Fallout_Armageddon

6mth

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my bad pimp didn't realize you've started rewriting chapters keep up the good work

Fallout_Armageddon

6mth

Posted

honestly it's surprisingly good I enjoy the dark, but loving Naruto. I would highly recommend proof reading or getting a beta tho other then that keep up the good work 👍

Fallout_Armageddon

11mth

Posted

yeah I'ma keep it 100 with absolutely anyone who tries this story. there are a ungodly amount of unneeded comments from the author within the story, grammar mistakes, and overall cringe. I'm not trying to diss you, but get rid of the extra comments, and emojis, use grammarly, and it might be a okay story, not good simply okay. once again not trying to diss it's just painful to read the interactions between characters is sub par, and the actual story itself is purely wish fulfillment which I'm fine with if not for the fact that you went about it the wrong way there's no buildup, or anything. there are ways to make a good wish fulfillment, but you leave much to be desired hell just read Madara in the avatar world perfect example of essentially a perfect wish fulfillment in a way tho it may be unfair to be comparing to that author considering how impeccable they are in writing.

Fallout_Armageddon

2yr

Posted

I'll put it this way first 17 chapters kinda okay, but cringey past that phenomenal keep up the good work mate..............................

[Rewrite in Progress] HP : A Wizard's Tale

Book&Literature · WiseOldFool

Fallout_Armageddon

2yr

Replied to Daggermouthx

I strongly agree with this statement still

- "He needs to learn that loving someone means knowing when to let them go.

Fallout_Armageddon

2yr

Commented

keep it up my man's im loving it

ch 0 3 Diagon Alley - Chapter 3

Fallout_Armageddon

2yr

Commented

another good chapter mate I look forward to more in the future

ch 0 2 Trial and Error - Chapter 2

Fallout_Armageddon

2yr

Posted

I think its genuinely solid so far good grammar, and funny enough I shall follow this .....................................................

I'm well aware of this, but you did not disagree with the image therefore I felt the need to ask, and you also technically didn't give an answer there either I do already know that they're not female in this because I've read further

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Anime & Comics · Kagethewriter

Fallout_Armageddon

2yr

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so is it a dude, or female in this?

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Anime & Comics · Kagethewriter

Fallout_Armageddon

2yr

Posted

this book caught me off guard with how in depth it was, and how while it does indeed take aspects of among us it also shows completely different aspects just going to show how talented the author is. I highly recommend it the reasonings in the book are solid, and plans well thought out, emotions, and characters feel real, and not like cardboard cut outs plus the MC isn't as dumb as a box of rocks give it a go if it hasn't hooked you in the first few it probably isn't for you I'd say read up till 15-20 before giving your verdict.

Imposter System

Sci-fi · Pill_Guy

Fallout_Armageddon

2yr

Commented

for those who aren't competent enough to check the chapter comments as well as the paragraph comments its in the chapter comments

(Image of the scythe in the description, how am I supposed to explain this?)

The Grimoire of Laplace

Anime & Comics · Heinzbeansscranner

Fallout_Armageddon

2yr

Replied to Hasan_Jabbarov

already read it

The Battle of One Move

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Eastern · Fast Food Restaurant

Fallout_Armageddon

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+1

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In Black Clover as a SpearSaint

Anime & Comics · An1x

Fallout_Armageddon

2yr

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I don't recall asking for your opinion 😂

ch 36 a trip home and a suprise

The Adventure of Fenrisúlfr

TV · Elzik

Fallout_Armageddon

2yr

Posted

I love the idea haven't read it, but the tobey maguire meme is worth the 5 star.............................................................

Bully Maguire in the multiverse

Anime & Comics · True_Helel

Fallout_Armageddon

2yr

Commented

personally would've gone with a standard military combat knife, or a karambit, but I respect the cyclone knife choice

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Anime & Comics · BlackSwordman1234

Fallout_Armageddon

2yr

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I apologise if this is nit-picking, but that's a chokuto it's not curved enough to be considered a katana

(A/N as you can tell i can barely describe anything so, here's a picture)

Game of Thrones: A sociopath (on hold, read my main story)

TV · Mr_No_One

Fallout_Armageddon

2yr

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"Lyanna Mormont, I don't want to have a wife that is afraid of fighting. I want someone fierce to spend my life with and women of house Mormont are warriors. And they are bannermen this would strengthen our ties in the north. " I explain, hopefully, he will accept that.

Reincarnated as Robb Stark with gifts

TV · Zero01010100

Fallout_Armageddon

2yr

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"Lyanna Mormont, I don't want to have a wife that is afraid of fighting. I want someone fierce to spend my life with and women of house Mormont are warriors. And they are bannermen this would strengthen our ties in the north. " I explain, hopefully, he will accept that.

Reincarnated as Robb Stark with gifts

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