Webnovel Author: Ghostblood - Novel Collection

You're not offending me in any way at all. Because I know the story, it's hard to tell how much is need to explain without saying too much, too soon. I felt the "Richard and Ala" thing didn't need much to talk about. For the thing, it aside a story, and a lot of people don't like them so I said as much as I needed too and then moved on. As I was doing before, it helps to know an outside view of what is and isn't confusing, that way when I go back and fix stuff, I will know what to add if needed. Sorry, I took a long time to get back to you, I didn't see the notifications for this. Feel free to message me if you have more questions.