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The writer only put shit on the protagonist, dugu bo was going to kill tang san with poison just for beating his granddaughter and kicked shrek out of the imperial academy, honest shit, the author described him as an irrational person who only knows how to hit the weak and his granddaughter, and what the hell he wouldn't have won but it would be a more lasting and spent battle towards both sides, since those tang san power ups could also be said to have helped his enemies, without that yet bibi dong would not complete the rakasha tests because he could not detach himself from his feelings for the Master, qian renxue would not have caught the dark evil god tiger, among others but sending only shit without taking into account everything about how it is in the novel is tired no they think and only send blushing shit for beauty of women who literally see that kind of thing every day, little character development with instant harem with no logic or personality less than a touch, rewrite of m shit in the world, powers out of the ass that I know are governed by idiots, hypocrites who claim to be better while doing stupid things the same and worse for example punishment list is a fic that has all that shit, and the worst lack of real plot, in mlt You will see many, they have good concepts and ideas but the writing and the novels themselves are tiresome, just reading it seems to be an inserted car of someone who just wants to compete to see who has the biggest, not all of them are like that but if someone from there reads this is completely true and you know it, I know it, you know it, I'm just a reader whose head hurts and I was hoping to read something while the next chapter of No otaku with harem system arrives
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I'll be direct I like your stories but only the beginning then you fuck up what's already been done with a meaningless and stupid change like with the wesley twin the protagonist shows character to build and forms it in a less sensitive way or with stunted emotions after a chapter you make a pointless hot-headed imbecile I know behaves totally different maybe you don't see it that way but if you read your other story you also do the same building a good story and then urinating cliché, generic and confusing content with the story taking totally different directions, this It's not to insult or anything, I like the two stories, well at least the beginnings of both and how they were progressing, but if you follow the most fucked-up story, you put it in a sense of destroying the plot and characters already built for something that doesn't do it missing as in the story of dark sin there was no reason to add the reincarnation thing so you could use it as another harry potter story, elf from sa ngre as a reference but when I read how he was a reincarnation with powers without need very soon and knowledge of the future I lost the courage to read since you had formed something good with dark without at first thinking that we would see the protagonist discover his past explore Harry's world potter for answers while he improves and evolves his personality, with the harem part there are at least thousands of harem stories that take the shit out in one way or change the personality of the protagonist so that it is to the liking of each member of the harem at all times, but if you wanted to build it well it's just writing a lot of arcs, chapters, rotating characters, giving them growth, etc, my final rating would be the first 10 chapters 4.8/5 and the rest 2.7/5
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I'll be direct I like your stories but only the beginning then you fuck up what's already been done with a meaningless and stupid change like with the wesley twin the protagonist shows character to build and forms it in a less sensitive way or with stunted emotions after a chapter you make a pointless hot-headed imbecile I know behaves totally different maybe you don't see it that way but if you read your other story you also do the same building a good story and then urinating cliché, generic and confusing content with the story taking totally different directions, this It's not to insult or anything, I like the two stories, well at least the beginnings of both and how they were progressing, but if you follow the most fucked-up story, you put it in a sense of destroying the plot and characters already built for something that doesn't do it missing as in the story of dark sin there was no reason to add the reincarnation thing so you could use it as another harry potter story, elf from sa ngre as a reference but when I read how he was a reincarnation with powers without need very soon and knowledge of the future I lost the courage to read since you had formed something good with dark without at first thinking that we would see the protagonist discover his past explore Harry's world potter for answers while he improves and evolves his personality, with the harem part there are at least thousands of harem stories that take the shit out in one way or change the personality of the protagonist so that it is to the liking of each member of the harem at all times, but if you wanted to build it well it's just writing a lot of arcs, chapters, rotating characters, giving them growth, etc, my final rating would be the first 10 chapters 4.8/5 and the rest 2.7/5
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Por avor qué el próximo arco sea el llendo a againts of gods quiero ver que le hace a yun che

"Me duele admitir que he conocido a muchos cultivadores con la misma mentalidad que este elfo, idiotas que siempre están cortejando la muerte…" – Diosa del Sistema suspiró con amargura.

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