the Battlefield, the spy will set up a trap to kill Ling Xiao. He does not prevent this knowing all that as a means to 1. expose the spy, 2.lesson Ling Xiaos military power. 3. by setting up this trap the twilight empire will fall because of them removing a God class operator from the Frontline 4. even if Ling Xiao does go into the trap his position is still stable. it is essentially a win-win situation for him no matter the outcome.

"This time, I lost. I can't be as heartless as you. However, if I come back alive, I'll make you pay the price for it, Great Marshal Lan."

It's Not Easy to Be a Man After Travelling to the Future

Sci-fi · Madam Ru

SpiritSiren

1yr

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As for a bit of context, at Ling Lans current level she would easily lose to an Ace Mecha operator. the mecha Operator she is fighting should in actuality be a Advanced Mecha Operator as his leader is said to be a Sub-Ace or Special class operator which will have 2 Advanced Mechs as wingmen. considering it was stated one would need Special class skills to beat Ling Xiaos record we can safely assume that's her level hence why she can defeat him.

Kotou felt that he could not afford to lose this face — he was the elite of the Empire, an ace operator — how could he lose to a common advanced mecha warrior of the enemy nation?

It's Not Easy to Be a Man After Travelling to the Future

Sci-fi · Madam Ru

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