lolinog_nori - Profile

so lets start this by saying that i definitely enjoyed the read, but while i like the idea and setting i still cabt really enjoy this book. I feel like the author has a lot of potential, but throws it away due to his/her misunderstanding of writing. Currently the characters all have interesting backgrounds deeply interconnected to the world they find themselves in, yet they have no persobality. The MC kind of does things without ever explaining his motives or feelings. Why did he want to go to the dragon capitol? Why did he reveal his true race? Did he even think about this decision? An enjoyable book needs to balance outside plot development with the thoughts and feelinfs of its main characters, and in my opinion this book severely lacks in the feelings department. I hope you can improve on this in the future:)