Webnovel Author: UnsympatheticMoron - Fanfic&Novel Collection

UnsympatheticMoron

1yr

Posted

The story is part of a larger discourse on substance abuse and the hypermasculine culture of toxicity that has gripped society. Put in that context, with regard to the nuances of social issues pertaining to "working out" and "martial arts training", there is a clear indication of the author's brilliant understanding of the underpinnings of toxic masculinity and competition. Although it is written in the form of a fun story, it makes no claim of its own humourous nature, taking itself seriously and yet playing with these very complex elements in a very elegant and enjoyable manner. The expressions used, the phrases, indicatives and their qualifiers, all merge into an amalgamation that makes itself culturally relevant to the average reader on this site/app. This reveals the quality of the writing to be more than satisfactory. The author needs to work on three things: 1. Fleshing out the world and the characters. 2. Making the narrative more coherent and cogent. 3. Exploring themselves and their subconscious rhetorics through writing more consciously and critically. Engaging with these macrostructures of social experiences would be recommended. Insightful though the author is, they seem to lack the motivation to critically analyse their own biases and identify the framework of their discourse.

I Can Level Up By Staying Idle

Sci-fi · Kings Don't Steal

UnsympatheticMoron

1yr

Replied to Happy359879

Being proven right is its own reward. 😜

Now, the reason why this information is relevant is because I found myself in a situation where I couldn't trust any of my senses.

I Work A Nine To Five In The Shinobi World

Anime & Comics · UnsympatheticMoron

UnsympatheticMoron

1yr

Replied to SUBSCRIBE_MY_LIST

There are a lot of things about the System that I have yet to put on paper, besides the general idea. I need to ensure that while it remains a part of the story, it doesn't take away from the main plot, which is only halfway done. Besides, as of now, and quite a bit into the future, Sasori will be in the Village so there is no need to keep an eye on him. And what would be the point even if he wasn't?.

[Golden Tags: A Golden Tag is a single-use artefact that allows an Agent to tag an individual and track them regardless of distance and share their senses.]

I Work A Nine To Five In The Shinobi World

Anime & Comics · UnsympatheticMoron

UnsympatheticMoron

1yr

Replied to EternallyPsyduck

Deidara's best friend. 🤣

For the name...A Japanese name is an obvious choice in this world, it would be weird to be called Bob Senju or something, I mean for example if you are born on the planet Vegeta you have to be named after a vegetable, have some respect.

Living to the Fullest in the World of Naruto (COMPLETED)

Anime & Comics · Yasashiki

UnsympatheticMoron

1yr

Replied to Smithsonian86_

No. I don't even know what that is. When I want to come up with a name that sounds natural, I just use a randomizer.

[A-Rank Agent : Soga Masayuki received!]

I Work A Nine To Five In The Shinobi World

Anime & Comics · UnsympatheticMoron

UnsympatheticMoron

1yr

Replied to I_am_Baal

With Ryuichi handling the Bounties, it won't matter if the other side has more numbers, because their best Shinobi will be dead.

I stood in the smallest of the seven training areas that the Village had. Even though the Village was situated in the largest country, it was still the smallest of the Big Five. It's entire population summed up to around twenty-eight thousand and four-hundreds, thereabouts, of which only 320 were Shinobi. While it may seem like a lot, only around a hundred of them were capable of anything more than the Academy Three.

I Work A Nine To Five In The Shinobi World

Anime & Comics · UnsympatheticMoron

UnsympatheticMoron

1yr

Replied to Madam_Freya

Fair.

If one tree dares not even be taller than other trees, how can it become a giant tree?

Naruto: Gate Of All Dimensions

Anime & Comics · Flame_Spirit

UnsympatheticMoron

1yr

Replied to Hypnos

Does it? The only Clans we see with many members are in Konoha. We have little to no information about the clans of Suna, with the exception of 8 clans which, according to the wiki, aren't well-known outside the walls. "The few clans that exist inside of Suna are often small in number, and not well known outside the walls of the village." I don't think the total number of Shinobi would still exceed 500.

I stood in the smallest of the seven training areas that the Village had. Even though the Village was situated in the largest country, it was still the smallest of the Big Five. It's entire population summed up to around twenty-eight thousand and four-hundreds, thereabouts, of which only 320 were Shinobi. While it may seem like a lot, only around a hundred of them were capable of anything more than the Academy Three.

I Work A Nine To Five In The Shinobi World

Anime & Comics · UnsympatheticMoron

UnsympatheticMoron

1yr

Replied to I_am_Baal

Certainly not at this point, a few months after the Third War. And keep in mind that these figures are only the available details that Ryuichi has access to. More importantly, Iwa's whole strategy is commit a war of attrition. The whole Kannabi Bridge incident was the turning point of the war, because no matter how many Shinobi were sent, Iwa sent more. Suna is also the smallest of the Villages pre-Zabuza. It is also the poorest. It has so few people and so little land, that I am not comfortable citing numbers that would be a logistical nightmare.

I stood in the smallest of the seven training areas that the Village had. Even though the Village was situated in the largest country, it was still the smallest of the Big Five. It's entire population summed up to around twenty-eight thousand and four-hundreds, thereabouts, of which only 320 were Shinobi. While it may seem like a lot, only around a hundred of them were capable of anything more than the Academy Three.

I Work A Nine To Five In The Shinobi World

Anime & Comics · UnsympatheticMoron

UnsympatheticMoron

1yr

Replied to cheeki_breeki

I suppose, yeah. But I like to think of it as patriotism. There's still a lot of politics and worldbuilding that I want to explore, and these tiny details will play a part in that undertaking. Thanks for leaving a comment!

As I pondered about the Village and its current state, that being one of sever drought, I had a few ideas about how one could mitigate the crisis, but not only would that require time and energy, but also expertise that I did not possess. I was surprised at how quickly I had adapted to thinking that the Village was my own and that it's people were my family. It genuinely felt like I had a duty to them, perhaps a remnant of my previous "self".

I Work A Nine To Five In The Shinobi World

Anime & Comics · UnsympatheticMoron

UnsympatheticMoron

1yr

Commented

Don't know why Franz Lizst is here, but OK.

As the sun rose over the Liszt village, in the corner of his room, Shikamaru opened his tortured eyes once again. This time he was awake and completely through the whole process of assimilating the last pill.

Naruto: Shinobi System!

Anime & Comics · Raizeenn

UnsympatheticMoron

1yr

Commented

Aw, man, I can't wait to read the increasingly absurd justifications for why Soseki should know things. "Of course, in order to know how to stop people from dying, a Medical-nin like him ought to know Edo Tensei." "Hai. In order for a Medical-nin to truly understand the body on a cellular level and remain strong enough to handle the duress of war, he must learn Strength of a Thousand Seals."

Without waiting for Sōseki to speak, Asuma said calmly, "In order to be able to appear beside every injured person in time, it is reasonable for Sōseki who is a Medical-nin to know Space-Time Ninjutsu!"