Webnovel Author: TheKonnan17 - Fanfic Collection

TheKonnan17

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I'm still here lurking.

ch 121 QUICK SURVEY

TheKonnan17

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To a new book I go.

"Greetings, young denizens of Earth. My name is Seraph, and this is the Domain of God."

TheKonnan17

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The space currency is known as credits. It's mentioned in the manga but hardly ever talked about in the anime.

ch 18 Planet Earth

TheKonnan17

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When he said Esper Saki K popped into my head first.

ch 17 Esper Training

TheKonnan17

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ch 34 Chapter 33:- Fuyumi's Rage

TheKonnan17

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A story about the kin slayer. I expect greatness from someone who is on the same level as Virgil in the art of screwing over their family.

ch 0 1 Chapter 01 - Tainted Soul

TheKonnan17

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From everything I have read, it is primarily a description with no real character progress. The story has six chapters that should be in the auxiliary instead of volume 1, while when the story finally does start and the character makes his wishes you would think he would wish for something that would allow for him to train or do anything while he was trapped inside of his fathers stomach. There is a large chunk of the story to where everything the mc does is in the background and all through out the war it reads as if nothing important is happening as you feel no attachment to the character. I believe the author should continue writing but should also write from a perspective of the character they are trying to talk about. There is hardly any dialogue with 20 or so chapters and nearly everything is description.

TheKonnan17

2mth

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TYFTC

ch 0 4 Naruto : Uchiha : Chapter 4

TheKonnan17

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Shadow clone is a B rank jutsu not a forbidden jutsu. Multi shadow clone jutsu is a forbidden jutsu

ch 38 Katio Chapter 38

TheKonnan17

3mth

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Harem

ch 26 Spider man - part 4

In Marvel with Greatest System

Movies · Boring_World

TheKonnan17

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『Ding!!! The system will now begin the process of sending Naruto Uzumaki back to the past.』

TheKonnan17

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'No, Wait! That's….!!' Tsunade wanted to stop Adam but she was unable to as he took her first kiss while his tongue entered her mouth leaving her completely defenseless to his attack.

Unheard Wishes: A Tale of Desires

Anime & Comics · Over_The_Moon69

TheKonnan17

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Names are wrong in the chapter

ch 118 CHAPTER 118 : ENEL AND LEARNING HAKI

Naruto The Untouchable (Completed)

Anime & Comics · kamidemond

TheKonnan17

4mth

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Where did Chopper come from? The plot while is growing.

ch 111 CHAPTER 111 : LEAVING ARABASTA

Naruto The Untouchable (Completed)

Anime & Comics · kamidemond

I am the Bone of my Skillet, Steel is my Pan and Fire is my Oven, I have cooked over a thousand meals, Unknown to Fast Food, nor known to Instant Meals, Have withstood heat to cook many dishes, Yet this mouth will never eat anything, So as I cook, Unlimited Food Works

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TheKonnan17

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Pronouns need to be fixed in the chapter because it reads poorly otherwise

ch 20 Farewell

Seimeigakure: The Hidden Village of Life

Anime & Comics · Cadenadeaventuras

TheKonnan17

6mth

Replied to SovereignMonarchJr

What is this from?

After they ate, night came to Orario and Sora was in his room, he was thinking really hard on how to train Ais on showing more her emotions and the only way he could think off was to make her experience various feelings such as pleasure...