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Manasong

Manasong

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Tired of fade-to-black sex scenes and prudes ruining fun and sexuality, I decided to write my own thing just to fill the need for a story that fills a very specific niche. I also heavily dislike how

2019-11-16 Joined Global

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Replied to TheHoblit
Fixed it, thanks mate.

ch 215 Steady Progress - Part 3

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Replied to Wellthatsnotgood
Ah, right. This is Hana talking and Aoi should be chirping happily in agreement.

"Well, yeah, dragons are kinda like that," Aoi chirps happily, "Though I think it's just that your 'Magic Power' is not high enough, even I wouldn't be able to contain him for long if I knew [Discharge]."

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I don't remember what happened over here...

"Well, yeah, dragons are kinda like that," Aoi chirps happily, "Though I think it's just that your 'Magic Power' is not high enough, even I wouldn't be able to contain him for long if I knew [Discharge]."

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Replied to Primordiales
Goddamn, what a rant. You even lose your train of thought sometimes, so I won't even try to answer this nightmare. Truth is, if I changed every single complaint you have, I'd end up with a stereotypical xianxia whose focus is solely on wish fulfillment. This isn't a "nice" story where characters only do pleasing actions and nothing really bad ever happens. If my story is boring, what you want is enough to make me drool. I'll address only three points. The first is that the MC isn't dumb, he's realistic, and because you can't accept that people have failings, you think he's "dumb." It's easy to understand what the "right" decision is, it's much, much harder to actually do it. You also didn't provide any examples about his "dumb decisions" so that's all I can say about it. Second, people change, the MC DOES change, but it's not easy, and it's not fast. People are adaptable, yes, he showed it how adaptable he is ever since the beginning, but you're not paying attention to it because all you want is to take charge of the story and have the character do what *you* want instead of just enjoying the story for what it is. It's really annoying when people can't differentiate a good story from a wish-fulfillment story, so at least I'm thankful Webnovel lets me answer to reviews like this. Third, THERE'S NO NTR. NO, THE GIRLS HAVING SEX WITH EACH OTHER ISN'T NTR, IT'S EXPECTED OF A GROUP MARRIAGE THAT PEOPLE LOVE EACH OTHER. IF YOU CAN'T ACCEPT THAT THE MC WON'T BE AT THE CENTER OF EVERY SINGLE SCENE, YOU'RE A MALE CHAUVINIST. IF YOU THINK THAT HANA IS A "MAN" BECAUSE SHE'S AGGRESSIVE. YOU'RE A MALE CHAUVINIST. IF YOU THINK THAT WOLF IS "BETA." YOU'RE A MALE CHAUVINIST. IF YOU COMPLAIN ABOUT WOLF HAVING SEX WITH PROSTITUTES, YOU'RE A MALE CHAUVINIST. IF YOU THINK THAT THE GIRLS HAVING SEX WITH OTHER WOMEN IS NTR. YOU'RE A MALE CHAUVINIST. IT ISN'T NTR, IT'S *SWINGING*, BLOODY HELL. PUT THIS INTO YOUR HEAD. NO MATTER WHAT YOU THINK, THIS STORY ISN'T NTR UNLESS YOU'RE A MALE CHAUVINIST.
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Replied to Xerstoren
Big lie, HE NEVER RAPED OR FORCED ANYONE TO DO ANYTHING WITHOUT THEIR CONSENT. Show me ONE scene where he FORCES someone to do something. None of the girls ever complained about fulfilling his sexual fantasies or anything like that, only about the bantering, and he respected their wishes. Have they ever said "no, I don't want it," or "no, stop it"? They haven't. Since they don't tell him to stop, he doesn't and push them further. You can't *force* someone to become gay, you can help them open their mind, but these things aren't anywhere near as malleable the way you're thinking they are. - MC *does* change, just keep in mind the slow pace of the story, which means that any realistic change will take *time* to happen. Nothing is instant. - Your complaints about Hana shows a bigoted view against female characters and some ignorance against group marriages. Surprise, when you marry more than one woman, and they're bisexual, they might develop feelings for each other. If you think that makes him a *cuck*, you have some very bigoted and patriarchal way of thinking that's really disgusting. Hana can't even act domineering in bed once in a while and suddenly he's a cuck? - Can't even have some teamwork and people rely on one another and now he's "too reliable on his own harem." Well, yes? Isn't that the *point* of a spouse? To have someone you can rely one. Not to mention they're a fellowship, a group who *kills monsters* now can't have tight bonds to one another and rely on each other for moral, mental, and physical support? - Honestly, I don't like saying this word because of how the well has been poisoned, but your views are very ***ist and patronizing.
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Replied to BigMeatNRG
wat

Oh, shit, I still haven't kissed her yet. What kind of gentleman am I if I got the order of things wrong? Now there's no way I'm kissing her like this.

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Replied to NSTube
No NTR

ch 182 Trials – Roxanne

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