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Go far so good. In your description you said English is not your first language, so I had expected more spelling errors and odd uses of various difficult words. You show a solid mastery of English, and though the start is slow it is something I expect from system related novels. All in all, well done.

No problem Hoss. Many of us lost power here in Texas too. Make sure you got clean water and warm clothes and things will blow over soon enough.

Ayyy, I'm only a few chapters in and I'm glad to see a decent guy like Vorden as a side character. I hope he continues to be a good guy.

I really want Vorden to be a good guy. I always expect the hard betrayal with these stories tho.