Webnovel Author: Dare43564 - Novel Collection

Dare43564

3yr

Replied to rebecca_ringdomsto

Dare43564

3yr

Posted

Your writing is exceptional good and well groomed. I like your story and the way your background is set. Good work on the book and i hope it goes far.

The League of Nightmares (Dropped)

Horror · ThePotatoKing

Dare43564

3yr

Commented

Your writing is exceptional well groomed.

I could feel the panic slowly building up inside of me, threatening to burst forth and overwhelm in a moment's time, but in the brief respite before the terror set in me, I was still in a state of shock and adrenaline that allowed me to stay in a hyper-conscious. I could hear a car come to a stop outside the building which meant I would have company soon.

The League of Nightmares (Dropped)

Horror · ThePotatoKing

Dare43564

3yr

Posted

At first i thought you los me but it slowly got more interesting. Necromacy is a hard topic to cover if you don't have the knowledge about it. You book is a definite recommend.[img=recommend]

FullMoon Necromancer

Fantasy · Liviing

Dare43564

3yr

Posted

First of all this book is interesting. I like it very much. The strong female lead is one of the things that attracted me to the book. Your grammar is also good

The Queer Emperor's Wife Is A Little Too Daring!

Fantasy · _AiRen_

Dare43564

3yr

Posted

The story is intriguing and you are quite the master of word play. I appreciate how you have quite the depth of description and understanding of the world you created.

The Final Act

Fantasy · Saeven07

Dare43564

3yr

Commented

They let weaklings use them - not used. Change that please.

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The Final Act

Fantasy · Saeven07

Dare43564

3yr

Commented

There are no creatures more wicked than humans. Truly we are a havoc to deal with.

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The Final Act

Fantasy · Saeven07

Dare43564

3yr

Commented

A wise decision to side track the idea. Clever creature they are.

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The Final Act

Fantasy · Saeven07

Dare43564

3yr

Commented

Although most authors and educationally advanced ones ,might understand the paragraph, other who don't have this qualifications can not understand it. A book should be in an intermediate level to allow readers to follow through.

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The Final Act

Fantasy · Saeven07

Dare43564

3yr

Commented

Well hell, you now have my attention.

Tradition was what started peace long ago. But it was also the reason why war began against beings- vampires versus themselves, versus humans, and then witches; and finally, magic against mortals.

The Final Act

Fantasy · Saeven07

Dare43564

3yr

Replied to xiaohai_23

Thank you for pointing that out.

Now came a series of a worried Chris.Not even his daily does of alcohol or women would calm his wits down.Not only was he stress by the threat of destruction that was heading their pack's way but also about Helix's recent behaviour. Helix had shamelessly ignored all of his duties. All he did was drink whiskey and sit next to the boy. And honestly, Chris held zero hope that the boy would survive.The chances of a human surviving the bite was second to none.Even were-dire wolves would die. Thirteen men and women had after all died trying to be his beta.That too they were were-dire wolves. And by his I mean Chris' dear readers.