Webnovel Author: Firehawk81 - Fanfic&Novel Collection

Firehawk81

2mth

Posted

author hasn't posted anything, and just promotes patreon.

Firehawk81

4mth

Replied to OneAuTumnLeaf

Thanks so much! I'm glad to hear what you have to say about the pacing, I'm trying to take this story a little slower and go over things in more detail, but I was worried some people may not enjoy the slow pace.

ch 0 2 System Explanation

Firehawk81

4mth

Replied to DiceXd

This world isn't all sunshine and rainbows, the mc just doesn't realise it yet.

I was by no means an expert on Pokemon, I couldn't battle competitively for the life of me and had fallen off of playing the games as much as I used to, only buying the latest one and then playing through it once before returning to other things. Still, that didn't mean I wasn't happy to be reborn in the pokemon world. In fact, I was ecstatic. A world of mystical creatures that you can command in battle and will also probably be the best friends you'll ever have? Sign me right up! It was probably one of the safest worlds you could be put into, only beat by shows for literal toddlers. Much better than some crazy shit like Worm or DC.

Pokemon Gacha System

Video Games · Firehawk81

Firehawk81

4mth

Replied to Guhoh

Thank you!

ch 0 1 The Beginning of the Beginning

Pokemon Gacha System

Video Games · Firehawk81

Firehawk81

1yr

Replied to BlackIight

I agree but to be honest if I was really going to drop it I would have never made another post, as its been so long since the last chapter, I wouldn't want to get people's hopes up. Although it will be a long while before I come back to this story as I want it to be great. I want to get more experience with my new story, because although I will put plenty of time in effort into my new story, this story is my brainchild and something I really enjoyed writing, and wish to make as good as possible.

ch 21 Going Foward

Pokemon Journey Towards Perfection

Anime & Comics · Firehawk81

Firehawk81

2yr

Posted

Havent read it but the description seems promising, mainly leaving this review to let you know that you should title your chapters, as its a real turnoff for readers when chapters aren't titled.

I Can Edit My Tamed Beasts

Urban · Krishna_Is_Here

Firehawk81

2yr

Replied to Gabriel_Cabral

Mou can't teleport others for the same reason the MC can't.

ch 20 Mishap

Pokemon Journey Towards Perfection

Anime & Comics · Firehawk81

Firehawk81

2yr

Replied to Narcox

Its would be the same reason mc can't teleport them. To teleport someone else you have to be able to access their psychic energy and "drag" it with yours which isn't possible due to their core completely blocking most peoples psychic energy's off. If the others were even just budding psychic's mc could teleport one other because he would also have to stop their momentum. Also Moy can't learn teleport. I have pokemon learn a lot of moves they normally can't, which you will be seeing soon with more battles coming up, but teleport is a very rare move in this universe that only a few pokemon can learn.

He would take the other passengers with him if he could, even if he didn't like them he wasn't heartless, but sadly just like how psychics couldn't mind read or control others if their core hadn't broken, neither could they teleport others.

Pokemon Journey Towards Perfection

Anime & Comics · Firehawk81

Firehawk81

2yr

Replied to Phantom_of_Death

It's mostly sent by boat, and then car to where it need to go. Sending Mail is very expensive. It can be sent by plane or pokemon if it neeeds to get there fast but thats usually for important documents. Theirs usually a few strong people who transport mail between nearby towns. Also I mentioned phones earlier and just thought I should clarify that they work only in the city you are currently in. Due to this they are actually pretty rare and usually used when info needs to be transfered fast between officals in the same city.

ch 20 Mishap

Pokemon Journey Towards Perfection

Anime & Comics · Firehawk81

Firehawk81

2yr

Replied to Tito_Falxus

I agree it was a little forced but what plane crash isn't completly random, couldn't think of a better way to make it happen.

ch 20 Mishap

Pokemon Journey Towards Perfection

Anime & Comics · Firehawk81

Firehawk81

2yr

Replied to Orthanos

The plan crashed due to engine failure. They don't have parachutes on commercial airlines do they? This plane moves at multiple machs. Inside is safe due to tech but if jumping out you would just explode. No they wouldn't have. Although Moy has enough psychic energy to therotically do so, she wouldn't be able to freely control it well enough and although Daniel is strong he still can't lift a plane, together they might have been able to, but the planes falling so fast they wouldn't be able to get a good enough "grip" before it just crashes.

ch 20 Mishap

Pokemon Journey Towards Perfection

Anime & Comics · Firehawk81

Firehawk81

2yr

Replied to DaoistwgQxZL

Plane failures aren't really known because it is just assumed the plane was attacked and destroyed. I explained why no piolit pokemon in another comment. Satelites aren't a thing for reasons that will be explained. Due to no effective long range communication people don't know a plane is missing untill its not showed up. Travelling by plane is actually really cheap due to the dangers of it.

ch 20 Mishap

Pokemon Journey Towards Perfection

Anime & Comics · Firehawk81

Firehawk81

2yr

Replied to Phantom_of_Death

The plane crashed due to engine failure. Piloits usually aren't trainers due to how increadibly complicated the aircraft are, they don't have time to raise anpokemon when learning to fly and after since their are so few piolits they are often busy flying. Side note the army man would have defintely had pokemon but they werent released because they wouldnt have been usefull.

ch 20 Mishap

Pokemon Journey Towards Perfection

Anime & Comics · Firehawk81

Firehawk81

2yr

Replied to Phantom_of_Death

The flight won't be long enough where they have to release their pokemon. The size will defintly draw attention.

ch 19 Saying Goodbye

Pokemon Journey Towards Perfection

Anime & Comics · Firehawk81

Firehawk81

2yr

Replied to RagingDrake

There now.

Coming out of his musings he was shocked as he saw the white light fade. In front of them was a massive rock crab Meta, about double the size as she was as a crustle. It was low to the ground and an almost pitch black color with two stubby claws, better for defending than pinching. It had an extra pair of legs than the usual Mantor with six in total, plus it was much more crab like, with a more round than long body.

Pokemon Journey Towards Perfection

Anime & Comics · Firehawk81

Firehawk81

2yr

Commented

Found this but completly forgot to put it here. The longer claw is like the shorter one.

Coming out of his musings he was shocked as he saw the white light fade. In front of them was a massive rock crab Meta, about double the size as she was as a crustle. It was low to the ground and an almost pitch black color with two stubby claws, better for defending than pinching. It had an extra pair of legs than the usual Mantor with six in total, plus it was much more crab like, with a more round than long body.