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GooseOverlord

GooseOverlord

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2019-11-08 Joined Canada

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Same here, just decided to read this today. Name is kinda off putting.

Attributes: [Fated], [Mark of Divinity], [Child of Shadows].

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I’ve been reading some of the negative reviews and seeing how poor they were I felt I needed to post a critique. I’ve not read any chapters in some time but I got in about 500 chapters, without spoiling anything the MC got on a boat against his will with a friend. I’ll start with the good, the stability of updates is superb, you don’t feel bad paying for priv chapters. Supporting an author that is dedicated to a stable release schedule is great. Most of the plot points felt like they made sense though I’m sure I likely missed some payoffs in later chapters. My issues mostly had to do with the MC and his interpersonal relationships, at least by where I had gotten the MC was wishy washy in his relationships with the opposite sex. From how things were going it almost seemed like your gotta catch’em all Pokémon style harems. Except it seemed like the female characters also pursued other people which is the issue you run into when characters are based on historical and folklore characters. The majority of readers on Webnovel Ive observed like to invest in a couple and if something interferes in this it almost feels like NTR. Whether or not it goes down that route, I don’t know as I’m not at the current chapter. A few other minor issues with some of the world building, the MC ends up using a unique method for his path to power. But it’s deemed as dangerous or weak by others. But the entity teaching him does so for a reason, it’s hard to believe that something like this would be unknown. But perhaps this is something explained later on.
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