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I like it from the start but... the konosuba arc take longer it became boring bith out Mc and I bet if it the konosuba over and then they get mission it became longer like they travel to naruto and then it becomes long. sorry for the grammar.

ok, it's not like I lost anything.

yeah, a kid, not learning English is idiocy what kind of thinking is that. IFY, I'm a grade 11 student studying my original language(which is 5) it's okay for me don't know how to write English at least I understand that. But for you instead of asking or finding what reason is, you just complain, and what is the purpose of review. BTW not learning English or grammar is can't affect my life. at least I'm rich so if I want to learn English I can just hire a tutor. (btw I'm not a spoiled kid)

I bet you are just some kid that knows how to translate because you acting like retard for some adult.

Good fanfic, good grammar, I praised the creativity of the author........... and also the translator..........................................

True, I read this a few days ago but dropped it because it's boring.

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Things I hate about in this fanfic -Drama -His laugh "fufufufu" -Gregory is known for caring for each other, so on. but they neglect him because he dont has the power of destruction. -I want him to focus on the DXD world but it takes 50+ chapters for Dxd to show up -he needs from his family but he never loves his family(vergo so on) - it's hard to read not from grammar -annoying that's all. this is the second fic that is skipped over 50+ chapters.

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Writing quality - 4.5(for me) or someone opposes that it's not that high, well I don't know to English but for me, it's readable it better than MTL. Character- 3 not much explanation about his appearance except for his blue eyes. World- 5 it's a crossover world with twilight and marvel but its 4 chapters so maybe there's more, I hope it's power rangers or harries potter, As long it's readable it okay for me