Webnovel Author: Diamond_Air - Novel Collection

Diamond_Air

1yr

Commented

XD Nice chap! I'm curious as to what the antagonist's actions would bring! Also there's just a tiny problem with the tenses and punctuations. It seems to switch between past and present. If it's past, it should remain that way throughout and vice versa. I'm sure you can make it better so keep it up XD. Was a nice read.

ch 0 1 1 The Chase [Edited]

Marco wanted to curse Holden's previous seven generations out loud, but his throat can't produce any more sound as only 'agh-agk-ahk' sound that came out. His energy started running out, and his struggle became non-existence. His vision slowly fades to black starting from the corner of his eyes. All he can feel at the moment was the sensation of his body falling to the river underneath the bridge as Holden released his grip.

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Sci-fi · ButtNakedMan

Diamond_Air

1yr

Commented

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Sci-fi · ButtNakedMan

Diamond_Air

1yr

Commented

Suddenly, a gunshot rang from on top of the building, hitting Marco's body.

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Sci-fi · ButtNakedMan

Diamond_Air

1yr

Commented

*WEE-oww WEE-oww.

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Sci-fi · ButtNakedMan

Diamond_Air

1yr

Replied to kuhaku_sora

No prob

The Goblin's Feast

Fantasy · kuhaku_sora

Diamond_Air

1yr

Posted

Might be a bit too early for a detailed review buh meh XD. I can do that later on! Right now, all I wanna say is I l o v e every piece of this novel. Never read any goblin-related book so this is my first ^^ Narration is great and the grammar is spot on. Keep it up author! You're doing good!

The Goblin's Feast

Fantasy · kuhaku_sora

Diamond_Air

1yr

Replied to SmasherOWords

I mean who wouldn't want awesome nature powers!

The Spider Queen

Sci-fi Romance · HopelesslyRomantic

Diamond_Air

1yr

Replied to kuhaku_sora

Thanks for the review XD

Reincarnated: The legendary moon sword

Sci-fi · Diamond_Air

Diamond_Air

1yr

Replied to SmasherOWords

XD

[Mommy stop looking at those ugly creatures!]

The Spider Queen

Sci-fi Romance · HopelesslyRomantic

Diamond_Air

1yr

Posted

Aight! I love this book! *leaves* Jk XD, This book's amazing. Great plot so far and interesting start. Makes me wonder though... Maybe I shouldn't help them oldies anymore. *sips tea* Anyway, novel's great with only minor grammar errors. Keep up the good work!

My Last Hunt

Magical Realism · _Sha

Diamond_Air

1yr

Commented

Healthy Eating?

The Spider Queen

Sci-fi Romance · HopelesslyRomantic

Diamond_Air

1yr

Replied to Lord_Zarel

Give this man a medal

Curse The Bullsh*t Curse For The Circumstances Or Fight Back

My Last Hunt

Magical Realism · _Sha

Diamond_Air

1yr

Commented

Ohoho, noice! XD *Moves on to the next chapter*

ch 0 1 Prologue

My Last Hunt

Magical Realism · _Sha

Diamond_Air

1yr

Replied to Blanket

indeed

But just this once he supposed nothing could go wrong, so he asked.

My Last Hunt

Magical Realism · _Sha

Diamond_Air

1yr

Commented

Pfft, I have a bad feeling about this

He was never that popular in helping the needy, nor did he have any such plans for the future life. But for this once, he asked someone what was it that he could help with?